[Report This]Date: 05/15/2006 - 01:18 pm Title: Forgiving
Can't wait for you to finish this fic one day. It's a great fic.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 02:51 pm Title: Forgiving
cant wait to see what happens next!!!
Date: 04/10/2005 - 12:35 pm Title: Forgiving
YAY! you up-dated MORE please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/07/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: Forgiving
Awesome chapter. Love the apology from Buffy....and that it happened in the place that ultimately changed her forever...and very appropriate that she was there with William. Best chapter yet.
Date: 04/06/2005 - 07:07 am Title: Forgiving
Thrilled to see a new chapter of this story. I caught it recently over at aff.net and just devoured it whole. I'm enjoying this progression with Will and Buffy, tentative but so sweet and honest. Can't wait for more!
Date: 04/05/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: Forgiving
GREAT UPDATE
Date: 04/05/2005 - 02:42 pm Title: Forgiving
Why do you have to make spike a wuss? Waiting patiently for Buffy to return his love and want. Why can't buffy realise what she is missing instead of crying over Angel? I believe William should find a girlfriend and change his appearance instead of lusting over someone who obviously ain't feeling the same.
Author's Response: this isnt about Spike, its about William. They are different sides of the same person, But William was a wuss on the show. Did you not watch him with Cecily? As for changing his appearance, that will happen in time just be patient. BTW Buffy is not crying over Angel, She is crying over the fact that she trusted him and he betrayed her in the worst possible way. Therefore she's crying over her stupidity for trusting and being with Angel instead of staying with William like she now knows she should have.
Date: 04/05/2005 - 01:59 pm Title: Truth Hurts
I don't understand why authors think it's OK to include rape in so many stories.
Why was this necessary? Don't you understand that is is not a minor thing?
Are you so lacking creativity that you can't think of anything else to do?
Author's Response: The rape was necessary BECAUSE of it not being a minor thing. Yes Rape is a big thing, hence the WARNINGS. If you have been raped then Im sorry, but there ARE warnings so maybe you shouldnt be reading this story. Now as to why it was necessary, It was necessary for an important plot line in this fic. Buffy no longer trusts people which will come up again. Would it have been better if he'd beat her up or something else all nice and abusive? Not liking how a story is going does not give you a right to imply that I lack creativity. Frankly, I dont see any of YOUR stories. Insults aren't welcome here, only constructive criticism
Date: 04/05/2005 - 12:01 pm Title: Forgiving
I am ecstatic to see you back! Talk about a cliffhanger, and for 3 months! This was a very sweet chapter. Poor Buffy, nobody should have to learn a lesson like that. I'm glad you had her character go to the police. So often in fanfics, the men just get away with it, which is so frustrating. I hope that you give us another chapter soon!
Date: 01/06/2005 - 01:00 am Title: Regret
Oh thats so sad. I'm glad that you made Angel an asshole though. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 01/04/2005 - 10:43 pm Title: Regret
Okay, why the hell is she blaming WIlliam? Sorry, righteous indgination. I have faith all will make sense eventually. Great chapter, btw.
Date: 01/03/2005 - 10:37 pm Title: Regret
Wow, I've just read this one fifteen chapters at a sitting and I couldn't put it down. Love the drama and the tension and the sweetness and the love and the....jeez, pathological cruelty. Angel's a very messed up sick guy with serious issues of his own. If he were real I'd hope he gets what's coming to him. Since this is a story I'll let you tell it any way you want to - but it's a great ride so far! I can understand Buffy pushing Wililam away. She can't be sure who to trust right now, and her soul and her psyche is just raw pain and anger. I'm betting she settles down and figures things out before long. More please... :-)
Date: 01/03/2005 - 08:03 pm Title: Regret
can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01/03/2005 - 07:26 pm Title: Regret
can someone please give Buffy a hard smack on her head!!!! man she is one really infuriating girl..... hope Buffy and William will get pass this ordeal.
Date: 01/03/2005 - 06:18 pm Title: Regret
why wont she let him help her?
Date: 01/03/2005 - 11:12 am Title: Regret
I just read the entire story and you're doing a great job with it! I didn't expect Buffy to be so harsh with William, since he seems to be the only one supporting her, but I'm sure you have something planned. As horrible as the tape was, now she at least has something to use against them and I can't wait for Angel and Parker to get what's coming to them! Update soon!
Date: 01/03/2005 - 11:08 am Title: Regret
I've really enjoyed this story up to now, it'a had a few ups and downs and mostly I've wanted to cuff Buffy upside her narcissitc and self-involved head. Poor William. I wanted to give you a heads up incase anyone who doesn't know, gives you a problem with the direction of the story and where it seems you are taking it. For any of those who don't know. What is included in rape is also when a persons ability to consent is taken away from them. In a case like this it would be a little bit tricky but they did remove her ability to consent to the act, so legally it would be sexual assault. Keep up the wonderful work, I'll be looking for the next update.
Date: 12/27/2004 - 12:11 am Title: Truth Hurts
i hope that buffy presses charges against angel and most especially parker for rape. because, that's what it was.
Date: 12/25/2004 - 11:05 pm Title: Truth Hurts
I CAN'T BELIEVE ANGEL DID THAT BUT BUFFY WAS BEING A BITCH THOUGH. I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE CHOSE ANGEL OVER WILLIAM. SHE DIDN'T DESERVE WHAT ANGEL DID THOUGH. I HOPE WILLIAM FORGIVES HER. SHE'S GOT ALOT OF MAKING UP TO DO.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 07:30 pm Title: Truth Hurts
wow he is such a jerk
Date: 12/23/2004 - 01:39 pm Title: Truth Hurts
can't wait for the next one!
Date: 12/23/2004 - 11:34 am Title: Truth Hurts
All I can say is "Oh my God!" Of all the things to happen I did not ever expect that. Poor Buffy, that is one of the worst things that can happen to a girl and it makes me tear up just thinking about it. Please tell me that Angel goes through something painful and longlasting, namely with his balls. Great story by the way. Please update soon! It will be torture to wait!
Date: 12/10/2004 - 08:22 pm Title: Day After
loved the updates
Date: 12/10/2004 - 04:08 am Title: Day After
Hmm, wonder what's in the box? Maybe something she'll feel an undying urge to slap him (again) for? A girl can only hope. ;)
Date: 12/10/2004 - 12:18 am Title: Day After
love it ...crave more...
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