

Date: 01/21/2011 - 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 4: In too Deep
Didn't think she would make it .. glad it wasn't a wreck that sent her back..
enjoyed. now for something hot as in food and drink.. and true confessions I hope.
Author's Response: No, even though this story is full of heartbreak, I couldn't do that to our couple. I'm glad you enjoyed

Date: 01/10/2011 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter 3: The End
This is turning out to be a great story. You definitely have my attention. Please update soon. I am so into this one. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks SG! I hope I'm able to keep your attention until the end.

Date: 01/09/2011 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
oooh i cant wait to see how you get this two bak together! ill be looking out for the nxt chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for stopping by and giving this story a chance total geek! More will be coming soon, I promise

Date: 01/09/2011 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
Excellent sad, heartbreaking chapter. Your story is breaking my heart. God they still love each other so much, but they have just stopped talking. Agh! Hopefully her car won't start...just a suggestion. ;)
I was sniffling at the end, plz post more soon. I love this story.
Author's Response: Here's a tissue, AMI. I'm sorry the story is so sad, but I feel that you and many others find it so because so many times people find themselves in this position. They love each other so much, but all the bull gets in the way. I hope you'll read on. thanks for reading and reviewing.

Date: 01/09/2011 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
Sad, emotional chapter but well written.
Looking forward to more to make it better again.
Author's Response: Thanks Cordy. Seeing your name always makes me smile : )

Date: 01/09/2011 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
As usual, fantastic.
Author's Response: Thanks Scooby and welcome to my world of fanfiction. I hope you'll enjoy your stay!

Date: 01/09/2011 - 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
Gosh, you write so well, D!
I too noticed that pen clicking thing and the cold leather as she put her coat back on and such - people concentrating on such things in those tense and ending situations.
By the time that the hugged, I was teary eyed and just screaming in my head: 'don't you dare let go of him, Buffy! hold on for the dear life!'
but then they parted and I really, really want to know what happened between those two. I mean, only 3 chapters into the story and I already feel so much for the two of them, like I'd have known them for alot more than that.
Love this story. Simply said :)
*hugs tight*
Author's Response: *big blushing* Thanks so much, Shard! I so can picture you cursing me for doing this, sorry but you know I love you, right? I'm glad you're enjoying my story. It means so much to me that you do.

Date: 01/09/2011 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter 3: The End
I really, really like this story. Emotive and full of promise, pain, passion........ Yeah. A very promising Spuffy.
Author's Response: Big thanks sue! I hope my story lives up to your expectations.

Date: 01/08/2011 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
I love this story. Its so well written, every minute detail prolongs the angst. I had a lump in my throat after reading this one. More please & soon
Author's Response: Thanks ss! I blush you find this so well written. More will be coming.

Date: 01/08/2011 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
I like the concentration on mundane activities in this chapter, like the detail about clicking the pen. Illustrated really well the intensity of the moment, the way people focus on odd things when they're very upset. The same could be said for Will gathering up a hand full of pens. Funny and sad at the same time.
Author's Response: I'm glad you picked up on this and found the meaning behind it, instead of seeing it as meaningless filler. Thanks!

Date: 01/08/2011 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
More More More!! I am absolutely hooked on this story loved this chapter. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I wished you left you name so I could thank you properly, but I'll try my best. Thank you, hidden viewer for taking the time to read and review this story. I will be updating soon.

Date: 01/08/2011 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
You 're killing me here! This is a great start to this story and I'm dying to find out what is causing Will to shut Buffy out?
Stop torturing me and post more soon!
Author's Response: Welcome Leanne! I love reading reviews, thanks for appeasing my desire! I'm sorry to torture you, but all will be revealed soon, my pretty!

Date: 01/08/2011 - 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 3: The End
does nature now take things into their own hands...causing the snow to strand these two together? I'm hoping so. Buffy better not even make it down the road.
Author's Response: Welcome u2fan2005! I'm so glad you've stopped by to read and review! *giggle* Buffy is a determined woman, but her determination might not be enough!

Date: 01/08/2011 - 11:03 am Title: Chapter 3: The End
Very Sad..
Bad to travel on a wintery night..
Author's Response: Sorry to make you sad, Pam. Hopefully, with each chapter, I'll make you happier!

Date: 01/08/2011 - 10:39 am Title: Chapter 3: The End
Good. chapter. It is amazing how little words are necessary when ending a marriage. Great job conveying their feelings. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks Bridget! Yeah, it's amazing after all is said and done, such little words can end something so, at one point in time, big.

