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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 09:00 pm Title: Confused Much?

Oh I wonder who the Blonde was and how Buffy and Spike will work through this.

I loved, it but yeah reallife does come first after all, that is why it is taking so long with my stories.



Author's Response: HAHAHHHAHAA, they'll have a time working thru it, that's for sure - one word, 'showdown'. Yeah, sometimes RL can reeeeally get in the way and it sucks when the muse wants to write but there's no time to play, poo. Thanks for the review darling - hugs.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 07:26 pm Title: Confused Much?

Spike ought to do some growing up! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Giggles - indeed he does, and he will, it just takes THanks for the review hon and I do hope you enjoy next chapter. Kisses.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 06:28 pm Title: Confused Much?

Buffy's not really running hot and cold. She's trying to maintain a comfortable working relationship with someone she doesn't really realize she has feelings for. It's a tightrope, and the mutual attraction, though hard to deny, is still new. Spike takes even their tentative friendship as Buffy giving in.

It makes perfect sense that Spike would consider his growing feelings a symptom of not having sex for a while. He's not used to caring for women. They've just been used for scratching an itch in the past. Buffy's reaction to Harmony also belies her intense not caring very much that Spike's getting said itch scratched. For a genius, he sure is an emotional bonehead. Their relationship is tense and hilarious and I love that Willy sees right through them.

Hungover Buffy, still bristling from walking in on Harmony, should be loads of laughs on Saturday morning. I can't wait.

Thanks for another highly entertaining update.

Author's Response: She really is, but of course it's tough with a guy like Spike, pushing buttons she's never had pushed before. ANd really, Spike being 23, well, I don't know a ton of 23 year old guys who don't tend to think with their second brain and then justify it somehow - that's testoerone for ya, but of course he's not really 'with' Buffy so in his head, he didn't do anything wrong - like you said, emotional bonehead. Oh, you can bet Saturday morning is going to have some fireworks, *inserts evil laugh*. Thank you so much for the great review - I always love reading your insight on things. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 12:52 pm Title: Confused Much?

ahh! now that's just taunting! *pouts* about the come-uppance i mean.
hee! frankly, i'm surprised spike lasted this long. another fascinating chapter, thank you so much!

Author's Response: Hehehh, oooops? But hey, it'll be worth it, Buffy get's some satisfaction out of it and Spike learns a thing or two. Thanks for the review sweets - smoochies.

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 11:20 am Title: Confused Much?

That litlle PS has left me itching for more!!!! Can't wait to see it.

Author's Response: YAY, and it'll be a whopper of a chapter, that I can promise you. So glad you liked this one hon and thanks for the review - snuggles.

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 10:45 am Title: Confused Much?

That was freaking fantastic :). I loved this chapter and I loved Buffy getting this drunk. Spike will have a lot work on his hand getting Buffy in her room.
Your're right.. he made a big mistake. I don't think Buffys opinion of him is any better.
I'm looking forward your next round of Spuffy!

Author's Response: Indeed Spike will have his hands full on Saturday morning. Technically he didn't do anything wrong because he's not 'with' Buffy, but yet in stil, he messed up and you're right that her opinion won't be any better of him for his efforts. THanks for the review dearie, hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 04:27 am Title: Confused Much?

glad you had a good time with hubby. thanks for the update :) will always love your writing

Author's Response: Awwwwwww, thanks hon, I really appreciate it and I'm hapy you liked the update - smooches to you.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 12:50 am Title: Confused Much?

haha i loved that chapter:) i hope you update again soon

Author's Response: Good to hear you enjoyed the chappy - next stop is the showdown on Saturday, giggles. Thanks for the review hon. Kisses.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 11:54 pm Title: Confused Much?

Yay, Spike got him some! Hey, if Buffy ain't puttin' out.... I know that's crude, but they aren't together and B's made it more than plain her thoughts on that ever happening. Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHHAHA, I've got half the reviewers saying go Spike and half the reviewers siding with Buffy - this is great to have such opposite reactions from everyone. But like other folks, you're right. They aren't together so he can do whatever he wants... however.... his comeuppance is simply Buffy reacting badly due to her attraction for him but he will actually learn something which is the important part. They'll get back on track, but of course, this is Murphy's law, so there's more situations they'll still have to go through, giggles. Thanks for the review sweety - huggles.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 09:24 pm Title: Confused Much?

