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Date: 07/30/2007 - 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 6

Enjoyed the chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: more is coming. Thanks.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 6

Poor Buffy. She must be in a tremendous amount of grief. Hopefully Spike can get her out of it and she'll get better soon!! I hope we get some Spuffy alone even if she's not exactly talking or anything. I like it when Spike takes care of Buffy. It's always so loving. Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: nope, going to bring her out of it, if you want one that he takes care of her in, check out Mate's pain lots of Buffy and Spike alone time in that. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

Not a good birthday but hopefully the next ones will be better (especially with a new baby).

Author's Response: Are any of her birthdays good Thanks

Reviewer: LuvsBitch Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 6

It gets better and better each time i read !! xx I knw you have written chapt 7 cause we have just been talking about it :) but keep going !!Luv Charlie xx

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, yep I have a 7 and a 8 now.

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 - 08:20 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm bias you know so here's your cookies.....SmileyCentral.comPhoto Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket

Author's Response: I love cookies. Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2007 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter! I hope Spike brings Buffy to England so Giles can treat her. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I am sure someone will, but it will not be who you expect.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 5

I hope Giles can help her; but going to bring everybody to England? I wonder how Spike will manage that. Well he has the money to pay for everything.

Author's Response: Thank you, I think everything will work out in the end.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 09:36 am Title: Chapter 5

Poor Buffy. Is she aware of her environment or stuck in her mind with grief or something? I'm so glad Spike's back. Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: as anyone is that is that depressed, she is slightly ware, she can hear the voices just lost in her own grief at the moment to pull out of it. If she wasn't pregnant they could give her meds. I believe Spike will pull her out of it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 09:29 am Title: Chapter 5

It's looking good Honey hugs and all that Jeanette.....SmileyCentral.com for the SmileyCentral.com

Author's Response: Oh I love them.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter 5

loved the protective loving spike you have written about. like the way Faith is a hard nosed cow, but cares deeply for buffy
just one critasism. the whole of the story was underlined making it dificault to read

Author's Response: I will have to check that, thanks for your review

Reviewer: melb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 4

pretty please update soon please

im hanging on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next

major fan of this

Author's Response: Don't worry more will come.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

Why didn't Spike keep in touch with Buffy?? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I would assume he did but with Buffy having a change in such a short amount of time, he might not have realized she moved. I know that is bad, I was thinking the very same thing and I am the author. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 4

Things got bad for Buffy indeed. I didn't think she was the type to fall into depression. Was Spike gone so long that all these things happened? Guess so. Wonder if she'll snap out of it.

Author's Response: Hopefully, it would not be good if she didn't Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

Poor Buffy. I hope Spike helps her out!

Author's Response: He will in a way, give her time. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: bloody_hell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter 4

hey...i know a lot of people find it weird and "icky" to be going out with someone 10 years older than them, but trust me it happens. my bf is 10 years older than me and it doesn't bother us one bit. really liked this cahpter and i can't wait for the next one!!

Author's Response: I know some people it bothers too. My husband is 5 years older than me, Not 10 but can be bad enough. Thanks

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 09:36 am Title: Chapter 4

Well, I am glad that Spike is back. And that he knows what is going on with her. But I am so sorry that she had to go through this at all. I am just keeping my fingers crossed that his presence will help her.

Author's Response: Yes I think he will help some, but don't look for it to be instant. Thanks

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 07:45 am Title: Chapter 4

Okay I think the A/N covered the fact this is AU fantasy so hopeful you shouldn't get anymore werid Reviewer saying the characters aren't behaving as they should...That said I love this fic but I'm bias as you know, Cookie of the Spike shaped kind ...Catch you later Jeanette....SmileyCentral.com

Author's Response: oh Spike shaped cookies yes please. Thanks.

Reviewer: Cissi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 06:30 am Title: Chapter 4

Yey I was right, Buffy's pregnant :) Really enjoyed this chapter. I feel so sad about Buffy... a lot happened to her in such short time. I hope they'll be able to help her!

Author's Response: Oh I think they will, watch out for more familiar people to show up shortly. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: 00 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2007 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 3

Just recently found your fic, drawn by the interesting summary. But unfortunately I feel the need to tell you that I simply can not read any more. There is lovely potential here, but it is failing to show itself. The tense you use is I think very hard to follow, there is very little character development thus far, and I don’t FEEL the characters, if this makes sense. The only way I know its spike speaking is because his name is used.

The fic is, I think, lacking in detail - specific character movements, mannerisms and attention to background detail is vital in making a fic enjoyable for the reader, but I’m just not seeing it in this wip.

Can I suggest you get a beta? Or re-watch some Buffy episodes to gain back some feeling to the characters in your fic. I hope you see this review as helpful, not insulting, and that you continue to better your writing.


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Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

i wonder how this will end... Exciting story :)
Looking forward for your update!

Author's Response: more soon i hope.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

I just love this! Thank you so much for sharing it!

Author's Response: your welcome

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great start! :)

Author's Response: thank you

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Date: 07/09/2007 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

I think people at the hotel would be more afraid of Wiliams real name then Spike, hee.

Author's Response: They might be but, were order not to let anyone know who exactly he is, but when doing resevations in which why does the owner really need, Spike would not look good, so that is why he used his real name. Thanks

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

Personally I don't think Buffy is too young for Spike. Though it's kind of funny how Buffy's friends think that; they probably think 25 is middle age. Nice that Buffy and Faith danced.

Author's Response: I am glad to hear you say that, cause alot of people do believe that she is quite young for him. Thanks.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

Looks like Spike and Buffy should have talked a bit before they had sex. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yes but I think it was a moment thing, if he didn't get called back, they would have never have done it when they did. Thanks for the reviews.

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