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Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2009 - 01:37 am Title: Back to Basics

I hope you feel better and that you don't have to go to the hospital. I think that Xander does still have feelings for her and thats why he isn't moving ahead. I hope they can work this out and be friends again.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! I hope so too! I've written a little of Xander and Buffy's talk, and I think it's going to ultimately come down to Xander and Spike being locked in a room together. LOL

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 - 11:04 pm Title: Back to Basics

*sends get well wishes*
Enjoyed the update :)
Xander showed his true colors. If he isn't able to go over it he will lose both - Anya and Buffy.
Looking forward to more when you have time again to post.

Author's Response: Thanks Cordy! Glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for the well wishes! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 - 10:44 pm Title: Back to Basics

Wonder what Xander has up his sleeve. I really don't trust him. Hope you feel better.

Author's Response: :-P Thanks PhotographyNut! Maybe, just maybe we can get some positive Xander action going. Maybe he and Dana will have a thing? Hmmm...LOL. Thanks for your kind words about my health. I hope to be feeling much better soon too!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 - 09:09 pm Title: Daddy's Little Slayer

Finally was able to catch up to the last few chapters. They were a ton of fun. Loved all the Spuffy lovin. I was expecting Buffy to get all agro on Spike for being so jealous but I was pleasantly surprised. I'm glad that you had Buffy reconcile with her father and I hope that they can do so further. It will be interesting to see what happens with Dana in the mix. Will she go postal on their asses? I can't wait to find out!

Author's Response: Thanks Demona! Hope you're able to continue to read! LOL, don't you love it when the jealousy doesn't result in them coming to blows....and I mean violent...not naughty. LOL...:-P

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 - 08:32 pm Title: Back to Basics

Hopefully Xander will pull his head out his backside and actually *try* to get over Buffy and Spike being together.

Hope you start feeling better very soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 - 07:45 pm Title: Back to Basics

Good update. Hope everythig works out between Buffy and Xander, and he doesn't do something stupid . Spike and Anya are right , he's in love with her and can't deal with her being with Spike. :P

Sorry to hear you're not feeling well, hope everything is alright.*hugs*

Take care and update when you're able. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami. I'm feeling ok right now. Not great, but OK. I'm glad you're still reading! I think I've lost some people. :( More about the Xander thing in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Spikesgrl43 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 - 06:36 pm Title: Back to Basics

Really like the story. Sorry to hear you are not feeling well. Get better soon. Looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you like the story! So far, I haven't had to go to the hospital, but if I'm not feeling better by Sunday, I'm definitely going.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 - 12:32 am Title: Daddy's Little Slayer

Love how Buffy ended it with Hank. With a we'll see kind of agreement. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: :) Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 - 10:35 pm Title: Daddy's Little Slayer

Too bad - truth is out now. No way to hide it when Buffy was dusting the vamp. Awe @ moving in.
Giles? That was a good idea to test Dana. But sadly didn't show the danger.
Enjoyed :)

Author's Response: Thanks cordykitten! Lots more to come soon!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 - 09:45 pm Title: Daddy's Little Slayer

That was a great update. So her dad knows buffy is the slayer and is all right with it and spike is going to move in yay. I'm still thinking buffy and spike's claim had something to do with dana not remembering anything anymore about the murders but i could be wrong.





Author's Response: Thanks Jenn!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 - 08:40 pm Title: Daddy's Little Slayer

Good update. So Hank knows she's the Slayer and is alright with it and not freaking out. Buffy and Spike are horny little devils aren't they? hehe So happy she asked him to move in. YAY!! So is Dana coming to Sunnydale? That doesn't sound good.

