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Reviewer: LINZ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 - 11:21 pm Title: Proposal

OMG, i almost cried when i read the part about her mother....now i cant stop smiling cuz of the proposal...even though i know its gonna cuase some shit cuz of the preganancy.....i love it!

Reviewer: Linz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 - 11:15 pm Title: Date

wow, im loving it and hating Riley, its perfect :)

Author's Response: Making you hate Riley. My personal mission for all Spuffy fans :P Thank you!

Reviewer: Linz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 - 11:09 pm Title: Everything's Changed / Less Than a Minute

i am so fucken intrigued

Author's Response: ^_^

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 - 04:50 pm Title: Troubled Sleep

I was just wondering about the rings because they have a bit of a history.. but they don't have to throw them away ;-)
Seems as if Buffy is feeling more guilty then she acknowledged to herself (because she has trouble to sleep).
Looking forward if Buffy will wake up before Spike is back :)
And sorry to hear about your computer troubles. I hope you'll find a solution soon.

Author's Response: Yeah uh… I think my subconscious is more attuned to this fic than my waking conscious is, lol… thank you for reviewing, sweet. I really look forward to hearing from you :o)

Reviewer: Bekah Leigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 - 11:39 am Title: Troubled Sleep

lol, hey there. sry for not reviewing sooner. i suck lol. this was an awesome chapter. my first thoughts were "aww!" and, well... "aww!" again lol. it sounds like they could start forming a routine if they're not careful :-P love it!

oh, and, thanks for making me want coffee and a pastry at breakfast time lol. how's a girl gonna diet with her best friend tempting her in his fics?? lol :-P

Author's Response: Well, I still don’t see why you even want to diet, it’s not like you need it, you’re all perfect as you are :o) Yes, I know, don’t mean much coming from the charming sweet talker, thinks-all-women-are-beautiful that is me, but still… ;)
Thanks for the review, ducks

Reviewer: Sara M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 - 07:41 am Title: Interlude

I really love your story and also I'm sorry to hear about your personal troubles. I'll keep you in my prayers. As for the story, it's interesting getting this played out from a male perspective. I'm trying to write the male perspective in some of the chapters in my story and it's hard to really know if I'm getting it right or not. I think most of the love scenes are written by women and tend to write Spike as from a woman's perspective, which is only natural. The male point of view is very interesting here. Anyway, hope you can continue updating frequently as I really do love to read this one. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Author's Response: Thank you, and… *Thank you* we are not quite over them, but we are moving on.

As for the fic, I don’t know just how much of the male perspective you’re getting in this, because as much as I am a male (and do so enjoy being one too much) there’s still a part of me that, at least subconsciously, remembers that most of the readers of SR and fanfic in general, are women. My masculinity does make it’s presence known every once in a while, in a few words or actions of Spike, so the perspective is still there, I’m just not sure as to what extent. And I do agree, women do write Spike differently. In a lot of fics I’ve seen him portrayed as the perfect man (and there is a lot of us, men, that do try to be… good, to and for our women, I myself am trying to make peace for the mistakes of my past), but I don’t see that as being realistic, as I’m sure my Buffy is also not very true to character as I can only observe and not be in the mind of a woman :o)

And, I don’t think you need to worry, love. I am reading your fic and your writing of Spike (and Buffy, and the rest of the characters) is brilliant and intensely gratifying.

Thank you for letting me know your thoughts. It means a lot to me to know what you think.

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 - 03:05 am Title: Troubled Sleep

Hmmm... Buffy's guilt is manifesting itself through troubled sleep. Wonder how long that will last? You painted quite a lonely picture of her making her way out to the living area just to be near him. (Made me want to overcome my night owl tendencies and go snuggle with the hubby.)

I hope your technical difficulties are soon resolved, for your own sanity. I understand your frustration . Nearly lost two year's worth of pictures when our hard drive crashed a couple months ago. Yikes! - lesson learned... backup, backup, backup!)

Great update!

