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Reviewer: nmcil Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2010 - 01:42 am Title: Just for tonight

Loved your ending - great way to bring in all the pain and sorrow and tragic effect from her being taken out of her "resting place & heavenly realm" back into the world - and the loss of all joy and peace that should could have had in her life again.

Really glad that you did not have them stay together - your ending feels right. It leaves your reader with all the tragic self-inflicted misery that she brought to herself and gave to Spike.

You have several small errors of tense and sentence structures that you should try to fix - especially as this is such a good first effort and such a good story about a subject that many writers would never try to write about.

Reviewer: eliza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2010 - 01:58 am Title: Just for tonight

Beautiful story, I usually don't like the sad ones. You wrote it with such skill too. Thank you for writing it and good luck with any future stories!

Reviewer: Aria Saralyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2010 - 07:32 pm Title: Soulless

Hey itoy! It's me from BuffyTube!

Your story has an excellent premise, and I only noticed a few punctuation errors. Your style was slightly stiff, but don't worry about it too much, it'll loosen with practice.

Overall, I really enjoyed it! So nice to have a decent version of Seeing Red out there. I love it when Spike stands up for himself!

Keep writing! I'd like to see what you have up your sleeve next!



Author's Response: hey there, sweetie i know about the punctuation and stffiness it's just with no Beta this was the best i could do...maybe next timeit'll be better...and when i'm good enough at it i think i might rewrite this one as well thanks a lot for taking time to read it and for the comment ;)

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2008 - 06:50 am Title: Just for tonight

Ooooo *tear* more please loving it so far.

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2008 - 06:41 am Title: Soulless

OMG how i really wish that is what happened.

Author's Response: yeah..me too...................lol thanks you so much for the review

Reviewer: Luciedo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2008 - 09:06 pm Title: Just for tonight

I'm really enjoying this story. I hope you continue.

Author's Response: thanks...i actually was planning to rewrite only the bathroom scene. and then i thought a Buffy pov would be nice...i'm not sure i can go further...but if you guys like it, i'll try my best

Reviewer: feydruss Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2008 - 05:31 pm Title: Just for tonight

Please continue!

Author's Response: you think i should??...i'm not sure

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2008 - 03:32 pm Title: Just for tonight

How sad! Still loved it, though. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: thanks a lot...i'm not sure there'll be more.but i'm glad you loved it :D

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2008 - 05:12 am Title: Soulless

Love it so far, please continue! :)

Author's Response: thank you so much...i'm so glad you love it...i'll start the buffy pov right away Enny

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2008 - 04:58 am Title: Soulless

Hey, this one was really good, please bring on the Buffy`s POV one!

Author's Response: ok..thanks alot...buffy's pov will be there soon glad you like it

Reviewer: Mia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: Soulless

Lovin it. I read a lot of Spuffy but this start is totally different than anyrhing that I've read before in this time line. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: thanks a million time....that was a very nice of you to say...it gives me the power to go on writing love Enny

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2008 - 07:21 pm Title: Soulless

I wish that had happened in seeing red. Loved it and can't wait for more.

Author's Response: thank you so much...your openion really means a lot i'll be starting the buffy pov now

Reviewer: charlotte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2008 - 05:11 pm Title: Soulless

this was awesome!!!!!! i love it!!!! please keep going!!!!
good job!!

Author's Response: thank you so much...i'm so happy you love it...i'll start the buffy pov right away

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