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Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2005 - 09:15 am Title: Chapter 10

I realy like this story. The plot is great and pretty unique. I just have to say that I think some of your dialogue is out of character. Mostly it's Drusilla, but even a little Buffy (I just can't see Buffy saying booby as a body part). But your Spike is great and most of William is pretty good too. Overall I really like your story, so please take this as a positive review. I'm just big on being honest in reviews. I think they're pointless otherwise. I can't wait to see if you're going to take Buffy into the past orjust bring Spike into the future next.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2005 - 02:14 am Title: Chapter 10

Great love it can't wait for more.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2005 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter 10

LOVED IT!!! I KNOW IT'S GONNA BE SAD WHEN WILLIAM HAS TOO LEAVE

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2005 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 10

i love this story it is so curte and sweat. i cant wait to read more. im dying to see wat happens wen spike comes back please update soon thanx

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2005 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 10

great Chapter. Please continue to update soon and often. Cant wait to see waht happens when Spike returns. I am sure it will be interesting.

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 10

This chapter was both sweet and sad! No chair for William- I want them to sleep together LOL Great update:)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 9

this is a really good story and i canmt wait to read more. i just want to know wat happens next and cantwait for an update so please make it soon thanx

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2005 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 9

That was wonderful!
Loved the Spuffylove - and the other watcher / WIlliam was fun to read.

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 9

can't wait to see if spike loves her once the demon possesses him...

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 9

I'M A QUICKLY FALLING IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 9

Gosh really great chapter.

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 9

Very sweet and cute chapter:) There's something so great about innocent, (no longer) virginal William

Reviewer: . Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 11:51 am Title: Chapter 9

awwwwwwww!!! totally loving it!!!!! such a cute fic! update soon pleaseee!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2005 - 11:06 am Title: Chapter 8

Awesome! Buffy defending William against the cashier girl, and than the Sexpert letting William explore all “down under”. lol – and Buffy was worrying if the flashlight would go out ;-) Loved it!

Reviewer: Diabola Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 - 07:31 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh god! Wherever did you come up with the flashlight idea? I read this last night and couldn't even review, 'cos I couldn't stop laughing every time I looked at the fic... Still having difficulties with that by the way. I mean, it was cute and all, but to think Buffy actually came up with that idea and somehow told him *lol*. Loved the little scene with the cashier by the way. Nice to see Willian so forceful for a change. And well, the McDonalds stuff was just adorable! Great chapter!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter 8

Excellent truly stonking chapter>

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2005 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 8

That was so awesome....I love how Buffy was so gentle with William and talked him through it!

Reviewer: William's Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2005 - 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 8

I am absolutelly loving this! I think that you've done a fabulous job of capturing William. The vulnerability and the way you are portraying his discovery of Buffy, sex, and love is so entirely sweet....I just want to eat him up. The scene with the flashlight was completely origninal and completely believable. Loved it!

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2005 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 8

I just love them together. Both of them exploring and learning about each other. Even though it isn't Buffy's first time, it's like it is and its refreshing. Great job.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 8

GREAT CHAPTER!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 8

This chapter was both hilarious and sweet- great job!:)

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2005 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter 7

can't wait for the rest... hope you update soon thanx

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2004 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! William is very thoughful indeed. Glad to read the update. Happy New Year for you!

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2004 - 05:25 am Title: Chapter 7

more please!

Reviewer: samica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2004 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 7

Very sweet. I hope they go to the store soon.

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