[Report This]Date: 04/17/2008 - 07:34 pm Title: "How do you feel about fire?"
How could Willow do that?
and thank you so much for not having Buffy be this weak little girl that needed Spike to kick ass for her. She can do it her damn self.
great chapter update soon
Author's Response: Some people think they know what's best for someone, and I always though that was one of Willow's bad qualities. Buffy's definitely tough inside and out, even if she doesn't need it, and while it's nice to have a protector she can damn well kick some ass herself! :) Glad you liked the chapter, Trisha!
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2008 - 07:29 pm Title: "How do you feel about fire?"
Oooh, excellent update! Loved the strength you gave Buffy. What's this about Spike leaving? Have lots of fun but don't forget about us here anxiously awaiting another update!
Author's Response: Couldn't ever forget about you guys! Glad you enjoyed the chapter, you'll find out more about Spike's departure soon!
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2008 - 07:27 pm Title: "How do you feel about fire?"
Yea for Spike .. but he is going back... Maybe this is going to be a short fic and she will go with him or ?
Yea for Buffy and Women's Defense Courses.. LOL.. Fire is Pretty..
Enjoying..
Author's Response: Thanks, Pam S! Glad you're enjoying. Can't answer your questions, of course...you'll just have to tune in and see what happens next! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2008 - 07:24 pm Title: "How do you feel about fire?"
yay-still enjoying the story and loved the whole confrontation bit-hope Spike takes her with him when he goes to wherever he's going
Author's Response: Glad you're still enjoying, the confrontation was definitely a challenge to write so I'm glad it came off well. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/12/2008 - 04:14 am Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Really sweet moments. I love them together.
Please update soon. I want some more!
Author's Response: More, you say? I'm speeding along, trying to give you all just that! Thanks for your support as always :).
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2008 - 03:04 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Could this be any more perfect at the moment??? The progression is simply the best...sweet torture...I am loving every minute. ATB, Melissa
Author's Response: Aw, perfect? Well, if that's the word you want to use... :) So happy to hear you're loving it, Melissa, can't wait to hear what you think of what's to come!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2008 - 03:13 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
This is fun. I really think buffy is fun in this. And also is a sweetheart. I did like the 20 questions game it was fun. I think xander is cool in this with the pancakes. And faith sounds fun. And seems like would be a good friend to chat to. i can already see the chemisty forming between them to.
The beer bad buffy like thing was funny. And buffy's dress sounds pretty. Will buffy get angel back for the cheating? Please continue this and update again soon.
Author's Response: 20 Questions is definitely a fun, flirty getting to know you game. Glad you like Buffy, Xander, and Faith in this, and glad the fun they're having translates to the reader as well! Thanks for your comments!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2008 - 02:52 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Great story! Don't keep us waiting for updates too long - can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, wtacherlks! Will try not to keep you guys waiting too long.
[Report This]Date: 04/07/2008 - 12:05 am Title: “Want to let go with me?"
AWW THEY ARE SO CUTE!! IM SO GLAD THAT SHE OPENED UP AND THAT TEHYRE TALKING!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that her meeting him was the best day of her life and that theyre getting closer. i really hope that they continue to get closer and that she doesnt go back to angel. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! Hope everything works out the way you want it to, but I'll keep you on your toes!
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2008 - 12:46 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Oh my goodness that was cute!
So glad she's staying put rather than rushing off to deal with the fallout.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Rakkle! They're definitely adorable, aren't they? The fallout will come later, for now she needs to just stay put and enjoy herself.
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 05:28 am Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Awww.... I think I've melted into a puddle of goo. Spike and Buffy are just so sweet together. Awesome chapter, can't wait for more. :D
Author's Response: Well, I'll just have to scrape you off the ground and prop you up so you can read the rest! :) Glad you liked the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 03:15 am Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Loved this chapter and which one of them is going to take the first leap? Really sweet.
Author's Response: Glad you loved it, Sam! Always enjoy hearing what you think.
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 01:35 am Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Very sweet.
The question game is still very entertaining.
I thing you're doing a wonderful job showing us how ambivalent and mixed up Buffy feels. If she got over leaving her wedding quickly it wouldn't be believable. Also her growing attraction to 'Buster' is making the mix harder.
Then on the other hand I keep hoping he'll throw her over his shoulder - 'cave Buffy style' and have his wicked way ; )
Author's Response: Oooh, dirty! He could always club her and drag her back to his lair...hot... :) I'm happy to hear I'm conveying Buffy's confusion well, definitely a crucial part of her character and the story. Thanks for reviewing, Heidi!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 01:23 am Title: "What are we toasting?"
I like how the evening is progressing naturally. The 20 questions game was a great way for them to get to know each other, and the attraction is pretty obvious, now.
One runaway bride story, coming up - can't wait!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying, missus_grace! Definitely an undeniable attraction (that of course they deny). Thanks for letting me know what you think!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 10:00 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
what a lovely chapter! Im so happy to hear you have internet access where you are so you can share this wonderful story with everyone. Love the sexual tension building between our fated pair, could it lead to heart ache I wonder??
