[Report This]Date: 09/27/2012 - 01:45 am Title: Amulets
This was very sweet. Not quite as well written as the other fics of yours I've read, this one seemed like it was really rushed. Needs a very thorough editing to correct mistakes and to tighten up the writing a bit. The ending kind of just drops off, too... feels like it needs more...
The smut was super hot, though, especially after the concert (the sex scene in chap 7)... ummm, yeah, super super steamy!
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2012 - 01:00 am Title: Crumb
I love this passage... it's super powerful to me:
“I like to make note and remember everything that strikes me as powerful and when I read your first book that was the first time I’d seen in words what I believe. I think it only takes a moment,a single second for you to know you’ll love someone. Maybe it takes months for the act itself to happen,could be while you’re watching someone do the dishes,or while you’re looking them in the eyes or just watching a program while you’re laughing at the same parts and then there’s this big feeling of relief that floods you,because it’s finally happened,that love you knew could happen has,and it’s the best moment of your life because from the moment you’re heart has let you feel something,even just a crumb,to that moment of realization,the in between has been nothing but more time to listen to what you already essentially knew.”
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2012 - 01:01 pm Title: Amulets
This was an absolute pleasure!!
[Report This]Date: 01/04/2011 - 09:21 pm Title: Use it
WOW! After that chapter, I totally give you permission to write my sex life anytime. Really fun story. Can't wait to finish it!
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2010 - 01:54 pm Title: Amulets
got quite the chuckle (in a good way) over 'sarah' and 'james'. and i liked the insight spike let us see regarding sarah and james ending. and a very sweet ending, too. and i wouldn't mind at all seeing how buffy writes 'sarah' and 'james' sequel ... enjoyed the tale very much!
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2009 - 10:14 am Title: Amulets
Loved it =D glad Buffy got her happy ending
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2009 - 09:07 am Title: 8
Aww the book ending was sad but fitting and well justified by Buffy, loved the chapter =D
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2009 - 08:09 am Title: Bad Girl
awww loved it =D
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2009 - 07:50 am Title: First Date part deux
Wow Billy Idol, that was brilliant =D
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2009 - 07:43 am Title: First Date
looking forward to see what Spike has planned, great chapter, Lorne is always fabulous =D
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2009 - 07:41 am Title: First Date
looking forward to see what Spike has planned, great chapter, Lorne is always fabulous =D
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2009 - 07:36 am Title: Use it
loved it =D
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2009 - 07:08 am Title: Im not gonna sleep with you
loved it =D
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2009 - 06:57 am Title: I think i like you
haha loved it, Spike and Giles are great together when they're related
[Report This]Date: 07/17/2009 - 06:05 pm Title: Effulgent: Giving off or reflecting light readily or in large amounts.
Loved it, definitely be reading on =D
[Report This]Date: 07/17/2009 - 08:07 am Title: Amulets
Loved it! So sorry to see it end, though!
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2009 - 05:13 pm Title: Amulets
Oh I didn't notice first that this is the end... Good that James will be back too :)
Enjoyed the read :)
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2009 - 12:40 pm Title: Amulets
Great ending! Loved the story! :D
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2009 - 08:03 am Title: Amulets
Yes, I really did enjoy it, thank you very much! So nice to actually read a good story from beginning to end that was actually finished! Good job, you! :)
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2009 - 02:55 am Title: Amulets
Don't think I've reviewed very much but I have been reading and that was so good. Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2009 - 10:38 pm Title: when the wolfbane blooms
*squeal* Absolutely adorable!!! I can't wait to read more :D You've got me hooked. hehe
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2009 - 10:34 pm Title: Crumb
Aww! That was beautiful and inspiring. Nearly brought me to tears. :) I loved it and I'm looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2009 - 05:28 pm Title: when the wolfbane blooms
Loved the update :))
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2009 - 03:02 pm Title: when the wolfbane blooms
This is so hot. I love Spike educating Buffy a little. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2009 - 06:05 am Title: when the wolfbane blooms
I loved the dance scene, and the dialogue throughout the the chapter. Good update! :D