Alright well that was kinda disappointing ending. it just kinda trailed off into convo land. anyway, i liked the story as a whole. i thought it was sweet and fluffy and i kinda liked everyone getting along. that being said i do have some constructive criticism. this is in no way meant to be mean so please don't take it that way. i liked your dialogue, but all your characters sounded the same. they all sounded british and this was supposed to be set in Cali. the only brit was supposed to be spike according to you so ya that was just confusing. Also spelling/grammar errors are just irritating to try and read through. Also make sure that if u have show character names and then buffy character names that you keep the worlds names separate. sometimes you called Red Willow on the show altho that may of have been right i just thought her name was Red and same w/ Officer Jones. Also i thought Spike's name was supposed to be Liam on the show? I liked the pairing of Willow and Ford i think it worked well. i liked Xandy he was really cute and i think overall it was a good idea. maybe not the best execution in the world but not that worst. keep writing i did enjoy it

Oh come one!
Seriously, that's not THE END is it?
What about Buffy's & Spike's wedding and kiddies - corny I know but I want it!

Author's Response: Don't worry! There IS a sequel on the way, AND a christmas special!! Thanks for the review - i love them!!

Loved it! I'm hoping you have a sequel planned!

Author's Response: Yup, there is a sequel, starting ina couple of weeks, plus a Christmas special for you, one of my loyal reviewers, thanks for reading my fics, I do really appreciate it! XXXXXXX

Loved Spike and Buffy's interaction with the locals. Great chapter!

Great chapter!

Great chapter!

Where Spike grew up sounds like a wonderful to place to have grown up. Funny about Camilla not knowing who Spike was and saying that he needs to leave because that part isn't open to the public.

That was fun! Looking forward to the tour.

Fantastic chapter as always! :D

Ah they have a kitchen (canteen) too where they get the food if they have to show it off in the show. Or is that just an exception?
Mmmm yummy food in this chapter. :)

I love this story and will continue to read it. The only thing I will admit that I'm not loving a whole lot is the parts where the readers are reading about the show. I don't mind reading them acting in the show a little. I just think it is a little too much at times. That is just my opinion. But it is your story. You should write it the way you want. But I really am enjoying this story.

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for your review! I do appreciate what you say, and thought that if I put 'Scene whatever before i write, those who don't want to read the acting parts needed and skip over them!! But again, thank you for still reading and reviewing, i'm very grateful!!

Enjoyed the update :)
It fun to read both, the 'dinner (TV Series)' and the story of Buffy and Spike.

I love it. Hope all is well with you and you know I am reading!