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Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1: Before you could say 'No'

You can't stop here :(. I want to know more of this story... I love pirate stories! And yours is really good so far! Please update soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks sweetheart. I promise to update soon...I HATE waiting Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter 1: Before you could say 'No'

What a cliffhanger!!!! This is bril! Please... please can you update asap.

Author's Response: Thank you m'love. I cant stand cliffhangers myself so being the nice little writer I am...I promise to update before the week is up! Noel Darling

Reviewer: Katkin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2007 - 04:57 am Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

Ohhhhhh!!!!!!

I think I should stop writing now, you've put me to shame!

Going to get my friend to read this, she will love it!

Please continue writing sweetie because from the looks of this chapter you my dear lady are a master wordsmith!

xxx Looking forward to the next! xxx

Author's Response: AHHHH! You liked it? I am soooo so so glad! I have added your page to my favorites I plan on reading your stuff after I am done with the fic. I am currently reading. You really are to kind. I am not a master by any means but Im glad you have enjoyed it thus far. Your Friend, Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

Spike + pirate...pretty much you can't go wrong. Well, you can, but so far I'm intrigued. Wish I was in Spike's debt. (I'm sure we all would.) :-)

Author's Response: There will be LOTS of salty goodness believe me you! Glad your liking is so far! Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: MyBlondieBear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 - 01:49 pm Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

I like it... Update soon!

Author's Response: thank you! I will be updating every tuesday. mrs.darling

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 - 12:59 pm Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

Mmmm an unusual activity for a lady, playing poker :) That how they met... I wondered now it would happen.
Ah being in Spike's debt (that was him, right?) sucks.. seems as if Elizabeth is going on a journey.
I like the start, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: How could being in Spikes debt every be a bad thing???? you know he's going to have her do some very naughty things. ;-) Mrs Darling

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 08:02 pm Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

This is a very good chapter , ok you've caught me , i want to read more, hope u update soon and frequently.

Author's Response: Thank you! I will be updating every Tues! SO keep checking back! ;-) Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: spikeslilchit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 07:43 pm Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

Sounds fantastic so far! I can't wait til the next chapter! ~Hugs~

Author's Response: aw (hugs) Mrs Darling

Reviewer: PJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 05:07 pm Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

Oooh intruiging start. You had me at the summary, lol.
Looking forward to the update.

Author's Response: The summary was my absolute favorite part to write! Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: PAri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 02:56 pm Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

Needs to be spaced, edit the story and go the the end of the sentence/paragraph and then hit the enter key, and that should do it, otherwise to will need to add
after ever sentence/paragraph.

Author's Response: You are my hero! I could kiss you! Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: Elora Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 02:41 pm Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

I didn't want to start reading a new WIP, but the summary intrigued me. I love pirate stories.

Very good start, but just a problem : I won't be able to wait till tuesday !


Author's Response: Thank you! I know what you mean I hate starting unfinished stories because you never know it the author is really comited or not but I promise I am! You wont be sorry ;-) PS Good things come to those who wait. Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 09:51 am Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

I love historical dramas, and this one looks really interesting. Great start! :D

Author's Response: Thanks MidnightGirl I cant believe I actually posted something. My husband talked me into it. Im glad everyone likes it so far you have no idea how stoked I am! Mrs. Darling

Author's Response: Thanks MidnightGirl I cant believe I actually posted something. My husband talked me into it. Im glad everyone likes it so far you have no idea how stoked I am! Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 09:04 am Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

Oh you better update in a flash coz this is very interesting! From just your summary alone, i already assumed that this will be a very good story and i am not dissapointed. I am hooked!

Author's Response: lol I will probably update every Tues. so now you have something to look forward too! But this will not be one of those poor, sad, little stories that get posted and than never worked on again. Promise ;-) Mrs. Dalring

Reviewer: kay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 08:03 am Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

ok, this looks really good so far, i think im hooked
more please :D


Author's Response: Thank you! lol Everyones being so nice! Thank you all! Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 07:12 am Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

Brilliant summary caught my interest. Original and exciting chapter. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I think the summery was my favorite thing to write. I kept thinking....'If this was a preview for a movie what would the guy with the really low sexy voice say?' Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: Casey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 06:54 am Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

I love it so please update.

Author's Response: Thank you luv, I will be updating every Tues. Mrs. Dalring

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 06:51 am Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

Really good beginning and I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Me either! ;-) Mrs. Dalring

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 06:30 am Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

the summary to this story was very intriguing and after reading the first chapter you've managed to capture my attention more...


great start so far:) just a tip....you might want to put gaps in between the paragraph's it makes it a bit easier to read.....plus makes the chapter's look longer than they actually are:)

i cant wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: thanks so much for your review. I was thinking the same exact thing about it being a little hard to read. So if anyone knows how to space it...let me know. Because I have tried. Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 03:38 am Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

brilliant start. looking forward to more

Author's Response: I am floored. I dont even know how to thank everyone! Mrs. Darling

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 02:01 am Title: Prolog: Worlds Collide

Intresting start, I liked how richly it was written. 1 suggestion, withouth any spaces it is kind of hard to read...but other then that good..

Author's Response: Do you by any chance know how to space it? Mrs. Darling

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