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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2007 - 07:19 am Title: Chapter 6: And he let her

Poor Buffy! The molesting scene was positively terrifying, thank goodness Spike came to the rescue. This incident could really be a turning point for the couple to see each other in a different light. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks hun! I am not in any way shape or form into vilonce of that sort but as you said...it could be a turning point ;-) Thanks for the review~Noel D

Reviewer: Shez Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2007 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter 6: And he let her

Fantastic chapter, I'm glad Spike came in time to save her, and the guilt she felt over stabbing him really added to her character. look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I didnt want to make her heartless. There are so many ficts out there now where she doesnt have a heart and shes just mean and cold and thats not how I view her...my rant for the day ;-) Noel D

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2007 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 6: And he let her

OMG that poor girl, thank god he got there when he did, that was horrible. How's he going to keep her aboard ship now, with those crazed wolfs. Great story looking forward to more.

Author's Response: It wasnt the funnest chapter to write...lets just say that. `Noel D

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2007 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 6: And he let her

interesting chapter.....i wonder what will happen next between buffy and spike.....great chapter:) cant wait for the next update

Author's Response: thanks hun! Its coming soon I promise ~NoelD

Reviewer: Spikeslilchit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2007 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: And he let her

Hope you had a fantastic vacation! (but glad to see you back!) I've missed the updates! Can't wait for the next one! Really interested in seeing how Spike reacts to Buffy (even after she stabbed him)! ~Hugs~

Author's Response: Vaction was wonderful. We needed a get away and the udates will be regular again! ~Noel D

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2007 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 6: And he let her

Saved by the man she just killed..

Enjoying.

Author's Response: well almost killed lol thanks hun~Noel D

Reviewer: nicky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2007 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 6: And he let her

I am glad for an update, this has a lot of potential i cant wait to see how it all pns out, i love he idea of spike being a pirate. Update soon.

Author's Response: I am glad to get the next chapter out there. It took me forever though. There is still much much more to come I mean they havent even left the dock yet ~Noel D

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2007 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 6: And he let her

That last part was hard to read. Poor Buffy. I hope Spike makes those men pay dearly. I hope you had a wonderful vacation. I look forward to all your updates.

Author's Response: Thanks Francine my vacation was amazing! I almost wish I could go back and do it all over again. (sigh) but Im glad to be back, really, truly. The last part had to be hard to read because (heres a little spoiler) what I have planned next would have been to extreme if it hadnt been as brutal as it was

Reviewer: lovebites Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2007 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

Please please write more...this is once of my favorite fictions and its unique for once lol.

Author's Response: Thank you sweetheart! I promise more updates soon! I should have another up before tues. of next week. ~Noel D

Reviewer: saradane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

How dare you go somwhere!? Sit at your computer with a chain that is attached. Want more now! I'm getting really annoyed with my favourite authors having lives. Stop it!

Author's Response: lol I know how you feel! I am not only an author but a reader and darn it do I hate it when my WIP arent updated~Noel D

Reviewer: Katkin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

Ohhhhhh!!!!!! You're going away, and you leave it like that????? So not fair!

Loved the chap hun! thank you! xxx

Author's Response: I know I missed you though! lol well I have a suprise! A new chappy all for you! ~Noel D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

Have fun :)
Loved the dialog between Buffy and Giles; that was fun.

Author's Response: thanks sweetheart!

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 05:32 am Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

Great dialogue in this chapter. Will Giles have to sow him up? Eeew! Poor William. I will be up on tenterhooks until you can get the next chapter out.

Author's Response: I know our poor sweet william~ Noel D

Reviewer: nicky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 04:36 am Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

great story, looking forward to an update soon, cant wait to see how this one goes.

Author's Response: thank you hun Im glad your enjoying it! ~Noel D

Reviewer: zoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

“Nice aim.”

“Thank you.” She said with a mixture of shock and awe. “I practice…”

lol great dialog, can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: lol thanks that was the first thing that came to me in the very beg. on the chapter so i pretty much wrote everything else around that little piece of dialoge there. I could just see Giles saying that to her and Buffy being all 'well thanks I practice.' aw the twisted inside mind of a crazed writer spuffy fan.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

Have a good time in Colorado , Honey , i'm a loyal reader and will be waiting for yur next update I can't wait to see what happens when Spike wakes up, but don't let him cut her hair.

Author's Response: Okay heres a spoiler. He's not going to I swear. I mean whats Spike without his little goldilocks! and thank u for you support! Im sure me and my hunny will have a blast!~ Noel

Reviewer: J0 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

HUmm , what was that reaction to being called a lady by Giles? What had this poor kid been through living with that father of hers? can't wait to find out. Wait where are u going?

Author's Response: I am going to Colorado with my hubby for week. We're going to a conference. Nothing terribly exciting but we arent supoesed to bring anything electronic with us so my loverly little laptop will have to stay home :-( ~Noel

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

hehe i loved it :) yay lol


cant wait for the next chapter:):)

Author's Response: next week m'dear it isnt to terribly far away ;-) ~Noel

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

Tough girl... Buffy .

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Shez Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

Very good chapter. I like that buffy is still concerned about him. Can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon.

Author's Response: I will update the second I get home next week! ~Noel

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

Enjoyed that and I'll be waiting for your next update with anticipation.

Author's Response: thank you m'luv! It is a comin ;-) ~Noel

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2007 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 5: Oh Dear

I'm glad Giles is fixing up Spike, it's good know he wasn't seriously injured.
Great Buffy/Giles interaction by the way, loved how ol' Ripper sneaked a peak at Buffy. ;-) Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Thank you! You actually left a review! I'm not so much into the "wow great chapter. cant wait till the next update" I mean its nice but I love when people actually talk to me about something that happened in the chapter. theres never any room to grow if all you ever get is praise. Love you M.G.! ~Noel D.

Reviewer: nicky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

update soon love the story, i think she did right stabbing him, just hope the consequences are not too bad for her though!


Author's Response: lol ooo maybe he'll handcuff her to the bed and spank her! ooo naughty naughty. Wheres my husband I need to rape that man ~Noel

Reviewer: Katkin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

Ohhh!!!!

I wonder who Spike was writting about in the diary... hmm... Dru or Cecily???

lol, you think it's amusing that Buffy doesn't know his name yet?

Ok, it's kind of funny!

Oh, and wont the other shipmate know that Buffy is female? or is that for another chapter? you know, Spike finds out that she's having to ward off advances and ends up having to keep her in his room? Hmmm...

Oh, go Buffy... stab the love of your life! .. Yep, definately the Buffy we know! lol Thanks hunni! xxx

Author's Response: HEY Stop guessing my story! lol Your to smart for your own good or I guess Im predicatable lol one of the two...I had to get Buffyin there with something pointy you know that girl and her weapons Sheesh! ~NOel

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

Well! I didn't see that coming. Poor Spike I hope the wound isn't too deep. Can't wait for update.

Author's Response: I know. I do not like seeing that man injured. But maybe buffy can nurse ;-) him back to health ~Noel

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