
Date: 01/07/2005 - 08:45 pm Title: A charmed slumber
i still feel for buffy and what she is going thru. she needs that reasurance from spike that he will not leave her. it was a very touching moment. the biting was beautiful. your use of emotions and the english lanugage astound me aaahhhhh willow...power hungry willow. doesn't want to go back to being the girl she was. nice use of the playground to emphasize that point.
Date: 01/07/2005 - 07:36 pm Title: A charmed slumber
*grins* at the lil spider who helped you along with posting.....hmmmm what has Giles realized and Willow once again responsible for...gods that girl needs to be taught a harsh lesson....Buffy still having those thoughts of not being able to breath...though i am sure it's not just the nightmares she is talking about....Alas though Spike is the one there to show her someone will stay...someone will listen....someone will just hold her and love her...someone being the one person she was not sure of....the one person who is her rock....her muse...her opposite but yet twin....they mirror each other so well without even speaking....*sighs* this is just enthralling....the hottness..the tenderness...the sexuality.....the passion....I think my computer screen melted on this one....i'll need a new one if they decide to have passionate nookie *laughs*....great job again
Date: 01/07/2005 - 10:04 am Title: Live to fight another day
I sat on the edge of my chair… I loved Tara in this chapter. And glad that Buffy was able to help him too – when getting bitten.
Date: 01/07/2005 - 10:03 am Title: Red rain is falling down all over me
… I wonder if the chip works on Buffy. I can’t remember if I read it before or no [I read to much, I know.] But it seems like it does – the chip I mean.
And I’m glad too that Buffy knows how to take Spike – to reassure him that he did nothing bad. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 01/07/2005 - 09:47 am Title: Softly to swim inside your veins
That was cute at the begin (Spike’s 3 girls) and hot at the end. :-D Looking forward for more. Thanks for this chapter, and thanks too for you’re A/N’s, the summarize of the previous chapters.
Date: 01/06/2005 - 04:21 pm Title: Softly to swim inside your veins
ok,i've just read this whole fic so far (with a migraine even) and I just have to say... WELL DONE!!! Truly awesome ficage. You have built up the characters beautifully, and just... wow. I cannot wait to read more!
Date: 01/06/2005 - 09:58 am Title: Softly to swim inside your veins
*fans her self* OHHHHHH that was just so damn yummy.....Ok that scene with the three women was just touching and full of emotion and tenderness that well most of them did not realize or know much about in their lives. Tara doing Spike's laundry that is fantastic.....I loved how you took the scence of Buffy offering Spike healing blood and not letting it get into some kind of emotional bruhaha of shit...Thank you for that...what needed to be done was done and it was done with love....GODS Niamh you are just compelling and an amazing writer....BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01/06/2005 - 03:32 am Title: Softly to swim inside your veins
Wow! More please.
Date: 01/06/2005 - 01:51 am Title: Softly to swim inside your veins
A nice twist on a spoonful of sugar. Think it could catch on.
Date: 01/05/2005 - 10:06 pm Title: Softly to swim inside your veins
FINALLY!!!! Great chapter. As I said many times before, you are amazing. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01/05/2005 - 09:49 pm Title: Softly to swim inside your veins
Oh Nia. The moment between the three girls and Spike in Buffy's bedroom was just so touching. You created yet another moment for Spike that I would pay money to see onscreen. -- “Surrounded by beautiful girls. Must’ve done somethin’ right.” -- I can perfectly see the expression Spike would have on his face while saying this. JM would have loved acting out this moment and given us a piece of perfection. It's such a wonderful moment of family, of belonging. The kind of moment Spike never truly was allowed to have in the Jossverse. Wonderful, lovely moment, but also somewhat bittersweet. *sigh* Sorry, just got a little maudlin for a moment there. The oh, so sexy disrobe and bite scenes after were a wonderful panacea to my melancholy. I particularly enjoyed the "Your fault kitten", and Spike's whispered, "soon, pet." Five little words that undoubtedly had Buffy's heartbeat soaring, blood racing, and thighs clenching. Damn. Now if only I could get JM to record your story using his Spike-voice. The only thing that could make this chapter any sexier would be hearing it from the Big Bad himself. Loved your use of Tara this chapter too. She wasn't front and center, but it still was incredibly enjoyable seeing her fill the nurturing role with Spike and Dawn. It's nice to see a mother presence in that home again. I'm also glad that you didn't allow her to doubt her earlier actions too long. Where Tara truly wants to help in times of need and crisis, Willow seeks to fix. Willow may tell herself and others that she just wants to help, and sometimes that may be the case. Willow often, however, NEEDS to help, whereas Tara WANTS to help. Willow's need to help and fix situations takes precedence often over what others desire. When Buffy died, and even before that, when Tara was "brain sucked" by Glory, Willow's tight reign on control started to crumble. Whenever Willow is faced with an emotional overload, she counterbalances that with a great desire to control the environment around her. She may feel like she's spiraling out of control inside, so she over compensates. Her mother may have instilled, even subconsciously, the value of control of one's emotions. As witnessed in many early episodes of BtVS, Sheila is a woman who is in complete control. She seemed to prize intellect, reason, logic over emotion or feeling. It's possible that Willow was taught, by example and word, that emotional reactions to situations weren't appropriate and that logical reasoning was valued. Willow is naturally a very feeling individual. She feels with her entire body and soul. A natural reaction to stress for her may be seeking control of some kind. Magic gives her an outlet for both her desire for control and her perceived unwanted emotions. I know I'm no therapist, but some healthier coping mechanisms may be in order here. Gosh, did I just go off on a tangent or what? I'm sorry, didn't mean to do that! Anyway...adore this chapter and adore this story! Thank you for putting up with my long-winded musings. I promise to keep a lid on my soap-box meanderings next time! Can't wait to see what happens the morning after!
