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Reviewer: Jasmine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2011 - 12:00 am Title: When in Rome

Its a great cliff hanger will you continue?????

Reviewer: no_promises Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2011 - 09:30 am Title: When in Rome

"I knew…-S. "
6 little letters brought tears to my eyes.
please continue

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2011 - 09:10 am Title: When in Rome

Buffys marriage is domed, she doesn't seem to love him enough (another Riley) and now Spike is near.

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2011 - 06:22 am Title: When in Rome

with her now married, how will spike react, feel? oh boy - i see nothing but heartache and misconceptions for buffy and spike ...

Author's Response: Thanks for your comment! He's definitely going to react in typical Spike fashion...stay tuned!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 09:05 pm Title: When in Rome

This is intriguing, her husband seems like a good sort of person. I hate to tell you, but there are a few typos, including "sweat" cake instead of "sweet" cake. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks fir your comment. I'm very new to writing so I'm definitely learning. And yes, her husband is an extremely good guy, but sometimes that's not enough.

Author's Response: For* (damn iphone)

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 09:04 pm Title: When in Rome

Great beginning! I'm looking forward to reading more. And Spike is human now?

Author's Response: Well if you noticed in the first chapter...he had a pulse, and the sun wasn't burning him. Sooo maybe :-p thanks for your comments!!

Reviewer: Spikesgrl43 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 09:49 am Title: All Around Me

Very good first chapter. Looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Im working on the next chapters as we speak!

Reviewer: no_promises Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2011 - 08:22 am Title: All Around Me

I like the beginning. I am looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Im very glad you liked it. It's pretty gloomy outside today so I hope to get a chapter or two out this weekend :)

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