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Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 08:28 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

Forst thing I'm very sorry about your mother-in-law. Many hugs to you and your family. And I'm sending all my positive energy to your father so that everything should go as planned in the operation. If there is anything I can do to help, please don't hesitate to say so. I'm not sure what help I can be from Spain, but really, if there is anything I can do, I'd be happy to help.

And thank you for the "see-you-later" chapter. I'll be waiting eagerly for the next one, whenever it might be.

*Hugs*

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much darling, really. Your words made me feel really good - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 07:47 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

LOVE this chapter! Dismissed Angel & got that much closer to a future with Spike all in one day! So proud of Buffy!!!

Author's Response: LOL - indeed it was time to go from dropping that ass to getting closer with Spike - glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review. Snuggles.

Reviewer: Maia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 07:39 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

I was actually in the ER when I got the email telling me you had updated your story (broke my ankle...) I have to say it was the only thing to bring a smile to my face all day!!!

I am sorry to hear of the horrible things you are having to deal with right now in your RL. Just know that all your readers (even the lurkers!) are thinking about you and praying for the best.

And know that your stories are probably going to be reread alot while I'm stuck in bed with my foot up!

Author's Response: oh no - I'm so sorry you broke your ankle hon, ouch. I hope you recover quickly darling. Thanks for the review and for being so kind to wish me the best - hugs you tight and sends you some healing energy.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 07:33 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

Oh, lovely-- I'm so very sorry for all that you are facing right now. I hope you and your family's time with your mother-in-law is well spent, and will be hoping also that your dad's operation is a success. You'll be in my thoughts!!

As for the story-- I can wait, but it'll be impatiently. Maybe I'll just have to reread Tailored Encounters (and In the ARMY Now-- AGAIN). Loved the update!

Author's Response: Thank you hon, I really appreciate it - seems when it rains it pours. LOL - well I hope if you do re-read my other stuff, you enjoy it the second time around - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 07:26 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

Yes... Buffy broke it off with Angelus and made up with Spike... So on to a more positive relationship..

And blood and genes and competition sounds like halfbrothers to me..

Enjoyed.. and understand the family situation..

Author's Response: LOL - yeah, it was time to get rid of him - buh-bye. Ahhhhhhhhh, very astute obervation my friend, bravo, well done. You may be one of the few who even picked that up. Thanks for the review darling - I do hope to be back soon - hugs.

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 07:08 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

What a cute chapter, lol. I love the pacing of this story. Everything is happening at just the right moment, not too slow, or too quickly. I'm still worried about that Angelus though, I'm sure he's gonna bring some trouble for our favorite couple. Can't wait to see what happens next, no matter how much time you need to take for yourself :D .

Having recently lost a brother to cancer, I can understand what you're going through. So definitely take how ever long you need for you and your family. I know I'll still be here whenever you're ready to return to this story. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: YAY, it makes me so happy to hear you enjoy the pacing - that's one thing I want to do right and sometimes - its not easy. As for Angelus - well, nothing too serious on that end, nothing with too much angst, I promise.
I'm so terribly sorry about your brother. Cancer is such an ugly demon with no prejudice who it strikes. My condolences darling and thank you for your kind words to me. I hope to return soon. Hugs.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 05:47 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

*hugs you tight* Don't worry. I'll miss you and your updates but it's understandable.
Ah Buffy 'faced the music'. Good (spuffywise) that the faced the truth now. Yay for giving Angel the boot (I just used the wrong name last time) but uh-huh.. sounds as if Spike was listening to the phone call. Ah speaker phone. Can be a dangerous surprising thing.
Loved their talk; I think it helped them both. Good that Buffy confessed she broke up with Angel so Spike doesn't have to lie about it.
Like you said the story stops at a good point, without a big cliffhanger; thanks for that.
Take care, Tina. *HUGS* Hope to see you back before summer ends.

