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Date: 12/02/2005 - 11:25 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

The dreaded trip home. Random parental tension is bad enough without having major trauma thrown into the mix. And Spike is a wonderful boyfriend to know that sometimes its just better to agree with your woman than to truly believe its the right thing to do. Great chapter.

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Date: 11/30/2005 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Our little girl is moving on and living her life. That really is love. A beautiful chapter. And even though I know there will be more bumps in the road, I'm glad they're getting a little happiness first. Wonderful story.

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Date: 11/30/2005 - 12:08 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Wow, you're good, because for the last chapter or so, I completely forgot about the family problem things up to come. I imagine that will bring some fun drama. And an interlude with barred funiture and silk scarves is always worth it. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 11/29/2005 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

For what it's worth, I was happy with the chapter. They had a happy morning after infused with omlettes, more love making, and bits of deep confessions and declarations of commitment. I hope he can make her be not afraid again. Such a deperate and beautiful plea. I love how their relationship has developed from such deep loathing hatred to such a deep bond. They are so much better together, stronger than the sum of their parts. Even without your muse, your storytelling is wonderful. Great chapter.

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Date: 11/29/2005 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter Twelve

That was wonderful, after beating around the bush for so long, they were finally able to get past the pain that was keeping them apart, and Buffy was able to confide her darkest secret. I'm sure we're not all sunshine and puppy dogs now, but connecting those two events really makes that night so much more meaningful to them, and made the weight so worth it. A divine chapter. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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Date: 11/29/2005 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Amazing what happens when you lose all of that dead weight, aka: Riley. Not to mention Anya's fabulous description of the situation, "You're with Riley, but you seem to have as much interest in him as you would in a moldy potato." Though I have to give Riley credit for sort of picking up that there was something to pick up on. Loved the chapter, and the singing is always so sexy, especially if they end up together...

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Date: 11/29/2005 - 12:00 am Title: Chapter Ten

Riley's the right thing to do and thing's will be better when Spike moves out, this girl has got to get her world priorities back in order. My goodness, why does she let common, emotionaless sense make all of her decisions... and that is going against the financial assistence that she really does need. But I will hang on tight and enjoy the ride because everything working out is always way more fulfilling when it all falls apart first. Great chapter. Loved the whole monotony of the date with Riley, too.

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Date: 11/28/2005 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter Nine

Love defending "brother" Spike. And I'm sure we can all make it through the Riley parts knowing there is plenty of Spuffy in the aftermath. Fabulous chapter.

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Date: 11/27/2005 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter Eight

And there is the devil. And the really evil devil. This chapter just has it all. Our first smidge of what they have, and then that first smidge of what else is out there trying to keep them apart... not to mention all of the angst. So utterly wonderful.

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Date: 11/27/2005 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Seven

That is so touching. Maybe one day she'll tell him what happened. Great chapter.

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Date: 11/27/2005 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Six

Poor Faith, and as depressing as what happened to her is, its nice to see her show up in this world. And I love that Spike is trying so hard to comfort Buffy. They really are good for each other. Great chapter.

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Date: 11/27/2005 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter Five

Love that perceptive Anya. Another great chapter.

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Date: 11/27/2005 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Four

My golly, I bet neither would even admit to having a conversation, but I can say they were. I do love the progression of the story with the little bits of the past your letting us into. Great chapter.

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Date: 11/27/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter Three

I like Spike being all concerned even if he's trying not to be. And I like how she's trying to be impressed by the fact he's pitching in a tiny bit. Love the way this is slowly building.

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Date: 11/27/2005 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Two

That poor little girl. What could have happened to make her so broken and lost. Great chapter. Can's wait for a bit of UST.

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Date: 11/27/2005 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter One

That's a great place to leave it, and with a classic quote. Especially since the next chapter is just there, waiting for me to read it. :) And I love Willow, all "And if I'm not, you'll help me hide the body, right?"--that's a good friend. Wonderful chapter... though I wonder why Buffy is not in the good with Joyce... can't wait to find out more.

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Date: 11/27/2005 - 10:53 pm Title: Prologue: The Wedding

Infuriating disagreements sure make things interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 11/18/2005 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

OK - Now that I have just discovered this story (and stayed up way past my bedtime reading it), you cannot stop now! You really are an excellent writer, and I look forward to updates. Great job!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2005 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

incredible updates keep up the good work

Reviewer: spuffy101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Lovin the story. Keep up the gd work and plz update soon!!!!!!! **holding a cookie out as bribery**

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2005 - 11:11 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Definetely keep up the good work. Joyce is such a bitch in this one, but it is a good plot point.

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Date: 10/14/2005 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Joyce is grrrrrr...I'm hoping you'll put more of her in the next chapter- the thought of Spike defending Buffy again, or even Joyce finding out about the two is a good thought.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2005 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Somebody just got smack Joyce right now! Love the tale. Love the Spuffy-lovin'. More please.

Reviewer: lacey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2005 - 12:38 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Stupid stupid joyce i love buffy she is awesome in this story and I think joyce needs to stop being such a bitch......although i loved this chapter plz update soon!!

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2005 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Great story. When is Joyce gonna stop being such a bitch!? Keep it coming.

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