Date: 01/03/2011 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 2: Uninvited Guest
This story is so good and so sad. I wasn't gonna read at first cause of the angst warning(didn't feel like reading a broken up Spike/Buffy), but I'm glad I did. You write them beautifully. I can feel the pain they're both in. What happened to break them up? It must have been awful (I'm guessing the death of a baby?)
The snake incident was a light moment in an otherwise sad chappie.
I can't wait for their conversations to start. And the "magical" cabin to bring them together when they get snowed in. (At least I hope that's what happens ;] )
Enjoying very much....hope you post more soon. Happy New Year!
Author's Response: *blush* thanks so much Ami for giving this story and me a chance! All will be revealed in the upcoming chapters and I hope it will answer all your questions.

Date: 01/03/2011 - 12:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Uninvited Guest
Love the tiny bits of deja vu going round. Wonder where all the reminiscing will lead them. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing BR! I just, as of yesterday, updated! Hope you'll enjoy

Date: 01/02/2011 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 2: Uninvited Guest
I'm really enjoying your take on this Buffy and Spike. I feel bad for both of them and curious to what trauma they shared that led to all of this. Two chapters in and we know so very little of the angst between them. Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks kudagirl! I normally don't write Buffy and Spike this way. I'm glad it's working for you. More coming, actually chapter 3 is up!

Date: 12/31/2010 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 2: Uninvited Guest
when there was a word 'snake' i shook just like Buffy always does when she drinks alcohol. in a blllleeeeaaaacccchhhh kind of way :D
and then I even went and typed in on how that snake looks like... and gosh...I'm so not a snake fan! I have actually heard of those saying about the colors though..just forgot about them.
Anyway, enough of my little phobia, The chapter was fun and sad at the same time. Sadness was in there deep and the funny moment was at the surface. Loved it! Especially the part when Buffy threatened Spike with a cookware - I'd do exactly the same in that situation :D
Can't wait to see what that something was that destroyed their marriage and happiness... I won't even start to guess... It had to be painful though..
oh, and I love the summary :D
Much love to you and your family!! And a Happy New Year to you!! :D
Author's Response: TEHE!!!! I'm not afraid of snakes, but I've seen people who have fears about them and I know it's not right, but I find it so funny. Besides the poisonous ones, they are more afraid of you then you are of it. Sorry to tease you Shard! You know I love ya! Happy New Year to you! Big Hugs!!!

Date: 12/31/2010 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 2: Uninvited Guest
very heartbreaking chapter. sniff. two people so previously in love now can't live with each other. and the saddest part of all? there's more of that concept in the world now than love and kindness and joy.
looking forward to my questions being answered 'cause i have a lot of them ...
Author's Response: Sorry to make you sad rkm. I'm glad this chapter raised many questions, and I hope I'll answer each and everyone in chapters to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing

Date: 12/31/2010 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 2: Uninvited Guest
Good to see an update - and yes, the snake thing was fun.
But you made me curious what Spike missed - sounds like somebody died. First I thought it was Buffy's mother but it doesn't make sense for Spike's behavior - maybe a baby then when Buffy was pregnant?
Author's Response: It was good to see you read and reviewed this Cordy. I enjoyed writing the snake part. A little brand of my humor in the midst of saddness. I'm glad you're curious to what Will missed and why there is so much tension between them. All will be revealed, promise

Date: 12/31/2010 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 2: Uninvited Guest
My guess for guilt on both parts would be loss of an unborn child..
enjoyed but still sad..
Author's Response: Thanks Pam for reviewing and reading. As for the reason, it will be revealed in due time.

Date: 12/30/2010 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Cold
Hehehe... Love their angry coming together. And the ominous weather in the air that is inevitably going to force them to work out their issues in the magical cabin. Love the start, and their dynamic. Update soon!
Author's Response: Are you doing it again? Get out of my head missy! If I didn't know any better I would think you're my doppleganger or something! LOL. I will be updating soon! I actually have several chapters already written...shhhh don't tell anyone! LOL!
Date: 12/30/2010 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: Cold
Sad start - hope you'll make it better :)
Happy New Year to you.
Author's Response: I promise, it will get better. Happy New Year to you also, Cordy!

Date: 12/29/2010 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Cold
This is going to be a good one. I love your writing. Thanks for giving us another great story to read. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: *blushing* Thanks Spikesgirl. I'm so glad you enjoy my writing. I enjoy writing, so it works out great for both of us! Next chapter will be coming soon!