Author's Response: THanks for understanding boo - it's just a tough time for me presently. Yup - Buffy is starting to face the music - now to get them in tune with each other, *winks*. I couldn't resist using the speaker phone thing - that's what angelus gets for being the ass that he is, lol. Thanks for the review darling - i do hope to return soon - smooches to you.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 05:28 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

wonderful update, loved the bit with angelus and of course the stuff with spike.
Sorry to hear about the blows RL has sent you. you will be in my thoughts and prayers.

come back when you can

Author's Response: THanks darling - I really appreciate it and I'm happy you enjoyed the update. Snuggles.

Reviewer: Immortal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 05:18 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

I'm so sorry to hear about your Mother-in-law and your Dad. #Hug#

On the fic note - loving this immensely, and it really is at a good point to take a break.

Author's Response: Thanks darling, hugs you back. Glad you liiked where i left things - I couldn't just leave everyone hanging on such a bad note as the previous chapy.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 04:47 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

So sorry to hear of the illness of your loved ones. Had to take care of my mom toward the end. Difficult, but wouldn't trade those moments for anything.

Love you story. Wondered if Riley was going to turn out to be the painful memory that messed with Buffy's head and heart. Spike and Buffy need to really talk. Surpised they didn't let this drift on too long, but a good surprise.

Author's Response: I know what you mean, My family took care of my mom and her dad towards the end as well.... never easy but so glad I could be there. Glad you enjoed the chapter and as far as Riley... oh yeah, he has a lot to do with why she's so messed up. But I can't do the reveal on it until a certain time frame - sorry... but it will make sense once I get there darling. Thanks again hon - kisses.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 - 04:45 pm Title: Breaking Up and Making Up

Oh honey, I'm glad you managed to post, I know having done this will mean one less thing to worry about. Take all the time you need, yes, family comes first and especially in these circumstances. I just wish I could do more, but being this far away make that a bit difficult. I'm here for you, though, for whatever you need me. *huggles* On to the chapter? It was wonderful and as you said, those were two very good steps forward, loved the way Spike cornered her to get them talking, loved that she gave him the crumb he's been wishing for, love that she cut things off with Angel (and especially that Spike could witness it *giggles*). Brilliant chapter, cariño, as always! *smooches* Love you, boo!

Author's Response: Thank you carino, you're the best friend I could ever ask for - always there for me thru good times and bad. Yup, I'm rather proud to have had Spike corner Buffy and her give him his crumb, he deserved it, giggles. Love you sweety and thanks again for everything.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2008 - 08:58 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

Just to let you know I am reading ( Army) right now... need some laughs along with some good NC17...

Waiting for the next update.. of Murphy and hopefully some apologies and reconciliations... or will it be moving out time..



Author's Response: HAHAHAHHAHA, that's awesome, I'm so glad you still enjoy IAN - that was a special one for me to write. Thanks for the review, and no worries about ML - I promise. Hugs.

Reviewer: Sami Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 - 06:47 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

I completley and totally love this story!!!! Love how you compared the slapping fight, Cant wait for the next chapter!!

Keep up the great work
Sami

Author's Response: Squeeeee, glad you enjoyed the slapfest for its comedic standpoint. THank you so much for the great reviedw hon, more to come soon. Huggles.

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 - 07:08 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

Awww, no happy ending for Spike? So much happened, yet nothing happened! Argh! So, why IS Buffy so timid around guys? Or is it just Spike? What skeleton has she got in her closet? :) And Spike, naughty Spike, you just don't understand that to a girl, a handjob is more than you think it is. "Happy ending, that's all." It's never all that simple! :) Great chapter!

