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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2012 - 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 6

Very cute. Could use an epilogue. A few grammar problems, and a continuity error; when he comes to her apartment she wonders how he knows where she lives, but then you said he'd sent lilies to her apartment the day after their first night together ...

Reviewer: carrot Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2012 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 6

It was great reading, thank you! Through I though he should also give her pink toothbrush or 10 it would make perfect circle

Reviewer: Shay Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 6

You have to give us the wedding! Also, he should move in to her apartment. I think her's is more 'homey'!

Reviewer: meag Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2011 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 6

i say do another chap/epi...cute story

Reviewer: lily Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2009 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ohmygosh. Sweet story. Angst with a great end. Love how light it seemed when she yells at him when he says she lost the ring. So cute. Great writing. Can't wait to read more of your stories. :)

Reviewer: spuffy chick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 03:12 am Title: Chapter 6

liked it....yes, some more, please? :)

Reviewer: sc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 06:01 am Title: Chapter 6

I really, REALLY liked it! And I liked that it was short and sweet.

Reviewer: olinka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2009 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 6

Sex and the City meets BtVS :) Now, that's something you don't see every day. I loved it though

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2009 - 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 6

lol! that last couple lines: hilarious!

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 6

I don't know if you intend to write more on this one but even if you don't it has a satisfying ending. Terrific story. I hope we get more stories from you. You spin a lovely tale.

Reviewer: Pixiecorn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2008 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter 6

i so totally think you should write one more chapter:)....

Reviewer: Alexiyanna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2008 - 11:08 am Title: Chapter 6

Most definitely! Aww bless... you need another chapter based a few years from this one... or a wedding chapter or something to do with a pink toothbrush! i loved it... i really like this fic... aww bless...

Reviewer: ame Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2008 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter 6

more please!!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2008 - 12:41 am Title: Chapter 6

One more chapter!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2008 - 12:38 am Title: Chapter 6

One more chapter!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 6

Very good, I would love an epilogue.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 6

Totally love this fic! More please!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 6

Good reunion, fun with the ring gone. (Loved the quiet moment at the begin / taking pictures.)
I vote for an epilogue, too, please :)

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 6

Epilogue. Please??? ;-)

Reviewer: B.A.S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 6

I really liked this story. Nevertehless I`m a little drama queen and so had wished for more problems, obstacles and... well drama. :P

Reviewer: hhh569 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 6

That was nice. One more chapter. wedding

Reviewer: gilby2388 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 6

OMG OMG OMG that was the GREATEST thing I've ever read in my life!!!!!!!!! I am SO happy right now and that was just SO perfect! That is my way of politely asking/ begging for one or two or five or twenty more chapters. Ya know, whatever works for you. I would love to see more of Spike trying to win Angel over and possibly even some Spike/ Joyce interaction. Anways, I love it and just wanted to let you know that you made my day.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 6

I think there should be one more chapter. It can be an epilogue and we can see there life a few years later or you can do a chapter on the wedding. I loved the story.

Reviewer: Aly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh god that was just perfect, so romantic :) I really love your story and there is no way in hell that you can let us wait that long again for the next chapter. I am literally addicted to this story :)

Reviewer: K_E_M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 10:18 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh, I do love this one, and this chapter was soooo cute! I loved it!

I'd like one more chapter, though, showing Spike living a more familial life lol

I loved it, hope to see more!

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