Author's Response: Oh, there’s been many a fic lost to the ickyness of computers and unreliable hd’s, lol.. I’ve learned to use memory cards instead :P

Yeah, she is feeling kinda lonely, and I think she will be for a while. And the guilt is going to be there until the truth comes out, and even so after as well. Thank you for the review, sweet. Means a lot :o)

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 11:07 pm Title: Troubled Sleep

I just reread some parts of your story ... you have a very nice/clean style of writing. This is such a well thought out and wonderfully penned story. As a reader it is easy to feel as though one is witnessing these two first hand ... such a vivid picture you have painted. Can't (but will) wait for the next installment of your tale...

Author's Response: Uh, wow… there’s not much I can think to say but, thank you, sincerely, for such awesome reviews. They do make my day. Thank you.

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 09:09 pm Title: Troubled Sleep

Just found your story and read from the beginning. Love it ... great premise and writing!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 07:27 pm Title: Troubled Sleep

Sweet.. But shame on Buffy from telling the Whole Truth..

Author's Response: She should tell him, shouldn’t she? And she will, my love. But we have to work it up to that be patient though I doubt it’ll be that long for it to come out 6-7 chapters or so.. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 06:33 pm Title: Troubled Sleep

more please

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: reader Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: Troubled Sleep

Buffy should walk in on him "having a quick wank" one morning.

Author's Response: I’ll keep that in mind. Might make for some sweet Spuffy lovin’ or a funny scene :P thank you for the review!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 04:52 pm Title: Troubled Sleep

Oooh, a snog worthy manip? I'm gonna hold you to that...lol! This chapter was very sweet, it didn't even need any dialogue. Grr, to the stupid computer. Can I kick it for you? Still loving the story=)

Author's Response: Kick away, babe. It’s being nice to me right now and hopefully it’ll continue to do so till I get the new software cd from my ISP for the new one. And if I remember correctly, for there to be a snog worthy manip, I was to be hearing some sweet talk :P Thanks, love!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 - 04:27 pm Title: Troubled Sleep

So I wonder if she will be agble to hold onto the lie.
More please.

Author's Response: She might be, I haven’t decided yet :P Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Kellie Mulder Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 08:51 pm Title: Rings

Oooh how sweet!! They kept the rings.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, sweet! :)

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 03:26 am Title: Rings

Oh my goodness, that was too damn sweet! You really got me with that one! No words were necessary, but they both had the same idea in mind with the rings. I think I got a little choked up - for some reason the kissing of the fingertips was the best part. You're forgiven for withholding the reunion kiss that we are all waiting for!

I bet they didn't think they would face a test so soon. Spike's reactions were priceless. And Gunn is quite the observant guy.

Loving the story. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the kiss on her fingertips, as it was a last minute addtion, 'cause what I had before didn't sound right :)

Gunn is an observant bloke, but I'd like to think he helped them from having to face an awkward situation later :P

Thanks for reviewing. Means a lot to know you like!

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 - 05:25 pm Title: Rings

Liked the chapter and the story! Look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: readergirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 - 01:32 pm Title: Rings

awwwww that was sweet

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 - 09:00 am Title: Rings

Charles Gunn... so that was indeed the first test for their story. And Gunn noticed the lack of the rings. Ah Buffy wears hers near her heart. Oh how he loved the thought. I wonder if they'll buy new ones too. The old ones won't look good if they wear them daily, his bosses and pals will notice too. Loved the exchange of the rings. :)

Author's Response: Have a little faith on a bloke, lol.. They will get new rings :P Thank you for the review. Glad you like! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 - 05:40 am Title: New Proposals

Spike's not much better.. need a family to get a promotion...

Author's Response: And thus their lives entwine *lol*

Thank you for the reviews. Means a lot you'd take a bit of time to let me know your thoughts.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 - 05:38 am Title: Commencement

Shame Buffy...

Author's Response: ^_^

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 - 05:25 am Title: Everything's Changed / Less Than a Minute

Interested... pregnant?

Author's Response: Yup, she is :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 - 05:02 am Title: Rings

more please

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cassi can see Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 - 02:06 am Title: Rings

sweet exchange of rings :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Bekah Leigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 - 01:58 am Title: Rings

I loved the nervous stutters in the scene with Gunn :-P And these sweet scenes with Spike and Buffy keep making me all mushy and happy lol. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Mushy, happy best friend is of the good. Means I get happy girl. Me like :P Thanks!

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