Can't wait for you to update again!
Author's Response: Thanks burnkitty! Heart ache? Can't promise there won't be any... :) So glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 09:06 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Oh - THIS is the best chapter yet. WIth enough alcohol in her system, I think she took everything in great stride and was more honest than she would have been if she weren't slightly drunk. Taking SPike's advice so immediately - and having a dance with him, WOW, now the sparks are definetly flying. I don't know too many strangers that would touch, tease, or kiss like that on a first meeting. THat last kiss he gave her shoulder made my own shoulder shudder in delight. Wheww. You HAVE to update soon, I need to see the end of this evening and if they'll exchange phone numbers or if she'll stay with him in order to avoid Angel trying to find her - I have to know.... giggles. So my point.... UPDATE. *sings* LOVED it - hugs and kisses darling.
Author's Response: Alcohol is such a wonderful truth serum, isn't it? Definitely loosens the inhibitions as well. So so happy you loved it, and glad that their chemistry rings true. Strangers? Maybe, but they sense something familiar in each other...thanks as always for letting me know what you think!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 08:28 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Absolutly LOVE this story!!!! can't waite for more!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Brittany, glad you're loving it!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 07:37 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
awww that was such a sweet ending to that chapter:) i hope you update again soon
Author's Response: Thanks, pixiecorn! Glad you liked the ending, I particularly enjoyed writing it.
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 06:48 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Finally they are starting to feel the electricity between them and see the sparkles flying.I hope B. won`t do anything stupid (as usually she does). Loved it, more update please!
Author's Response: Definite sparkage! B tends to do silly things, especially with some alcohol in her, but Spike's there to help her along. Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 06:07 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
likin' this-its romantic and sappy and fun. just wondering what Buffy will be like when reality strikes and what will happen if her family or fiance find her with Spike
Author's Response: Thanks, scaryspouse! Definitely wanted this to be a fun fic. Reality won't strike for a bit, but when it will I can't guarantee it will be pretty...
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 06:00 pm Title: “Want to let go with me?"
Awe, Spike is falling hard for Buffy :)
And Buffy isn't unaffected either.
Love how supportive Spike is for Buffy, wanting her to make decision for herself.
Author's Response: Definitely some mutual falling going on...and coming from a place of honesty and caring, not selfishness. Thanks for reviewing, cordykitten!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 09:41 am Title: "What are we toasting?"
I'd definitely like to see more of this story. I like how naturally the interactions between the characters flow from the initial set up.
Just for me I'm kind of wondering how long a story this will eventually be since it still feels like it's in the introduction phase. A lovely introduction of course, but really not much has happened yet, and since a story is about what happens... Well, I am just eager to see what the point will be. Hopefully something original and not cliche.
Once I can predict what's going to happen next I get bored and stop reading--because what's the point? I read somewhere once that the art of telling a story consists of giving the audience what they want without giving it to them in any predictable way. Or something like that.
You have great dialog instincts by the way. The people sound TRUE.
So...suprise me. Give it to me good.
Author's Response: Definitely agree that a predictable story is an uninteresting story--why read if it's just confirming what's already in your imagination? Hopefully I can surprise you, while retaining the same elements you already like about the story. Thanks for your comments on my dialogue and characterization, those are the elements I work the hardest at so I'm glad to hear it's paying off. Hope I continue to entertain, and maybe surprise if I can.
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 03:04 am Title: "What are we toasting?"
Awesome start. I'm really enjoying where you're taking this. This is a completely unique and interesting way for Buffy and Spike to meet and thus far, the characterization and voice are great. Please update soon! You rock my world.
Author's Response: Thanks, Evelyn! Glad to hear you think the story is unique, pretty much the best compliment I can receive. Thanks so so much for the sweet review!
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2008 - 03:25 am Title: "What are we toasting?"
Love it! Great plot, fantastic characterisation (love your spike!), can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, djonie! This particular Spike is so fun to write, but definitely makes me want one of my own! Sigh.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2008 - 09:06 pm Title: "What are we toasting?"
Glad to see more of 20 questions - loved Buffy's response to the whole Cecily situation.
Enjoying drunk giggly Buffy much more than if she was all mopey.
Very much looking forward to 'the story'. Hope she's able to make some true friends out of this rather than just having nowhere else to turn when dealing with the fall out.
Sort of reminds me of the first episode of FRIENDS, the idea that she might get true and lasting relationships out of this rather than it being an any port in a storm situation.
Best of lucking settling in in the new place, I for one will be waiting patiently for the next update.
Author's Response: Mopey drunks are no fun at all, but giggly Buffy is just too fun to write! Hadn't even though of the "Friends" connection, but you're right, there's definitely a similar theme going on. So glad you're liking it, Rakkle!
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