Reviews For Perfect Kiss
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Reviewer: lily Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 - 05:25 pm Title: one-shot

hey, so cute i just love this. short, sweet, and soooo sweet! :) can anyone say 'sequel!' :)

Reviewer: Slayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2008 - 02:23 pm Title: one-shot

Nice idea. Content's good. I like how you can easily create a following story from it.

I'd work on story structure, though. Each character's dialogue should be separate from one another rather than grouped together. It will make reading the story easier.

Author's Response: Thankyou for reading and leaving a review, as a first time author I appreciate the advice. Thankyou!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 - 07:27 pm Title: one-shot

I think this was a very sweet story.

Author's Response: Thankyou for reading and for leaving a sweet review!!

Reviewer: iivyy13 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 - 12:37 am Title: one-shot

Aw cute, well done Bec. Hope that you write more soon. *hugs*

Author's Response: Thanks Honey, I hope I can write more in the future too! thankyou for the review. *hugs n kisses*

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 06:46 pm Title: one-shot

Did you get that whole kiss thing from Friends? Anyway, this was cute and you have a lot of potential, but I would just suggest that you start another paragraph every time a new person speaks, it's just easier to follow that way. It's not bad for your first fiction, also getting a beta reader could do wonders. Just a little something to think about, but I hope to see more from you=)

Author's Response: First off thanks for the review. Yes I did get the idea from Friends, thankyou for the advice as a new writer I appreciate it and I hope that I'll write more in the future. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 06:43 pm Title: one-shot

Loved it!

Author's Response: Hehe thankyou very much for your review.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 06:05 pm Title: one-shot

VERY CUTE!!

Author's Response: Thankyou for reading and for leaving a review :) I just felt like writing something fluffy :)

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