Author's Response: Nope, no happy ending this time – poor Spike. As far as Buffy being so timid around men, well, that’s be revealed in a later chapter – it’s all about timing, trust me. Part of me wants to say you’ll be surprised why, another part me thinks you may not, but either way, it’s a plan of mine not to reveal why until JUST the right moment, *winks*. And yes – I totally agree with you that a hand-job is not just something you can do that means absolutely nothing – silly boy. Thanks for the review darling – smoochies to you.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 - 08:59 am Title: Domestic Bliss

That was one awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Squeee, glad you enjoyed it hon - thanks so much for the review - huggles.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 - 06:36 am Title: Domestic Bliss

Ok so it might have taken me a week to read your story from start to this chapter but it was soooo worth it! I had been meaning to read it for a long time now but I was caught up in other fics and other stuff...Anyway, this story is AWESOME and I'm now currently kicking myself for not reading it earlier. ;)

I love the whole up and down thing going on and its only been like a month, not even. I really do feel that when you meet the right person you know practically from the start at least in your gut.

SO, now that you have me totally hooked I can't wait to read the next chapter!

My thoughts are with you.

Author's Response: Oh but at least when you read it you enjoyed it and tha'ts more thna I can ask for - squeeeee, very happpy you like it darling. (does the dance of joy). It's true you do know the right person for you once you meet them - but in their case, well, they've been fighting it most of the way, hee. THanks for the review and the well wishes sweety, I really appreciate it - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2008 - 06:58 am Title: Domestic Bliss

awwwww, kitty - i'd rather have a puppy tho

and lambrusco! yay! mom and dad claim its the reason i was conceived, lol

YOU NAMED IT SEBASTIEN LIKE MY COCKER!!

Slap Slap Slap *lol*


Author's Response: Hehehehheeh, I had a cat named sebastin when I was younger - so I couldn't help it, I giggled to myself when you told me via IM about your cocker, it was hard not to tell you then I'd chosen that name. Glad you enjoyed it my friend - luv u boo.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2008 - 04:53 am Title: Domestic Bliss

:O:O:O you are soooo evil lol.... you've really got me sitting on the edge of my seat craving more.... i hope to god you update really soon because i can't wait to read what happens next:)

Author's Response: Oh but that's great - that means I did my job as an author, squee, but sorry for the evil cliffy - the muse insisted and i had to listen, lol. Thanks for reviewing boo - smooches to you.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 10:13 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

such sweet torture! *glares*
can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Eeeeep, hides - but it is for a better cause as you'll see in next chapter,I promise. Thanks for the review boo - hugs.

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 09:06 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

Dum dum DUM!!! Trouble in paradise I see! Loved the steamy massage and Buffy FINALLY jumping Spike, but of course this is Murphy's Law we're talking about here. I wonder what Buffy's gonna do about Angel now that this has happened. I love their little bitchfight too; it reminded me of Xander and Harmony's fight from Season 4. It also seems Spike hasn't grown up entirely yet, but at least he realizes part of it's his fault. And 2 steps forward you say.... Hmmm..... Definately interested to see how that goes! This story gets better and better every chapter; I am fully addicted! Can't wait for more!
~Katiegrrl1016

Author's Response: LOL - luv the dum dum dum - that about sums it up. As for Angel, Buffy wil do the right thing, she is a good person despite her fallicies. And omg - I forgot about the fight between Harmony and Xander - hilarious and you're so right. Spike still has a bit to go to becoming fully grown up, but also Buffy has a ways to go herself b/c of her path. Yup - two steps forward, trust me, *winks*. I'm so thrilled you're enjoying the whole story so much hon, thank you for the fab review. Huggles.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 05:47 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

"Good lord Lawrence why are you slapping a monkey?"
"Teddy this guy's been pushing me and pushing me and I'm sick of it!" HAHAHAHA after you mentioned it , I just had to watch that scene on youtube b/c I've never seen the movie... it was hysterical. When I first read that he slapped her back I was a littttllle worried but then I saw that he was just being playful so I was ok with it. Besides it lead to some really hot kissage hehe. I just wanted to let you know I adore this story!!! Actually allll your fics are freakin awesome, as are you :). Even though it's been tough to be patient, I will be cause I just know it will definitely be worth it. Pleeeeaaase update soon!!! Thanks. Lots of Love.