Liked it , more soon please. =)


Author's Response: :) Thanks Ami! All signs point to yes on Ami's coming to SD!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 - 04:37 pm Title: Daddy's Little Slayer

That was a great update. So her dad knows buffy is the slayer and is all right with it and spike is going to move in yay. I'm still thinking buffy and spike's claim had something to do with dana not remembering anything anymore about the murders but i could be wrong.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! That's an interesting theory about Dana and the claim!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 - 11:24 pm Title: Merry Christmas Eve

Christmas Eve went well for everyone, it seems. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 - 10:01 pm Title: Merry Christmas Eve

Wow the Christmas really went well, regarding the circumstances.
Hot spuffyness :) I think Spike won't miss going shopping a bit ;))

Author's Response: Haha...thank you! I just turned a new corner in the story in Chapter 30, and I'm doing something I really wasn't planning on, but I think it'll work out really well! Hope you'll enjoy it!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 - 07:41 pm Title: Merry Christmas Eve

Lovely chapter. Everyone is getting along pretty well. Loved the exchange of gifts, Spike's gift was so sweet.Liked how they managed to stay behind. hehe.Hot, hot and sexy smut! Loved it!

More soon please. :)

Author's Response: Thanks AMI! Glad you liked the chapter! Lots more to come soon!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 - 07:37 pm Title: Merry Christmas Eve

Wonderful chapter! So sweet with the gifts. Loved it! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Pet! :) Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 - 04:40 pm Title: Merry Christmas Eve

Wow that was hot. that was definitly a great update.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 - 09:34 pm Title: Meet the Parent

Loved it :)
Good decision to take the money instead of letting go Dawn. Clever of her (Dawn) to trick Buffy into taking the money.
Good too for Buffy's sake that she could talk about her feelings with her dad.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, as much as she doesn't want his help, she needs the money!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 - 06:01 pm Title: Meet the Parent

Oooh naked Spike in a pool! Drool...
Glad Buffy had a chance to express all her anger and pain to her dad and also glad Dawn had the sense to accept the money Buffy was being to proud to admit she needed.
I think you've got everyone acting in character, but I hope once they go back to Sunnydale they don't give Hank a second thought. He doesn't really deserve it. IMHO this gesture was too little too late.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! I understand your feelings about Hank. I'm torn, honestly. I want her to have some sort of relationship with her dad, but at the same time, I don't think he can EVER patch up the hole he left in his family.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 - 03:39 am Title: Meet the Parent

Great chappie. The end was really intense, but Buffy needed to get all that grief and rage out. I always wondered why Hank didn't pay child support for Dawn, he had plenty of money and the state would have made him. I guess it was just the writers making Buffy as miserable as possible.
Loved the pool scene... cause wet, naked Spike in a pool? Totally droolworthy. YUMMY!!

Love the way you keep the updates coming regularly.
More soon please. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! There was a lull in my posting for a couple of days, because I wasn't feeling very well, but I think I'm back on track *knock on wood* and I'm already plunging through Chapter 28! :)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 - 02:08 am Title: Meet the Parent

That was honestly beaitiful. You wrote that perfectly i loved it. I hope that now they can maybe start over again and have a relationship that is long overdue.

Author's Response: Aww...Jenn, that's so kind of you! I'm glad you liked it! I'm trying to get the family drama out of the way before the Slayer drama comes in. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 - 01:57 am Title: Meet the Parent

Glad Buffy confided in Hank about what she went through when Joyce got sick. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks PhotographyNut! The next chapter is a Christmas chapter...and probably them leaving for Sunnydale. :) Time to get back to the Xander issues, get Giles back in Sunnydale...get the Dana thing going, get the surprise that comes with the claim out of the way...LOTS TO DO!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 - 12:46 am Title: Answers

I feel awful for Buffy and Dawn I can't believe that was her dad's only reason for not coming around. I love the dr.phil refrence that was funny. can't wait to see when Spike meets Buffy's dad.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! I'll get that chappie up ASAP!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2009 - 10:34 pm Title: Answers

I feel bad for Buffy. She deserves better. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks Photography Nut! Maybe you'll feel a little better after the next chapter...maybe...

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2009 - 09:29 pm Title: Answers

I'm sorry for what happened to your son, but having a family with someone else doesn't erase the family you left behind. True.. but Hank let his first family slip away. And he lost a lot because of that - not sure if he can fix things. He's already alone now. Seems to me it was the wrong decision he made.
And Dana wasn't so calm when she questioned Giles... Travers should watch that.
~ Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks cordykitten! Yeah, Hank made a lousy decision when he let his family slip away. Lots more on that to come soon!

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