[Report This]Date: 10/03/2012 - 11:17 am Title: One shot....
Very hot, but it actually could have used more slash action!
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2008 - 01:36 am Title: One shot....
That was HOT! oh my! Thanks for writing it and sharing it!
[Report This]Date: 12/13/2007 - 02:07 pm Title: One shot....
Nice twist with Angel in the fold instead of all broody and morose. Good fun with the smut as well. Don't let the reviews on spelling and grammar get you down - the most important part is to write with feeling - and you do.
Author's Response: Thank you ...I pulled this fic and reposted after encouragement for our webmistress Pari..I hoped I sorted most of the gliches out with help from various sources...After I was sort of left high and dry without a beta due to her new work commitments. It was a totally new venture for me having Angel in the mix and not at path I tend too follow as I normally kill him off very early in my stories or have him totally in Angelus mode...I do write from the heart and I'm glad you could see the love and joy my writing brings me... Again Thank you for your review and I hope that one day you reading my other simple offerings....
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 04:37 pm Title: One shot....
Holy shit! That was wow, i have no words for that =)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review...No-one else seemed to like this fic tho left reviews so yours made me smile.
Date: 09/13/2007 - 01:49 am Title: One shot....
Hope you're up for some constructive criticism! I commented last time you posted this fic about all the mistakes in the first paragraph alone - now it seems you've gone and changed bits of the story, but the sheer volume of problems in terms of your grammar, punctuation and sentence structure remain. It's great that you're writing and wanting to share your work, but really, it's not that hard to use spell check or even to simply read your work over, even just once, after you've written it. I find it hard to believe you've read this through after writing, what with the very blatant and easily correctable problems in the first couple of sentences alone. Please, please, please be aware of things like this! Your story may be really good, but most readers won't have a clue because the poor writing quality turns them away before they can get far with their reading!
Author's Response: Trying to Be Helful...Could you please email me I'm getting really down over this fic.... My Beta has just walked on me because of Real life comittment and as you can see I'm struggling...
[Report This]Date: 09/12/2007 - 08:40 pm Title: One shot....
You really need a beta. In the first paragraph there are at least 2 run-on sentences, a punctuation problem and a failure to use a possessive. I'm sorry to say that I just couldn't get past it. A good beta would be helpful.
Author's Response: Know I need a beta mine's just told me she has too many real life committents to continue... Hopeful I've sort The problems you so kindly told me about if not please feel free to email an tell me were I've gone wrong...Spike's Mrs
[Report This]Date: 09/12/2007 - 12:53 pm Title: One shot....
Love it, I see you went with the changes i added.
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Author's Response: Thank you for your review yes I went ith changes honey I completely forgot about the undies too...Now I better get back to my multi tasking....Jeanette....a href="http://photobucket.com" target="_blank">
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