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Date: 10/02/2025 - 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 24

This scene is filled with power and intensity

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Date: 09/25/2025 - 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 23

Spike is so very smug and this clearly feels like a victory to him

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Date: 09/25/2025 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 22

Spike is so very good to lead them on

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Date: 09/24/2025 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 21

So deliciously wrong and hot

Author's Response: Is upated. More details about Dawn and Buffy "sharing Spike"

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Date: 09/24/2025 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 20

The tension is building even stronger here, good

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Date: 08/27/2025 - 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 19

The erotic tension is so strong and the wrongness of the situation adds so much to it

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Date: 08/26/2025 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 18

Its so delicious to read Spikes manipulations, he has set it up so perfectly

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Date: 08/25/2025 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 17

Spike has put a lot of planning into this trap, but even knowing that, Buffy walks in

Author's Response: Have expanded chapter 17

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Date: 08/24/2025 - 08:16 am Title: Chapter 16

The Spike persona seems to have completely taken over now Everything is so wrong and right

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Date: 08/23/2025 - 10:37 am Title: Chapter 15

I liked what we saw of Spike and Faith, it was so very fitting in how they talked and acted

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Date: 08/14/2025 - 07:18 am Title: Chapter 13

This was of course extremely hot, but its a dangerous game they are playing

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Date: 08/13/2025 - 06:40 am Title: Chapter 12

Now hes flirting with Faith too, Well, I suppose a mess can never be too big

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Date: 08/12/2025 - 07:08 am Title: Chapter 11

It is good to see that Buffy has a friend like Faith

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Date: 08/11/2025 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 10

The texting with Dawn is a sweet thing in the rest of the mess

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Date: 08/09/2025 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter 9

Im basically saying the same thing over and over, but this is so deliciously messed up and hot

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Date: 08/06/2025 - 06:29 am Title: Chapter 8

It seems like William is all about listening to the Spike voice now, which was no secret he would

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Date: 08/05/2025 - 06:36 am Title: Chapter 7

Its so messy and so good, what more can I say?

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Date: 08/04/2025 - 07:47 am Title: Chapter 6

I do like how he has these two personas, Spike and William

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Date: 08/04/2025 - 07:43 am Title: Chapter 5

Naturally Buffys thoughts would be going round and round That awkward little talk with Dawn, but I couldnt help liking it

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Date: 08/01/2025 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter 4

Williams thoughts on the messy situation was done well, how he talked to the persona of Spike I liked that he has Liam as a friend

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Date: 07/31/2025 - 08:31 am Title: Chapter 3

This is such a deliciously messy situation I like what Faith is saying and she is right in the more serious part, Buffy didnt do anything wrong

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Date: 07/30/2025 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter 2

I enjoy this this interaction, Spike is very good

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Date: 03/27/2025 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

And here we got to see some of the background information for this story, I like what I see here

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