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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2013 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

Beautiful.

Reviewer: jadefrost Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2008 - 08:14 am Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

i loved the story and can't wait to rea more of your stuff. The only problem I found was the many errors in text. I'm sure most of them are typos but they did make reading a little difficult. Do you have a Beta? It's something worth looking into.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2008 - 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

i really enjoyed this! thanks

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 09:19 am Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

I absolutely loved this story. There were a few places that could use polishing up with a Beta - and I seemed to get the impression that you might be Swedish and writing this in English. If that is true - it really puts me in awe. This story and was great and I loved the whole thing. Thanks everso for writing it.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2008 - 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

OH I loved it, wish you went farther would have like to find out what everyone thought in the end and who was on the phone.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2008 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 6

OH I do like the Buffy killing the Immortal, it just didn't make sense the love of her life died and she was with him. Wonder how he will get past the Harmony bit

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Date: 01/11/2008 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 5

OH I wonder if they are going to work thinks out or break the claim

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Date: 01/11/2008 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 4

yep she was in a relationship with him, but not like he thinks.

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Date: 01/11/2008 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

OH she might have done something to acept I wonder what he will say.

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Date: 01/11/2008 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

OH I hope she can stay to change enough that Spike won't die and Tara.

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Date: 01/11/2008 - 05:48 pm Title: Prolouge - Chapter 1

OH I want to see what Tara will say to that.

Reviewer: sus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

i loved this. original story line and so sweet!

Reviewer: Jessy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2007 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

Cool story. Loved the idea that Buffy killed the Immortal, perfect ;) And I don't believe that Spike would stay away from her.. It was only to make the show, but they should've gotten a convincing reason... I liked that she forgave him, but I'm not sure if she would or should so quickly :P

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

That was just...awesome and really beautiful. Loved it! Go Willow!

Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews, all of them! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 6

Really hope she gives him a proper ass chewing at some point for being such a git. Great chappie!

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 5

Ok, as long as you fix it, then I should be allright. Just...make it right.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh I hope they wake up together and not divided by time. That would suck.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh, that was just...hot and sweet and so many other words that I just can't think of at this moment. Loved it!

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

Yea Buffy for telling Xander off! Wished she would have actually done that a time or two in the show. On to Spuffy-lovin'...

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:13 pm Title: Prolouge - Chapter 1

This story sounds really interesting. Liking it so far. Loved how Buffy gave Willow some lip about her addiction. Great!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2007 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

So sweet! Loved! So it was Willow who had made their dream come true :) / Ariadne

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2007 - 02:14 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm so glad they found each other :) *off to next chapter*

Reviewer: LadyEnchanted Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2007 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

awe. how cute was that?

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you.

Reviewer: leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2007 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

Great story - but man you need to watch your tenses!! It was really distracting to read "was" when it should have been "were" and "had" instead of "has." There severeal instances of using words that were spelled similarly or sounded similar, but were the wrong word completely. It made me loose my place in the story while my brain tried to figure out what you wer saying. Keep working on your grammar and tense and you'll really step your writng game up a lot.

Author's Response: I'm working on it and I hope my next story will hold higher quality. Luckily I'm getting some help now. I'm glad you enjoyed the story anyway! Thank you for pointing out some of the problems in it.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2007 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 7 & Epilogue

Really enjoyed your fic!

Author's Response: Glad. Thank you so much!

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