i liked

Author's Response: Glad you did, hope you like the next one even more!:)

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Why can't life be simple - oh yeah because it would be so boring but in your Spuffy world hot! Loved the chapter but poor Will feeling that he is inadequate for Buffy. All he needs is the love of a good woman and it looks like that is what he is going to get! Please keep up the good work. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Well... we can't leave such man feeling inadequate now, can we? *grins*
Insecurities will resurface (as they always do), for both of them, but have faith in them, (though there won't be any of the... other Faith in this story!!!) to overcome everything without major angst!
Thank you for liking it, next chappy will be hotter, so tune in next week!!!

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well of course i liked it!
and i dont get this whole "misunderstanding"!!! it's soooo clear that he's in love with buffy and not with another woman!! she is blind (from her passion) to see that HE wants HER. on the other hand, he's taking advantage of the situation cause he wants to proove her that he is the MAN she's being looking for!! it's a simple f.. game!
keep up babe! i presume sex scenes are coming up :)

Author's Response: Thanx babe! Needed that:) Yeap, a sex scene is coming next week, hope you like that too! And you sooo got the psychology of both of them as I meant it to be! (Hope it's because I managed to explain it, and not cause you're my best friend and always know what the f**k is in my mind:P)
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I'll keep reading anyway! :p I remember I read that phrase about him being so in love with her, but it just didn't made sense with what he said in this chapter. She didn't know he was in love with her, now it all makes sense! :) / Ariadne

Author's Response: Thanks, I added a little phrase in this chapter, hoping to clarify things. It's just after his declaration that he loves someone! If you can, please let me know if it's clearer!!!

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She sucks him off and the next thing is he confesses being in love with someone else? Wow, that must be so good for the girl, and it´s really believable that she wants to continue and isn´t put off at least.

Author's Response: LOL, guess you didn't like it, huh? First of all, she hasn't come to term with how she feels about him. Second, she cares, sees his need, and thinks she'll help him by showing him he is man enough. Finally, I know more than a few women who tend to act like this out of the desire to prove to themselves that even if the object of their desire loves someone else he can still want them.

It is up to you whether you can see things my way or not, however I do appreciate you taking the time to review, even if you didn't like it.
Thank you!
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Author's Response: Oh, and if you read chapter 7, there is this little phrase about Buffy: "What was worse, at that moment he knew he was utterly, madly, and irrevocably in love with her and that he could never hope to be man enough to have, or even deserve, her!", so you see, he is not talking about someone else, just smoothing the way of telling her she's the one. His manner is awkward, but he IS 16 after all!

I love your story, the virgin William theme is so underused that its always refreshing to read it. The smexy part help, too kukuku... as well as the fluent writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much:) I'll try to keep it interesting!!! Stay tuned for the next chapter, on Saturday!

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My fingers are crossed for you!! Oh, and tell James I said "Mmmmmm...." LOL!!! And as for your hotel room.. does it have a patio??? Cause that would work, lol.

Oh, and I gotta say... AWESOME chapter, MORE PLEASE?!?!?! .... PLEASE?!?!?!?! *sigh* I can wait til Saturady... maybe. :D Fantastic job!

Author's Response: Hey, sorry I saw that now that I returned:(
James was AWESOME!!! He was totally worth the nightmare my trip was (the details of which I will share with anyone interested in the A/N of the next chapter.
I'm actually considering posting on Friday, but I can't do it any sooner!
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Really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the next one. I hope you'll have a wonderful time with James. :)

Author's Response: I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so very much!:)
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loving the story so far:) hope you update again soon

Author's Response: Glad you like it! It hurts to say so, but I won't be able to update before next Saturday. But I promise it won't be any later than that, and it will be steamy:)
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Good one! a bit of suspense always intrigues me!
well, i think u deserve a break! cardiff-time babe...!!
we will be waiting for you to come back, feed us more and give us some niouz from spike :-P

Author's Response: LOL! I'll be back... MWA-HA-HA-HA... Glad you still like it babe (and that you make the time to read it, I know you have lots of boring academic stuff you should be reading instead -- LOL)
I'll call you l8er,

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Oh it was good and you will have a good time as I hope I will.

Author's Response: Thank you darling, you too!

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ooh this chapter is so good! i can't wait for the next one. i think i know what's going to happen lol can't wait to read it

Author's Response: LOL... I hope you'll like what's coming even more!
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*gg* So Buffy got clingy that night :) Too bad William missed it.
Ah and now Buffy hurt William without wanting to. I hope Buffy can make him understand what she wanted when telling this (I don't think she wanted to hurt him).
~ Thanks for the update; have fun in Cardiff :)

Author's Response: Thank you darling... And don't worry about their little misunderstanding; as I told you I'm not into angst, Joss and RL have done all they could with that, I'll all for fluffy Spuffy!!! All angst-y parts will be resolved within one chapter from surfacing!

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