I figured Spike would sleep with someone sooner or later... I'm curious though, is this a one time fling or an on going affair? Can't wait to find out what Spike's comeuppance is! ;) Great chapter!

Author's Response: And it really was inevitable and in character with his personality - glad you weren't to squicked by it. As for an ongoing affair... nope. Spike has no interest in being with the same woman twice - at least not til the spuffy ending. Hope you like next chapter, it's a doozy bound to get people riled up, giggles - I'm evil, what can I say? Thanks for the fab review sweetheart - kisses.

Reviewer: loveit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 08:38 pm Title: Confused Much?

i love this story. i really think its awesome. i read your author's note at the very end however and it made me a little sad. i don't know if this is just my opinion, or the opinion of other readers as well, but if you have chapters ready,... why wait a week to post them. i know it drives me crazy during the week, and not in a good way. the story is so funny and well written that i juts want to read as much of it as i can. yeah

just wanted to let you know. :/

Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter hon and it pleases me to hear you want as much of it as you can get. The reason why some authors choose to post once a week despite having chapters ready is that (and I'm not saying I speak for all those authors) we like to go over our chapters very thoroughly and I know I'm constantly tweaking little things here and there. It gives us time to finish writing the story knowing that we have chapters in reserve in case RL problems arise – kids getting sick, visitors, vacation - and I like to really polish my chapters up as much as possible before posting – it’s the virgo in me, giggles. Plus a week gives every reader a chance to read according to their work schedules and such. Some people don’t get to read the updates until later in the week and then they might be lost not knowing I’d posted so close together. Hope that answers your question. Thanks for the review – hugs.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 08:19 pm Title: Confused Much?

Ouch that hurt! thanks for not being graphic , i would have spewed my dinner otherwise. That was a good chapter but bringing the skank home I think was a bad move. So what happens next , I hope she cold shoulders him for a while , make him grovel a little, or are they gonna play tit for tat , is she gonna bring someone home next just to show him? til next chappie , Tina.

Author's Response: Nope, not going to get graphic on that end, it pains me thinking about it, ick!!! And yes, bringing her home to THEIR place was a bad idea - thus a little lesson is in order - the comeuppance, giggles. As for Buffy doing a tit for tat, well, she's older and wiser and it's not really in her nature to do that, but she will get to date someone, giggles - and that in itself makes SPike jealous. GLad you liked the chappy sweets - thanks for the fab review.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 08:16 pm Title: Confused Much?

awww crap tina!! HARMONY!!!!??? i just spit my screwdriver out!! ewwww! u didn't even have to name the ho-bag and i knew who it was!!! i'm so glad u didn't go descript cuz i would up-chuck everywhere...or at least mentally i will! yes, grow Spike up a little and get him the hell away from her!! and a drunk Buffy is a hilarous Buffy! should've made her do her facial expression!! LOL and i really wish Buffy would get over her hot-cold crap! but i know u like angst so....i'm preparing myself for the torture! can't wait for the next chapter!!! :o)

Author's Response: HAHHAHAHAHAH, I'm sorry, it had to be, but I didn't go graphic. Harmon y was the perfect choice for the bimbo - but she won't see a lot of this story as far as time wise. Spike's done with her, I promise. Hee hee, drunk Buffy is fun to write, she really is and of course she has that hot/cold routine down, doesn't she? Glad you liked the chappy hon, you'll like the next one more, I promise - thanks for the review. Snuggles.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: Confused Much?

Well, seems like they both need a slap upside the head. And thanks for not going into the graphic detail with Sparmony. Ewwww is an understatement. Great chapter...and your end note there has my curiosity peaked! Can't wait!

