Reviews For A Second Start
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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2014 - 12:03 pm Title: New Beginnings

Pretty cute story but trite. Moved a bit too quickly to be believable or have real drama. Several grammar errors.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2014 - 11:57 am Title: First Impressions

Grammar errors (there are a couple of "yours" here that should be "you're." And Buffy sounds British. :-)

Reviewer: Titchie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2014 - 03:19 pm Title: The Date

I like it. But it feels as though there is a missing scene between the kiss and going on the date? One minute she's running saying she was bored & the next agreeing to go an a date? Am a missing a section?

Reviewer: spikesgurl1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2013 - 07:12 pm Title: The Kiss

cant wait to read more. (:

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2013 - 01:27 am Title: The Kiss

An emotionally damaged Buffy. I like it. Loved the kiss and her reaction. Spike will need to prove to her that all men aren't the same. Looking forward to more.

Cupboard is a closet, right? Sorry!!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2013 - 01:22 am Title: First Impressions

I like your writing style. Dialogue is good.

Reviewer: Lucy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2013 - 05:53 am Title: The Kiss

Great chapter ! I hope you'll update soon :)

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