Author's Response: LMFAO - I just love that scene from the movie and of course adore Robin Williams. Glad you were able to find that scene on youtube - I laugh every time I see it. Oh yeah, after their little slapfest it was raw lust that came out on top to dominate the both of them. THanks for the compliment sweety, it really does make me blush plus I'm grateful you and other's enjoy my writing - it makes it worth it. This story is slow in the sense its not in my usual style where there is sex upfront - but I chose to write it this way as a personal chalenge to myself that I could indeed write an engagin story without it - er, well, at least until they get to have sex. And when they do...... have your ciggies ready, *winks*. Thanks for the totally awesome review - it made me grin from ear to ear. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 03:43 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

Honey, I trust you! ;) Spike wanted his happy ending too much, but who was he to object when Buffy threw herself on him? And then she ran away and chose the cold shower instead. Well, good luck with that :p I guess she'll come crawling back for another attack. But he'll probably be too mad and push her away? *just guessing* :p Anyway, loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks for trusting me, I really do appreciate it. I have plans for them, *winks*. Spike did want his happy ending a but too much and of course arguing was so not the way to go about it even if he wanted to understand what the problem was she had with it. As for him pushing her away? Well, he's in too deep and wants her too much to ever push her away, but he has his pride too. Until they suss things out - in next chapter - he won't make a move. Glad you enjoyed the chapter sweets - thanks for the review - huggles and snuggles.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 03:23 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

Oh and forgot to say the kitten was sooooo cute!!! And he has the same name as one of my loved ones!!!
Also, I know it's not really the place for it but if you're interested in seeing the thing I babbled about it's on youtube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OBihA7_fSPA&feature=related
The slapping is quite near the end but the rest is not bad to watch (or maybe I'm biased cos i know the back story.
Sarah
x

Author's Response: Oh thank you - I have a persian myself and as a youth, a black cat named sebastian and thought, wel, there's nothing like a kitten to make a girl swoon. And yes, I watched the vid you sent me - OMG, how hilarious is that, AND his name was Spike? LMFAO, thanks for that hon and thanks again for al your review... luv ya.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 03:00 pm Title: Domestic Bliss

SO HOT!!!!! And they didn't even really get down to it!! Bloody hell!! Wwell done luv - fantastic.
As for the slapping I found it both hilarious and HOT!! People get their knickers in a knot too much about supposed 'abuse' jeezo it's not like he punched her in the face or something. In fact you took me back to my childhood to the first Snarky relationship I ever loved on a British kids show called Press Gang (which is freakin amazing btw) where a guy called (funnily enough) Spike and a girl called Lynda had a serious love hate thing going on and there was a slapping scene that you sooo reminded me of (that was both funny and hot too incidentally)
Anyhoo, anyone who's gonna complain about abuse is probably gonna get their panties in a bunch about something or other eventually no matter what you write so pay it no heed if it happens is what I say!
Thanks for this hun
Sarah
x

Author's Response: YAY, squeeeeee, so glad you enjoyed their passionate moment - just imagine when they finally do get down to the 'deed', *double winks*. And yeah, some people do get their knickers twisted at the mere thought of abuse, but realistically, I only tried to portray it in a funny fashion and sorta like their canon characters - but without using fists. Thanksf or the awesome review hon - smooches.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 - 11:24 am Title: Domestic Bliss

OMG that was so ...... what's the word I'm looking for? HOT. Now they are both blaming themselves. Please let it be a teeny weeny step back and TWO great big steps forward. They were making such good emotional progress. Oh and the kitten - just too cute for words. I absolutely adore this story and cannot wait for you next update.

Author's Response: Hahahahah, glad you liked the hotness - they're two very passionate people, equal in a lot of ways. Yup, they'll be taking 2 solid steps forward, no worries about that. A door has been opened now that just can't be closed. Thanks for the awesome review honey - luv u.

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