

Date: 01/04/2013 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting premise, but this could use a really talented beta; the writing needs a lot of work to make this a good read. Has potential, though!

Date: 02/22/2007 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol, 'it's not on my neck'. Nice job with the dialogue. Great story, the fact about Pike was great. Lol. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thanks I don't know why I chose to write it, just something that popped in my head on day. I have the 2nd one done as well, just need to write the third and it has been 3 months figured if I posted then I would be forced too.

Date: 02/22/2007 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
You really need a beta. The grammar issues are too distracting.
Author's Response: I sent this off A month ago as it say at the top of the fic and gave up waiting as she is busy once I get it back I can change it.

Date: 02/22/2007 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Um thats got the grey matter thinking. I always wondered if the hymen would heal in the slayer. Figured it might but you never know ....I'm glad that Spike mated with Buffy, and that they will tell the other Scoobies too as for the Willow Tara para's thatr was also nicely written...Well done very nicely presented piece....
Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for the other suggestion from your email I went back and changed it, to AO

Date: 02/22/2007 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
good update
Author's Response: Thanks.