Date: 01/05/2005 - 08:47 pm Title: Softly to swim inside your veins
*aplauds* what a chapter. Dawn was so funny with her "whos the prettiest". loved spikes comment back. beautifully written scene with buffy and spike. thankyou for posting tonight. i look forward to your chapters...more and soon....LOL
Date: 01/05/2005 - 04:10 pm Title: Red rain is falling down all over me
It gets better all the time. So moving.
Date: 01/05/2005 - 12:25 am Title: Red rain is falling down all over me
so are we going to have more bloodplay to heal the hand in the next one? I hope so...love the chapter!
Date: 01/04/2005 - 10:22 pm Title: Red rain is falling down all over me
Sigh...the emotions you evoke and inspire with your words and character interactions is just enliving. I'm as addicted to this story as I am an actual episode. I love Buffy and Spike's developing relationship - the beauty of it honesty and equality. Also love the interactions of the other characters, esp. Dawn and Tara. I love seeing them work together to be a group and as a group.
Date: 01/04/2005 - 09:24 pm Title: Red rain is falling down all over me
YOU ARE AMAZING!!!!!!
Date: 01/04/2005 - 09:03 pm Title: Red rain is falling down all over me
Again very lovely. I really, really like the story, although I have to say that the little cliffhanger at the end of the last chapter is kind of a little bit mean! But who am I to complain, as long as they are Spuffy cliffhangers...?! ;)
Date: 01/04/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Red rain is falling down all over me
Just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying the whole story and wondering why Joss didn't have the sense to hire you to write for the show ;-)
Date: 01/04/2005 - 08:53 pm Title: Red rain is falling down all over me
Crafty little Buffy! I suspect she's going to try and get Spike to bite her again, or make some declaration of feelings...or both. Yep, nothing like a good crisis to bring the lovebird's together. I'm glad that Tara brought up the topic of needing to discuss some issues with Spike. I was hoping she wouldn't put it on the back burner until he was better. I wonder if Willow will be waiting at home for them. I'm hoping not. The last thing they need to be faced with right now is Willow. At least until Tara gets a chance to talk to Spike. I love how you used Dawn to make Spike and Buffy talk about their feelings out loud. And I'm even happier that Buffy admitted to wanting to kiss Spike. Yeah, it only took days of constant, vigilant care during the most traumatic moments of Buffy's life for her to let those walls down. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next chapter. These next one or two chapters sound like they could be extremely pivotal to the story on many different levels. I'm all a flutter! Btw, I'm going to have to watch Beauty and the Beast again 'cuz I'm not seeing the similarities. But then again, it has been over 10 years since I've last seen it. I'd love to know what specifically about that movie inspires you. Great chapter again!
Date: 01/04/2005 - 08:28 pm Title: Red rain is falling down all over me
well i have jsut read the most heartwrenking chapter ever. i mean this in a good way. it was fabulous. the way buffy went thru her thoughts about the bit and what it ment. the way he cried. how horrible he felt. i am glad buffy does not want him to go. and i think she is going to give him some of that slayer healing blood in private. now that i can't wait to read. please please, pretty please post very very soon
Date: 01/04/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Live to fight another day
had to review again....LOL. i wonder who or what called the hounds off....hhhmmmmmm
Date: 01/04/2005 - 07:16 pm Title: Red rain is falling down all over me
Ok pull my heart out because I just can't take this....this beauty that is surrounding their relationship and then Tara taking care of him and Dawn that amazing child just laying it on the line.. I LOVE IT ALL!!!!!!!!! Just HOLY SHIT i read each line with anticipation and the emotion and the cliffhangers and ahhhhhhhhh it's just great
Date: 01/04/2005 - 09:31 am Title: Live to fight another day
There's no word for such a wonderful story.
Date: 01/04/2005 - 08:58 am Title: Live to fight another day
Good Gods this is just so damn compelling...i mean it was like i read it so fast just to see what happened i should read it again for things i missed.....She let him bite her....that is just beautiful.....and i think she is going to have more trouble with why his chip did not work than the bite itself....Ohhhhhhh suspense is ahhhhhhhhhhhh but another spin tingling chapter....
Date: 01/03/2005 - 09:24 pm Title: Live to fight another day
again you put me right there in the cemetary, fighting alongside them. i enjoyed how you got buffy to the training room and starting to workout using what spike had done for her..........he sooooo deserves cookies....big ones...nice that she is seeing that. spike biting buffy while in pain will be interesting to see how its played out with the chip not going off and her realizing that it didn't b.c he would never hurt her........gods another wonderful chapter