[Report This]Date: 01/29/2008 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
Exceptional story!
Author's Response: Thank you for that
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2008 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic story I love the other world effect!
4 out of 4 stars
Author's Response: 4 out of 4 stars - blimey - hope I can keep it up! LOL
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow. What an amazing beginning. I do hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Very soon I promise
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
So different it just pulls you right in I wanna beg and plead for more.
Author's Response: Don't think anyone's begged me for anything before. Feels good. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
:~*Giggles*~:
Looks like things are gonna get uncomfortable
Cant wait for that to happen
=P
Author's Response: You're my kind of sadist.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic most orginal story I have had the pleasure of reading in a long time
Lovely!
Author's Response: Your review? Lovely! (hugs review)
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh oh oh this is getting juicy!!!
I can just picture Spike sitting all moody and bored out of his mind at this wedding and Rilet seems as boring as ever. This has a edge to it and I like the whole basis to this story its so different I'll be looking for this all the time now :D
Author's Response: Hope you like the next chapter then - it even has the word 'juices' in it!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 09:26 am Title: Chapter 3
I continue to love how things are playing out between Spike and Buffy. Interesting touch to have White Wedding be the song Buffy and Spike first dance to as a married couple. :D I also enjoyed reading Spike's inner thoughts. And I look forward to learning more about Buffy's dreams. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. Couldn't resist the White Wedding reference - I'm even one of those people who would leap up and dance to it at a reception (sad). More dreams the on way too.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 3
Woo!!! This is really REALLY interesting!!!! Please don't kill me with having to wait forever for an update (although I wouldn't blame you if it took you ages-- this fic is just so imaginative and attentive to detail!). I can not WAIT to find out what happens next! There's absolutely NO way I'm going to get bored with this!! :)
Author's Response: Death by withholding updates - now that would be new. Nah, wouldn't do it to you. Its true it does take me ages to write but I have a very encouraging Beta, plus I'm really enjoying this experience, not to mention reading reviews like yours.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter 3
Theirs is gonna be a bumpy night and I get the feeling those symbols they are both wearing is gonna give them a lot of tension lol
Author's Response: Tension is a good word for it!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter 3
You made a fan out of me I cat wait for your next chappie
Author's Response: Thanks Misha
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter 3
Interesting story, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Nicka
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Well count me in as a new fan I love this!
Author's Response: Eeek am under pressure now. But thanks a lot.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 3
(No, from now on all he had to look forward to was a dutiful rut with the fragile little earthling. He’d have to hold himself back from hurting the girl ...too much. He smiled nastily.)
*Lol* and just what exactly does he have in mind *Lol*
Author's Response: Whatever your fevered imagination can come up with (and mine!) LOL!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Please please update soon!! It's such an interesting universe that you've created
Author's Response: More soon I promise.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
Some honeymoon. LOL! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Not as expected - as you would expect. Thanks W&H
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love the dialogue, love the spike/buffy interaction. Please update soon!!
Author's Response: Lets face it, we all love to see Spike and Buffy interact! Glad you like the dialogue between them
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is really cool; What an original plot.
Author's Response: Thanks I just followed the challenge but I'm having great fun with it.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well, wife of mine, shall we get to it?”
“What?” the girl squeaked.
Spike suppressed a smile; this was almost going to be fun.
“Our sworn duty to unite our two races. I believe you call it shagging.”
Ha ha ha ha cant wait for more please post more soon
Author's Response: Your sense of humour must be nearly as warped as mine. *grins*
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
LOL to the idea of washing the marks off your hand Buffy. What happens to Spike given the area of his if they dont fully consummate the marriage and soon?
I see a vamping out and seduction coming on fast.
Author's Response: Don't think Spike would appreciate a brillo pad applied to his 'other' marks either (snigger)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
damn!
more
more
more
more
so hot!~
Author's Response: And getting hotter (I hope).
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
I too was wondering on her being a virgin heck she could be and lied either way I am wondering if this marriage changed her and will bring her Alayer side to surface or maybe thats what Spike saw I for one am really looking forward to seeing what these Aurelians in and outside of the bedroom.
Please more pretty please?
Author's Response: Can pretty much guarantee that her Slayer side will be surfacing soon and since you ask so nicely, more on its way soon.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great story it left me wanting more and dying to see what happens with them not being together. Looking forward to reading more
:P
C.
Author's Response: Don't you love a bit of UST. I know I do. Thanks for the comments.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is one hott fic and can I just say I loved you renaming Dru to Droosilla and even her you made and wrote really cool
I liked how you painted a picture of the wedding and the rings and now I am dying to know what Spike saw and why Buffy is now getting these visions.
Really a great fic and extremely well written a must read
Author's Response: Thank you Shenanigans. Just a year ago I was screwing up the courage to post the first chapter of my first fic. Support like yours makes me so glad I did.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
Woot! Ceremonial wrist cuffs!!! I'm all over that! More please and soon!!!!!!!!!!
Bring on the magical incentive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Whatever do you mean? *grins*
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