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Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2009 - 11:40 pm Title: Come and Get Her

I just read all 64 chapters this week. I am now all caught up. I have really loved this story. I can't wait to see how they deal with the council.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2009 - 05:37 pm Title: Come and Get Her

Secret of the carousel is solved.... clever idea of Travers.
Good talk between Spike and Hank.
And a lot of surprises for Hank, getting to know the secrets of Sunnydale :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2009 - 05:25 pm Title: Faceoff

Makes me wonder now who sent the carousel.
*phew* Good that Faith managed to trick Dana.
Hehe - Somebody order a brainwashed Slayer? *g*

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2009 - 04:04 pm Title: Come and Get Her

Ooh, two new chapters to read! Loved them both. I actually like Hank in this story, he's often not portrayed this nice. Great updates!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2009 - 01:38 am Title: Come and Get Her

Loved the heart to heart between Spike and Hank, was tickled at Buffy's discovery of the spy device Travers sent. Using it to show him that he has failed is just delicious, Buffy deserves to gloat some considering that her unborn child has basically been sanctioned for termination along with her and Spike. Dana is off the mind control juice which in comparison to Spike's chip is basically just as cruel. Faith is really living up to the meaning of her name and it is good to see that she is on the right path to redemption.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 08:11 pm Title: Come and Get Her

Perhaps Hank's not such a jerk after all. Loved his chat with Spike. Not sure Buffy's idea was all that wise...

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 07:45 pm Title: Come and Get Her

I liked Hank and Spike's talk and I'm glad that Hank is taking it better than i thought he would. I should of known that the carousel was from Travers but I was hoping it wasn't.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 06:52 pm Title: Come and Get Her

Loved Buffy's idea! Can't wait to see Travers next move! More please!

Reviewer: Spikesgrl43 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 06:00 pm Title: Come and Get Her

Ooh I love it. It's really getting interesting now.
Great job.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 03:56 pm Title: Come and Get Her

Loved Spike's convo with Hank, good that Hank realizes Spike is good for Buffy. I like B at the end with the musicbox, and taunting Travers. Now let's see what he does.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 01:03 pm Title: Come and Get Her

Waiting for Travers' response..

Enjoying. Poor Dana in handcuffs...

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 09:42 am Title: Faceoff

Oh, well done Faith!
Your plot is getting more and more complex... I love it!

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 03:44 am Title: Faceoff

So glad to see the update! Loving the fic! It's kinda nice to see Hank not being a total POS. And it's also pretty cool to see Faith thinking with the head on her shoulders for a change. More soon, please???
~~Kara

Author's Response: Thank you! LOL, yeah, it's nice when Hank isn't the loser he was on the show, huh?

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 01:40 am Title: Faceoff

Just getting caught up with the story again, my now Spike and Buffy can go all "Pepto Bismal" in the nursey since they know the sex of her unborn child. Unborn, undead and unbalanced - this chapter had all those themes going for it. It was surprising to read that Hank's job which has been his life became life-threatening very much a paralell to Buffy's job as a slayer. Maybe now Hank can appreciate the pressure's Buffy has now that he has had his life in jeopardy. Glad that Faith subdued Dana, keep your enemies closer than your friends seems to be a good stragedy at this point. The carousel may be a trojan horse she may not want in her home. Look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks Vette! :) You were spot on about the carousel, but Buffy's reaction to it might be slightly different than you're expecting...;) Lots more to come soon!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 08:06 pm Title: Faceoff

I loved it. I was worried about Buffy's dad coming but so far so good. I hope they can help Dana before she gets any farther gone then she all ready is. I'm glad that you had a really good vacation and that your feeling better.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 06:35 pm Title: Faceoff

Glad Dana didn't get another shot at brainwashing Faith. Wonder what they will do with her now. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks PN! Yeah, Dana's scary when she's under the influence, isn't she? Lots more to come soon!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 03:39 pm Title: Faceoff

Oh I'm so happy to see an update cause I love this story and I thought you'd be gone longer. =) I liked Hank's talk w/ B and that he accepts Spike, that was cute. Good that Faith got Dana, she was really creeping me out. Now let's see what Travers does.

Welcome back! I'm glad you had fun and that you feel lots better.:)

Can't wait for the next chapie!

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Aww...I'm glad you love the story! Yeah, the trip was a little shorter than expected, but that's ok. :) There'll be another chat between Hank and Spike in the next chapter, and I hope you'll like it! :) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 02:41 pm Title: Faceoff

Welcome back...

And glad Faith took care of Dana ..

Now for the Council...

Author's Response: :) Thanks Pam! Yep...well, the Council's biggest problem is Travers, and I think you'll see a plan set in motion in the coming chapters. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 06:18 pm Title: Unexpected Caller

Wonder if Hank is the one who sent the gift for the baby. Didn't sound like he had the time to do much holed up in his house like that. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks PN! You'll find out soon enough!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 02:16 pm Title: Unexpected Caller

So Buffy's dad is the one took watch out for. Buffy and Spike better watch there backs. have a good trip.

Author's Response: ;) Thanks Jenn!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 02:14 pm Title: It's A...

Awww it's a girl i'm so happy. I'm afarid for buffy's dad but i have a bad feeling about him.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 10:03 am Title: Unexpected Caller

The name teasing was fun :)
Hank calling did only worry Buffy. She will be more worried when she'll know what he has to tell.
Looking forward to more - have fun on your trip :)

Author's Response: I think she'll be worried about her dad and a little less pissed off about him not calling when she hears what he has to say.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 09:39 am Title: It's A...

Mmmh you make me questioning this story now (like is the carousel indeed harmless? Was the pizza poisoned - I know, can't be, Faith did eat it). ;)
And AWE :)) it's indeed a girl! Spike was right.
@ Hank - so he did something he shouldn't, huh? With him hiding... as we see that didn't stop the council from finding her.

Author's Response: Don't worry so much about Faith..;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 09:10 am Title: Get it Done

So it seemed as if Buffy would maybe get used to have Faith there as a back-up. In theory that would be a good thing. But the last part of the chapter? Not so good - but it doesn't show yet who the 'big bad' was that told the Council. Way bad for Buffy.

Author's Response: Thanks Cordy! Actually, I thought I revealed that when Dana was talking to Travers. She was the one who called him. I'll go back and check though.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 03:12 am Title: Unexpected Caller

So, Hank's on his way. That's probably good, I hope. And now we'll have to wait a whole week for the next chapter. *pout* That's bloody torture! *lol* Anyway, have a good time!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks Pet! Well, not a whole week. Trip wasn't as long as we first planned, but I'll try to get a chapter up today. :)

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