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Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 10:45 pm Title: ch 24

Wow! This was an excellent chapter. Just wow. Loved it to pieces. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 05:28 pm Title: ch 24

Great chapter. I hope everything works out for our fav couple! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: NEO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 02:34 pm Title: ch 24

YAY! Bitey claims always of the good!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 10:54 am Title: ch 24

Update! :) I think Tara did know where Glory was - she would have found their way without consciousness. Awe - Buffy did want to be mated to Spike! Know lets just hope that it won't end like in the series! Neither Buffy nor Spike being killed.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 10:20 am Title: ch 24

Looks like there's a daughter to save, a god to kill (or a human man), and a claimy-love affair to get to. Can't wait for more. great update, so glad Buff is fighting back. more please.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 01:35 am Title: ch 24

loved it!! just loved it!! i'm just crossing my fingers right now so it doesn't end quite like the series...thanx so much!! hope you update soon ;)

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 01:32 am Title: ch 24

a totally great hapter!!! cant wait to see whats gonna happen next...

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 12:49 am Title: ch 24

I'm on the edge of my seat! can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 12:39 am Title: ch 24

Please update really soon, it is so great

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 - 12:24 am Title: ch 24

"He couldn’t pretend and he knew Buffy couldn’t either."--It's so sad, to know the world may be falling down outside, and that their little girl may fall down with it... and that the odds of both of them surviving the coming battle...It was a wonderful chapter. Please, update soon!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2005 - 11:00 pm Title: ch 24

hope this ends better than the show did. i don't think i can handle buffy dying but if that's what must be done...I'm with ya and i'll just have to have faith in the spuffyness. great job. can't wait for mroe. keep up the great work. please post soon.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2005 - 10:08 pm Title: ch 24

This is a very powerful chapter. Very well written.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2005 - 10:06 pm Title: ch 24

OK.. .I'm gonna nit-pick slightly because of the post-child birth grinding. Not very realisitic unless you"re built up a slayers healing excuse ahead of time you could even let her have an orgasm since they are very closely related to uterine contractions but grinding isn"t very possible I had 2 very easy childbirths more so than anyone else I knew and I couldnt have done the grinding> Other than that great as usual.

Author's Response: I know I was pushing it there. But I wanted to do it so bad. I really wanted a full-blown love scene actually but knew I couldn't. So I went with the grinding, and yes I know right after giving birth, but she IS THE SLAYER afterall so I went with it.

Reviewer: SpikeLover520 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: ch 24

Love it, I hope no one dies and everyone has a happily ever after. Lol!! ~Ashley~

Reviewer: SpikeLover520 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2005 - 08:53 pm Title: ch 23

Awww!! You can't kill Dawn. She's only a baby. ~Ashley~

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 04:02 pm Title: ch 23

No -- the Buffy's mind part was my favorite part of the chapter!!!! It was cute and let us get a littel taste of fluffy Spuffy! Adore the story -- keep it up!!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2005 - 12:07 am Title: ch 23

It wasn't lame, it was too the point. We've all seen the episode, and I, too wanna see the action. Cause this action, this is gonna be new. Looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 - 09:49 am Title: ch 23

Is wasn't lame. It was needed so Willow could pull her back into action - I mean, who wouldn't got outta their minds if their newborn was stolen by a hellgod! Love that you kept Spike's little diatribe about Ben being Glory - I loved that part in the series cause he was just soooooo frustrated and there was nothing he could do to make them see! Great tale. More please and Rescue that Baby Fast!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 01:01 pm Title: ch 23

exciting!

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 09:40 am Title: ch 23

cant wait to see how this all will turn out...... love it!!! waiting for more!!!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 03:28 am Title: ch 23

That was really great. Please update soon

Reviewer: blondiear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: ch 23

maybe this could have a differrent ending than the show did. loved it though. please post soon.

Reviewer: Stacie Bower Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2005 - 06:56 pm Title: ch 23

WHy we all know whats comming next please dont kill Dawn Buffy or spike I beg of u Please Please Please Please thanks loved the story Dont KILL THEM!!!!!

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2005 - 04:58 pm Title: ch 23

so glad you're back!! and i totally support your decision to move on to the action part...though i would have loved that spike was the one to rescue her...but i understand you have to remain faithfull to the series...thanx so much!! you're doing a terrific job!! PS: what an evil place to leave the story at !! grr j/k ;) hope you update soon

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2005 - 03:35 pm Title: ch 23

I liked the mind part. Spike was there. Can't wait for more. Please updaate soon.

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