Date: 12/20/2004 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh, hahaha! Now I won't have to bring out the butter knives. But, I can always save them for later. :D Loved the chapter. Wow I love it when you right "Buffy's pregnant" fics. *sigh* Okay. Now get to work on the next chapter. :D
Date: 12/20/2004 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 17
wow what a socker at the end ..please update again
Date: 12/20/2004 - 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 17
:::gasps::: Oh my God!! No way! Drama. I so can't wait to read what's going to happen next. Update soon.
Date: 12/20/2004 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 17
stumbled across this song today and just had to put it in my review...thought you might coudl use it...love the chapter btw Don't stand so close to me - Sting Young teacher the subject Of schoolgirl fantasy She wants him so badly Knows what she wants to be Inside her there's longing This girl's an open page Book marking - she's so close now This girl is half his age Don't stand, don't stand so Don't stand so close to me Don't stand, don't stand so Don't stand so close to me Her friends are so jealous You know how bad girls get Sometimes it's not so easy To be the teacher's pet Temptation, frustration So bad it makes him cry Wet bus stop, she's waiting His car is warm and dry Don't stand, don't stand so Don't stand so close to me Don't stand, don't stand so Don't stand so close to me Loose talk in the classroom To hurt they try and try Strong words in the staff room The accusations fly It's no use, he sees her He starts to shake and cough Just like the old man in That book by Nabakov Don't stand, don't stand so Don't stand so close to me Don't stand, don't stand so Don't stand so close to me Don't stand, don't stand so Don't stand so close to me
Date: 12/20/2004 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 16
My heart is officially broken. They didn't have to break up for ever, did they? They could have taken a break until school's over, right? Damn it! Poor Buffy. I guess she could have been a little more understanding of Spike's situation, but it's true that when you're getting your heart broken, logic flies out the window. And in her defense, Spike didn't seem like he even tried finding a solution. But he's scared so I'll forgive him for this one.
Date: 12/20/2004 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 17
nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! u cant stop there. i won;t be able to sleep tonight!!!!!!!! update soon please, i luv the story soooooooo much!!!!!! my fav on this site
Date: 12/20/2004 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 17
holy moly! as if there isn't enough drama in her life right now. how in the hell is she gonna tell him? man, when the angst flows in your stories it's a raging river. poor Buffy. god, she must feel so alone right now. i just hope she doesn't do anything that she may regret later. loving this story, angst and all!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 17
Well, this is one of the most original stories I've ever read. I just joined the site and this is one of the first stories I've read, since I've heard you are a really good writer. And I must say, they were right! Please continue
Date: 12/20/2004 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 17
WOW that was a shocker!!!!! i didnt expect that at all !!!! great chapter
Date: 12/20/2004 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 17
All I can say is WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update as in yesterday. I can't wait to read more
Date: 12/20/2004 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMFG! That was a curve ball. I totally wasn't expecting that. Eeek! Now you have to update more often! Please please please!!!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 17
WHAT?! no! no, you can't end it there!!!! aaaaaaaaaah! *hyperventilates* i love this story and i demand you continue!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 16
awesome chapter i must say!!! cant wait till the next one is up
Date: 12/20/2004 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
This is a great story keep writing
Date: 12/20/2004 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 16
Sorry that I never reviewed for any other chapters. I saw this fic before but never got the chance to read it til now. Very nice. Your the most awesomest. :P I love all of your fics and this is quickly starting to be one of my favorites. I really, really think you should update tonight. Because...that would be nice. :D Plus if you don't....I have butter knives.
Date: 12/20/2004 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 16
please please please, post another chapter tonight, ill be forever grateful
Date: 12/20/2004 - 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 16
I love this story. This is a really good clifhanger but please don't leave us hanging. Please post another chapter or maybe...2? LoL
Date: 12/20/2004 - 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
Damn, that chapter needed a major hanky warning.Very powerful writing. Could feel every emotion that was going through them both. Maybe after she turns eighteen they can get back together...if Spike does some major grovelling?
Date: 12/20/2004 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter 16
Tears. I loved how you used some dialogue of episodes. It was really heart breaking. Thank you for writing.
Date: 12/20/2004 - 11:03 am Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter ;)
Date: 12/20/2004 - 10:33 am Title: Chapter 16
since this seems to be going down the wrong path i'll give you a little time to FIX IT. please hurry and update again soon :)
Date: 12/20/2004 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter 16
I liked this chapter. Reality is a bitch.
Date: 12/20/2004 - 09:49 am Title: Chapter 16
this is an awesome fic, i hope you keep going with it, i can't wait to see what happend next! i hope they can find a way to be together...or maybe it could flash to the future where they meet up again! anyways, keep going, i look foward to it!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 09:34 am Title: Chapter 16
great chapter!!! i most definitely want another one tonight....and k know i'm being greedy bt i am totally hooked on love on the run...could we have one of those too?
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