[Report This]Date: 05/23/2010 - 08:27 pm Title: Part 3: The Watching Game
There is no way this is your first fanfic. This is absolutely amazing! The description puts you right in the--erm--action and the dialogue is spot-on with the characters. And on top of it all, you have a delicious set-up. Hat's off to you because, as a fellow writer, I am jealous. Can't wait to see more. ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I actually haven't written much of anything, much less fiction, in about ten years, and never fanfic. A lot of credit goes to my beta dusty273 for the polish :-).
[Report This]Date: 05/23/2010 - 12:01 pm Title: Part 3: The Watching Game
Ohhhh that was hot again, hotness pure. :)
And at the end to the chapter when Spike thought about the living in Los Angeles I wondered where Buffy city will be....or the new job?
~ Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: ... don't get ahead of me here... ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05/23/2010 - 10:52 am Title: Part 3: The Watching Game
*two cold showers later* Very hot! also love the line: "A cock like that should be preceded be a drum roll. Or at the very least, a ‘ta-dah!’" LOL!! Great chapter!
Author's Response: LOL, thank you! I was particularly proud of that one. It occurred to me as I was falling asleep one night, and I started giggling so much that I had to write it down so I wouldn't forget it. It's how I like to think JM would look nekkid.
[Report This]Date: 05/23/2010 - 09:19 am Title: Part 3: The Watching Game
a sizzler of epic proportions
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you. I feel like it should have some kind of movie score now... ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2010 - 01:52 pm Title: Part 2: The Opening Games
Ooooh Spike got Buffy very excited alone with words. Hot chapter!
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I have such a weak spot for dirty-talking Spike. More in the next chapter, I promise!
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2010 - 02:02 pm Title: Part 1: Prologue
WOW. More, please more.
Author's Response: More to come, since you asked so nicely!
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2010 - 11:17 am Title: Part 2: The Opening Games
Wow! Just Wow...
Author's Response: Thanks! Just thanks... ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2010 - 12:34 am Title: Part 2: The Opening Games
GAH!! Oh god, this was HOT! Spike is such a sexy beast...loved his words. *fans self*
More, more, more, plz!
Author's Response: I know, if I could find this Spike, I'd never leave the house! More to come ;-)...
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2010 - 12:21 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
Oooh Great start! Looking forward to the rest, and the naughtiness...lol
Author's Response: Lots more naughtiness in the next chapter, I swear!
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2010 - 10:52 pm Title: Part 2: The Opening Games
*fanning one's self* HOT...that's all I can say!
Author's Response: I'd be lying if I said the fact that the author of 'Room With a View' thinks something I wrote is hot isn't AWESOME! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2010 - 10:42 pm Title: Part 2: The Opening Games
Damn that was HOT!!!
Author's Response: Muchas gracias!
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2010 - 03:16 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
I love what you're doing so far, and I can't wait to see where you're going with it! Update soon please! Feed the need.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More feeding soon ;-).
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2010 - 12:05 pm Title: Part 1: Prologue
Ah I wondered how the people were chosen - so you have to answer a lot of questions. And everybody has to pay for this. Sounds as if the company is making good money; sounds too as if it is worth it.
Love the start, will look out for the rest. :)
Author's Response: Some of it will remain a mystery as to the whole workings of The Island (I'm going to focus more on the B/S relationship), and it's only going to be less than ten chapters total, but I promise to answer as much as possible ;-).
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2010 - 11:37 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
Nice beginning, can't wait to read more. This is going to be a fun story. Please post soon.
Author's Response: I will try my best to live up to the 'fun.' Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2010 - 10:39 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
I am very inrigued to find out what happens next
Author's Response: Ooo, intrigue, I would have settled for mild puzzlement! Thanks, next chapter soon :-).
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2010 - 10:33 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
Im very interested! Hope you will continue writing coz im curious to see how naughty they can be! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm trying to stay a chapter ahead of my fabulous beta at this point, so I will post again after the weekend, and the next installment begins The Naughty...
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2010 - 03:13 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
I'm intrigued. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! Things will start to unfold a bit better in the next part (I hope). Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2010 - 02:42 am Title: Part 1: Prologue
More please!!!
Author's Response: More after the weekend, I promise!
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2010 - 10:53 pm Title: Part 1: Prologue
Love the start. My interest is definitely piqued!!!
Author's Response: Muchas gracias! And thanks for reviewing :-).
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2010 - 10:16 pm Title: Part 1: Prologue
this fic definitly has my attention, i'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter will hopefully be up after the weekend ;-).
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