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Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2007 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Loved the chapter. You write so well! It just draws me inn, and I'm loving every minute. Good dialogue, good take on the explanation of a turning. They're so cute. Please make Riley go away fast (Spike must be hungry by now...) - so we can have more of the two of them : )

Reviewer: Satindoll Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Comments? Yes, I think there will be comments. Like how could you interrupt that lovely snogging soon-to-be shagging moment with RF???!!! Just kidding, love the sudden drop!

Sd

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Riley couldn't just wait till the fun part was over could he? So typical. ;) lookin' forward to seeing how big a fool Riley is.

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Yes! I knew Riley would show up! And I wonder how long Spike can keep Buffy in the dark about his feeding. Seems she doesn't realize that "dinner" usually ends up dead, and that it almost happened to her. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 06:52 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

WOW, that's a lot of high emotions running for Spike and I understand his reluctance to talk to her about certain issues, but respect the fact he does - and with good reason. He understands that if Buffy is ever going to 'understand' just what she'd gotten herself into then, all the cards have to be laid on the table. And I don't blame Bufy for not saying those 3 little words back. Poor thing has a lot to take in on such a short amount of time - but I have confidence she will when its appropriate. And oh boy, Riley. All I can think is that Spike will try and let her handle it on her own first, but if Riley does or says the wrong, well, Spike is a very possessive vamp and will make it perfectly clear to Riley to 'piss-off' so to speak. Can't wait for the next chapter - have a feeling it's going to be the most interesting one. Bravo on a chapter well done darling - cliffy was delicious.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

OH so no Spike gets to meet the ex. I love it.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Too cute for words!! Loved this chapter - got really pissed when they were interrupted by the door and even more so when I realised it was butt-munch Finn!! Get him away so they can get on with the good stuff!!! Who deos he think he is anyway - geez take a hint!
Can't wait for more
Sarah
x

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Oh, I love the story! Wanna, wanna, wanna know how Finn is going to be scared away! BTW I'm wondering if Giles is a retired watcher in your story and if he steps into play later too??

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Good chapter, nice stopping point. You know Spike was a bit hungry and Riley is there like a delivered Happy Meal. You could take care of two problems at once. No divorce, no splitting bank accounts, material items and she is still gets his insurance. Riley can have a nice tombstone.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Ooo, that's going to be interesting...Riley, take a hint!!

Reviewer: my_perfect_muse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

What's Riley going to think of Spike I wonder.... Great chapter!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Loved the update - could Riley be Spike's dinner? That way Buffy will realise that Spike kills people to feed. Really looking forward to more.

Reviewer: F. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Oooh... this is gonna be fun!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 03:50 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Glad that Spike's declaration went well, Buffy isn't running. Spike feared the worst in vain. Loved Spike being so thoughtful to explain things. ~ Uh-huh, an unwelcome visitor. Now I'm looking forward to more, what will happen next.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

OHHH I WONDER WATS SPIKE GOING TO DO TO RILEY, ITS GOING TO BE HILARIOUS!!! i LOVE this story and am SOO happy that u updated. i CANT wait to read wat happens next between spike and riley, PLEASE update as soon as u can, THANX

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

You are way more evil than Spike to leave it there! Aaaaagh! Your reign as the mistress of cliffhangers is still unchallenged. I am so looking forward to the Riley confrontation, and also interested to see how you will deal with Buffy finally getting it that Spike actually kills people on a regular basis.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 12:38 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

AARRGGHHHH Riley that jackass - always ruining things. Can't you just make him GO AWAY!

Addie - this is a great story can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: kimbclar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

This is still my favorite WIP and I love the way you worked Harmony into this last chapter. She really is the most inept vampire. I can't wait to see how Spike handles Riley. Please, pretty please make it violently. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Oh yes... :) For some reason I am VERY excited for this confrontation. I wonder whether Riley is involved with the Initiative and whether it exists in this universe, or he's just a normal (albeit lame lame LAME) soulja boy. :) eeek!!! so super excited. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 12:15 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Dang...why'd Riley have to spoil it?!? I hope Spike gets rid of him. I'm still hoping Buffy and Spike can stay together forever. Hopefully something will pop up. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 12:06 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Ooooh! Cannot wait to find out what happens to the wanker! Will Buffy tell him off again, or will there be some more radical action taken by Spike??? Great update, sooo glad she wasn't freaked!

XXX

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 11:47 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

loved the description of harmony, poor Spike
but how could you leave it there? that's evil, please update soon!!!!
really looking forward to the next chapter now

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 11:46 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Whoo-hoo! I can't wait for this confrontation. Nice chapter. I love playful Spike & Buffy.

Reviewer: k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 11:37 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Interesting development!!!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 - 09:05 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Really am liking this fic more and more as I read. Your the best.

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