Author's Response: Yup, indeed they do. They just get the correct messages from each other, misreading all the time, you name it. I'd love to throw them in a closet for a full day, but..... that would wind up causing WWIII at this point, lol. And you're welcome - I definitely am not doing any graphic sex that isn't between just Buffy and Spike - I just don't care for it, yuk! Glad you enjoyed the update hon and hopefully you'll like the next one just as much - it's a doozy, hee hee. Hugs.

Reviewer: Mindy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 06:39 pm Title: Confused Much?

Well, Spike just proved to Buffy what she had already known - he only cares about sex and not about the woman. So Buffy will run even further away. I'm actually looking forward to Buffy finding a guy who actually cares about her. I hope Buffy gets to have sex with someone, too. It's not fair that Spike gets to have that release but not Buffy. She does need to get laid. How stupid is Spike to bring Harmony to the apartment when Buffy and him are supposed to be rooming together in secret? Is Spike so mad at Buffy that he is tying to cause her all of this trouble at work also? If so, he definitely needs a comeuppance.

Author's Response: Oh yes, he did - he was predictable and of course she reacted badly only b/c she does find him attractive, not that he did any wrong doing to her personally. You're another reviewer who has wondered about Buffy being able to have some bed fun with someone else. But I do have to say, as tempting as that is, given her age and prudish character, it would be kind of 'out there' for her to respond as such. As for her dating someone else - that's not out of the question, *winks*. And yes, she does need to get laid, tht's for sure, giggles. Hope you like next chapter sweety and thanks so much for the great review. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 05:31 pm Title: Confused Much?

I love this story!! I'm so bad about reviewing but I wanted you to know how much I am enjoying watching Buffy confuse the hell out of Spike. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: They do seem to confuse each other quite a bit huh? But that's half the fun of writing them this way, giggles. I'm thrilled you liked the update hon and of course hope you like the next chappy too - thanks for the fab review - smoochies.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 04:55 pm Title: Confused Much?

They're hardly beholden to each other at this point, so I don't really care that he went and got laid. I wouldn't be surprised if he ended up thinking about Buffy the whole time he was with Harmony.

Willy's a good friend. And drunk Buffy is always amusing. :)

Author's Response: Bingo - that's very true, they aren't together, it's just Buffy's attraction for him that made her act out like that. Sad but amusing, giggles. And yay, glad you like Willy, I always wanted to write him as a good guy. Thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 04:22 pm Title: Confused Much?

Thanks for the great chapter :D . Personally, at this point in the story, I don't necessarily think it's wrong for Spike to be with someone else (as long as it's not serious, lol) . He's young, he's got needs, and importantly, at this point it's not like he and Buffy are even close to getting together. But I can't wait until they do, lol.

Author's Response: Good - because honestly, it isn't wrong, he's not 'with' Buffy, he's lusting after her. It was bound to happen and may yet still again. You can bet when they do get together, it'll be indeed very special, *winks*. Thanks for the review hon - snuggles.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Confused Much?

Hey honey, still not feeling a 100%, but I just HAD to read this! Loved this despite the blonde-in-the-apartment incident, and cannot wait for the next chapter!

Oh, and It’d be interesting to see what happened over time with these two, though he placed his money on it not ending well… for either of them. was so ominous I shivered!

LOVE YOU!

Author's Response: Awwwwww, you bad girl you, you should be resting all you can, but I know you, it's hard to keep you away you little sassy thing you, heheehhehe. Luv you boo and I want you better soon. Thanks for reviewing and for all the help you've given me - hugs you tight and a big fat sloppy kiss.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 03:27 pm Title: Confused Much?

Sounds as if we have trouble ahead, spuffywise...
Ah I see... another misunderstanding about the kiss. But the realization Spike made? I fear I won't like the outcome of it...
Yeah, thought so. :( Well he'll have to pay the prize for it later. Or sooner then later because I just read you're other A/N.
Till then, and ditto.

Author's Response: Yup, had to go down that typical road, but it was bound to happen sooner or later given Spike's personality. These two just have a hard time communicating and receiving the correct message. LOL. Thanks for the review darling - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 03:03 pm Title: Confused Much?

