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Reviewer: Nichole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2007 - 08:09 am Title: chapter 2

I just read both chapters and i really like yourstory. i am waiting on the edge of my seat to see what Buffy remembered and what the rest of their memories are. til the next chapter..Happy Writing...N

Author's Response: writing may be happy but the next couple of chapters aren't :) thanks for the review

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2007 - 10:23 pm Title: chapter 2

Uh-oh, I definitely didn't expect something so big to be blocking their memories of Spike. And your response to my review seemed quite ominous. I'm enjoying the story very much and I'm very looking forward to reading more of it.

Author's Response: Buffy didn't expect something so big either, they just thought Giles was having a bad day. hope you enjoy the rest and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2007 - 08:13 pm Title: chapter 2

Well that was mysterious, wonder who put up this spell, was it Riley , is he lying about everything? Hope Lorne can help.update soon really liking this post nfa fics are my fave.

Author's Response: glad you are enjoying. won't tell you who the wizard is but i hope you enjoy the twists

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2007 - 05:26 pm Title: chapter 2

I forgot the name of the firm. But very easy to remember if you think of it. :)
A good thing for Buffy; Willow said Spike is still connected to the ring ('he became'). Somebody took their memories? And most of it were memories regarding Spike. Well somebody was very systematic. Good they were able to get them free again. But if it wouldn't have for the news of Spike's death they wouldn't notice it (hadn't tried to break the spell). Not many ones are powerful enough to do such a spell. I wonder what Buffy was remembering that upset her. A marriage (human or vampire)? A prophesied pregnancy? So many possibilities... I wonder what it was. Looking forward to find out :)

Author's Response: name of the firm i biogem...they are going to find there are more memories that have been surpressed Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2007 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, about halfway through the first chapter I had to stop, so I thought I would drop you a line to let you know. Your writing style is not bad but I think the characterizations are a little off. I don't usually mind a liitle alt reality but this is supposed to be cannon at this point. It seemed a little odd, might just be me though, that Buffy would call Riley "Finn" and to have Giles call Buffy a child seemed a bit off as well. I hope the story turns out the way you hope and I might check it out again once you have more of it up.

Author's Response: never said it was cannon:) thanks for taking the time to review. i hope you enjoy it if you pick it back up.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2007 - 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Not quite sure about Riley's benevolent attitude to Spike, but everything else certainly rings true in this intriguing opening chapter. I can certainly believe Giles' attitude after the events in season 7, although I did think he acted completely out of character in that whole story arc. Interested to see where you're taking this...

Author's Response: Riley's behaviour will be explained. promise. and as for giles, Crucitanium? band candy? ethan rayne? Giles wasn't always a fusty librarian. thanks for the review. more soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm late again but I was away today so I still have to catch up. ~ Riley really sounds nice (helpful) here. And reading that they told Buffy that Spike hat died again had me awake :)
And he died as a hero. Neat, having made a ring for Buffy. [You can decide to get that here too but the process had to be made out of Germany, there's a firm that does that.] And yet it hurt Buffy that Spike didn't tell her that he was alive. Giles knew and thought of what's best of his slayer. *raises hand* I think it's time to join the Hate-Giles-Fanclub now. What an idiot.
Buffy wanted a protection, sealing spell? Good thought. Especially because Willow noticed that it was harder than it should have been. I don't think this is normal for Willow to have problems? *thinking the worst* Rather then Giles did something.

Author's Response: the firm that does diamonds is called biogems and it takes about 9 months, so i used a bit of poetic licence more soon glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1

I gotta tell yu, there were a lot of characters on the show I loved to hate ,the biggest were Angel, Giles , Xander and Finn. I like Finn in this one, and hope he becomes a staunch ally to Buffy and friend to Spike, because I know, and yu know ,yur bringing him back. Just once I would love for Buffy to beat the crap out of Giles, well in fics like this one where he's a creep anyway. I'm liking this story and hope yu do have Spike become godfather to Finn's baby. I'll be looking for updates.

Author's Response: will aim to update once a week. glad you enjoyed. this story insisted on being written more soon

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, wow...Riley is actually rockin' in this fic. I find myself enjoying that very much. : ) Lovin' the start of this. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: updates weekly (hopefull) glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, very intriguing start. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story.
p.s. I already hate Giles. *shudders*

Author's Response: more soon. and you'll hate giles even more soon

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