Lovi this fic, I normally adore Fred but with Wesley not Spike , she's Wes girl, so i'm not feelin sorry for her. Maybe now she'll leave him like she should and leave the field open for Buffy. More please and soon.

Great story ! I I started reading it yesterday and finally finished today.
Love the plot and can't wait to see what happens next!.

I'll probably not be reading anymore because of how Spike is depicted here. He clearly does not love Buffy and probably never did. He obviously has moved on and will probably only leave Fred because he thinks she is cheating on him. I would prefer Buffy to move on to someone worthy of her and her love and not waste anymore time with this asshole. He obviously has a LOT of growing up to do if he could treat Buffy the way he has been. Sad when the "girl" is more mature than the older man. Anyways, I loved your writing and this story is not for me anymore but I did love the beginning. I'm looking forward to other stories by you. You might want to put a "Spike/Other warning on these chapters. I know my girlfriend was upset that she read them not knowing Spike was going to be with someone else.

Author's Response: I'm sorry your feel that way about spike. I was sitting here thinking have I made him unredeemable? I hope not!! He loves her--honestly. This story was born out of me being tired of watching Buffy being so nasty to him on the show. I just wanted her to chasing him. And she will-- and I'm sorry he may not make it easy for her. but again--He loves her!! and thanks for the spike/other thing, I'm going to change that right now

OH I hope everything works out for Buffy and Spike as well as Fred, if she is sleeping with Spike, then I hope she lets him go. And if they are living together why would they not leave together.

MOre please.

Author's Response: Cuz he wanted to stay and talk to Buffy!! he loves her you know.

I was dying for a new chapter, thank you so much, I loved it!!

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NOOOOOOOO!!!!!
omg please please update sooooon
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You develop your story in a fairly rapid pace even though it spans years, but still you are able to keep up this beautifully flowing narrative. I really got swept up with it so that I didn't have to sort of stop and have a conscious thought of "okay, we are moving forward in time" as is the case with some fics. All seems to happen very naturally in this story. I think it's also got to do with the beautiful way you describe the pain, the sadness and other angsty feelings. You don't make a number out of those feelings, but still they come through - in some wonderful fairytale kind of way.

No smiley face for me. It's all a bit sad. There are so many questions that need answering, please update soon and put me out of my misery - literally.

Started reading this on B?S diaries a long time ago , glad your back to finish it . What does he mean by "Are You happy now" ? does he mean it sarcastically or really wants to know if she's happy. I think he's really smug in this chapter and I don't like Fred here at all, can she go soon?, also it doesn't seem like Spike every really loved Buffy from how he's acting . I hope Spike's attitude improves.

I don't know about his any more I am glad she told her mother.

Good maybe her and Spike will work something out.

Oh I feel so sorry for her.

So Riley didn't think they broke up.