Love to see an update on this story, I hope more follows soon.
Sadly, Spike hasn´t done anything to deserve comeuppance. As lewd an asshole he has been, he HAS done loads of good for Buffy. She has done nothing but being an absolute mega-bitch to him.
Sadly, it looks like check-mate right now, because if she doesn´t give even a little bit, and he resumes fucking around and gives up on her like he does, that whole thing leads to nowhere. Also, the whole jealous scenario if she gets it on with someone else, too, has been done already with the Parker-incident, why repeat that again? It´s all a bit depressing right now and as condescending, presumptious and blithely as Buffy acts towards Spike, I understand that he´s had it now. And if she goes to someone else, too, that non-existant relationship is at a dead end.
I wonder how you´ll change that, can´t wait for the next update, cause it looks very bleak right now.

Author's Response: And you're right, he hasn't done anything wrong to deserve comeuppance, but he'll get it anyway for the reason that more importantly... he learns a lesson about respect, you'll see. Yes, they can both be childish and they definitely will thru the fic, but it's a learning process for both. SHe needs to unwind, he needs to tighten up a bit, its a give and take thing. But hey, I got you to feel for the characters and form good opinions on them and that tells me at least I've written it well enough to really get you involved in the story, which makes me happy. As for another Parker incident - oh hellllll no i am not going down that road, ick! As for getting the couple back on track, it's very, hmmmmmmmm, unconventional but they will get back on track, that I promise, *winks*. It's not a quick fix for sure. Thanks for the awesome review hon, glad I got you thinking about things. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 02:53 pm Title: Confused Much?

Will Spike's remedy for curing his Buffy afliction work? Me thinks not and comeuppance too!!!!! Loved it - as always.

Author's Response: Hahahahahhaah, you win. Nope, not going to do a damn thing about getting her out of his system, especially not with her living with him. Glad you enjoyed tha chappy hon - thanks for the review. Smooches.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 02:36 pm Title: Confused Much?

I bet the company slut is gonna run to work and let the roomies secret out!! That should leave for many interesting conversations!!

Author's Response: Giggles, she's like the town bicycle, everyone's had a ride, but that also renders her 'labeled' so to speak, and funny enough, we won't see her but one more time - she's a set of trouble they don't need and she can easily move onto the next new guy, lol. Thanks for the review hon - smooches.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 02:24 pm Title: Confused Much?

From one twisted sister (eww Dee Snyder!) to another, that was freakin awesome! The UST here is driving me up a buggy wall, BUT, I know that it will resolve itself....RIGHT? And yes, I have to say EWWWW to the Lady Spreads-Her-Legs-Alot! Glad you weren't graphic. But I'm worried when you say that Spike will get his comeuppance - does that mean Buffy will sleep with some guy???? That should be a big world of NO! They're supposed to get so fuckin frustrated that they tear the room apart while doing the nasty - and he should be her first! (At least in my twisted sister of a world hehehehe). And yeah, I hated too cold or too hot Buffy - damn woman make up your mind! (to me, Buffy was nothing more than a cock-tease - please don't hurt me!). Can't wait for the next update! And Lo, God covered Jesus' eyes and said "Don't look son, it ain't gonna be pretty!" hehehehe!

Author's Response: Shudders - that man is just plain F-U-G-L-Y. Yup - a nice fat serving of UST and spreads her legs a lot, sorry - had to be that way. Ah the question on everyone's mind, will Buffy sleep with someone just to get back at Spike, hmmmm, well, take a look at her prudish personality and tell me what you think, gigles - can't make it too easy. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH - to the God/Jesus comment. Yes, definitely not rated for children, LOL - thanks my twisted sister. kisses.

Reviewer: Katkin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 01:52 pm Title: Confused Much?

Yes I know, I'm a bad bad reader for not reviewing until now! but I have kept up with your postings and just want to let you know, that as always you are the Queen of angsty twisted Spuffy and that I adore (as with your other fics) this story! Thank you for being so brilliant! xxx

Author's Response: Bah - don't worry about it hon - I'm just happy to hear from you and that you are indeed enjoying the story. You know me and my twisted mind, giggles - got a good ole ride set up for these two here, *winks*. THanks for the great review hon - luvs ya.

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