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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

Now we have to wait: Both if Buffy got pregnant or not and if she finds out who Spike really is in the meantime. Wonder what will happen.

Author's Response: yep it is a waiting game. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: fabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

i love this story i hope you update soon pleaaase.

Author's Response: every Monday thanks.

Reviewer: Cancan227 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Now we're getting to the good stuff.

Author's Response: yep the good stuff but he has left, how long till he comes back.

Reviewer: Cissi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

Seems like I missed chapter 2 too, shame on me, but... well, it was pretty good when I think about it since I had two chapters to read instead of one :) enjoyed them both! I'm very curious now... Wonder what's gonna happen next, if Buffy gets pregnant or not... Lovley update! /Cissi

Author's Response: Well you will have to wait and see.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 3

Liked it a lot. Very sweet. :)

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 11:04 am Title: Chapter 3

Wow...is she on the pill? Will she find out about William's status before he comes back? Can't wait to find out!

Author's Response: Guess you will have to wait and see, but I am jumping it ahead a few months next chapter.

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:16 am Title: Chapter 3

Wonderful chapter as always ....Keep up the good work Jeanette.....SmileyCentral.com

Author's Response: yep I need to write chap 6 soon.

Reviewer: melb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 07:49 am Title: Chapter 3

oh please update soon please

this is soooooo good

Author's Response: Next week, but thanks.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2007 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

Buffy got definitely Spike's attention :)

Author's Response: That she did.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

What a way to meet! Im very excited to read the next one so please update soon!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is really great! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Cancan227 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hot!!!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is an interesting premise, but... you need some help in your writing. No offense, but this style is rather difficult to read. There is no flow, no emotion, there is no sympathy for characters, everything sounds forced and fake.

PLEASE look for a beta that can help you with content as well as grammar/spelling. This story has a lot of promise, but it needs a lot of help.

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Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow...wouldn't have thought of that lil scene with Faith. Seems like this Buffy is pretty sensuous! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Yeah I liked that scene with Faith, it just kind of wrote itself, after all they were trying to make old bye eyes jealous. Thanks

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow...just saw this. William seems a lil grumpy and such. Much different than what I'm used to for his character. I have a feeling this'll get really interesting!

Author's Response: Not grumpy, He is the boss, so ordering is what he does, he also doesn't put up with nosense.

Reviewer: melissa b Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 11:51 am Title: Chapter 2

please update soon this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good

Author's Response: Monday is Millionaire Mondays. Sorry, you will just have to check out the other 2 fics as well. Mates Wednesdays and Daddy Friday's Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 10:56 am Title: Chapter 2

love the chapter.

You ask me what ages for buffy and spike that i was thinking in the last chapter. I like teen spike like 16 or so. Buffy like in her late 20s or even 30s. There are many stories where Spike is like his late 30s and buffy is just about 16 or so.

I just like older buffy better. But I don't find too many of those.

And yes in the show spike is like 100 years older than buffy. But that is why there is AU stories.

I happen to like older men myself. So, that is probably why I like to read the opposite in stories. Where buffy is older and spike is a young pup. : )

can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Ok you got me thinking, so I was thinking of doing a 19 year old Spike and a 32 year old Buffy, I will try and start it after I am done Millionaire. Thank you

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 2

That was sweet with the notes, I liked it. :) Good chap, looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Yeah they were.

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 08:05 am Title: Chapter 2

Okay just droppping Cookies off because you know I'm bias as your proof reader? Hey so here they are....

SmileyCentral.com

Author's Response: Thanks, I loved chocolate chip.

Reviewer: Ar-Feiniel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 06:35 am Title: Chapter 2

I like the idea of this story, but the fact that you use present tense in dialogues (for example: "Buffy questions", "Gunn points out" or "she informs"), drives me crazy. It's seriously distracting, especially when you start mixing it with past tense. You should stick just to one tense (preferbly - past, cos most writers do).

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Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting start, can't wait to read more of this! :)

Author's Response: Thanks more should come soon.

Reviewer: Cissi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved it, can't wait to see where you're going with this! Please update soon :)

Author's Response: More should come soon.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like the start; looking forward to what you'll write :)

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter 1

really interesting start, loved it. looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thanks more should be soon.

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