Oh very nice! Loved the change in the middle and can just imagine Buffy lying there with Spike inside...what a moment. Very much enjoying this.

"Poor Buffy?" Anya asked, visibly perplexed. "Did you hear the three orgasms part?"--That was so hot! And I just love Anya and her matter-of-fact way of explaining all of it. And I love the the book switches between Buffy/Spike and Elizabeth/William, makes it a much better book. And I knew they were gonna have to switch out of character during the sex, and I'm reading, and William and Elizabeth kept going at it, and then when I thought it was too late, you pick the best possible moment to bring in Spike and Buffy. I absolutley adore you muse. Thank you, muse!

aww how sweat but sad that everyone didnt understand except anya. i love this story and im so happy that u updated. it was great. i hope that u update as soon as u can, im dying to read more thanx

I'm so glad they finally made it to this step. Please update soon.

I hate you you know. . . .uh. . right there Spike. . . ohhhhhh. . *laughs* oh geezuz. . that was great. Just bloody wonderful. Can I have a Spike too? Please?? Since Anya is convinced Buffy will share. . (hah). Oh lordy. That just tickled me pink. Love it . . . Love it. .

Hehehe, YAY!!! I'm so glad they finally had sex. And not as Elizabeth and William, but Spike and Buffy. And Anya sure knows how to put things in perspective. "Did you hear the three orgasms part?" That was just great.

I love it!! Hehe, the UST is amazing, and so is Anya's bluntness...gotta say, this story is getting better and better the more chapters we get! Can't wait for the next one!!!!

great update

Whole lot of UST going on . How did she put it? Spike kissed her like he fought -- with everything. Oh yeah. Love that description. I like the uncertainty also. . . is ths Elizabeth and William or is this Buffy and Spike?. . . nice way to show the differences between the two pairs of lovers. And yeah, I'm sure they are gonna get there, after all, they are stuck in a romance novel. Anya, kicking up her heels to sit back and read. . . now if we could only get her to keep quiet about what she's reading, then our favorite couple will get lucky.

It kinda makes me sad that they found the book. Though leave it to Anya to get rapped up in Buffy and Spikes major UST. Really would not be surprised if thats the first thing they decide to fix when they become Buffy and Spike again. Think its pretty ingenious the way the book is writing itself. And how funny is it that Anyanka knew of William the Bloody Awful Poet?! Love this story. Hope those papers and exams went well. Update when you can.

I know it's difficult to write and update when you're a student, so take your time:) I love the indirect mention of Cecily/Halfrek that Anya had, and the different mindsets between Buffy/Elizabeth and Spike/William are awesome!

Damn, that scene in the water was hot. Anya's right, those two are about to pop. Or collide. Or combust. So glad that Anya's the one reading the book and not one of the other scoobs. So convenient how Buffy and Spike aren't sweaty, dirty, hungry, messy, etc. Great detail, extending the world of fiction to their appearance and situation. I can't wait to see how else William "takes care" of Elizabeth. Wonderful chapter again!

"Anya, that's great hon, but it's not relevant to Buffy or Spike"... tee! Loved that line, just like I'm loving this story. Keep updating whenever you can--these chapters are like candy :)