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Reviewer: Ariel Dawn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2005 - 01:38 pm Title: ch 23

Loved the update!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2005 - 11:51 am Title: ch 23

It's good to see the update *smiel* I'm not bothered if the brain part was a bit short - I'm more worried what they will do to get Dawn back - and about the 'we have to kill Dawn' part. Again - thanks for updating!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2005 - 11:24 am Title: ch 23

Thanks for the update. I am glad that you did not dawdle on the mind entering part.

Reviewer: spikegirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2005 - 01:52 pm Title: ch 22

I really like this story Gives us another chappy soon

Reviewer: SEraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2005 - 11:00 am Title: ch 22

oh my........ please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2005 - 03:46 am Title: ch 22

Poor Buffy! I'm exhausted just reading it. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2005 - 02:57 pm Title: ch 22

oh my!! i'm nearly in tears here...OMG!! i hoped that they didn't have to go through with it as the real series...it's heartbreaking...but i can only hope that it doesn't end the same...loved the chapter though even with its inmense angst...loved it...just please please please update soon ;) thanx!!! terrific job!!

Reviewer: Ariel Dawn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2005 - 09:02 pm Title: ch 22

Fantastic chapter! yay Dawnie's born, but now Glory has her. poor little baby. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us with the next chapter

Reviewer: spikelover520 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2005 - 08:06 pm Title: ch 22

Omg!! Great story!! That is so sad that Glory took Dawn! Awww! Please continue! ~Ashley~

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2005 - 03:47 pm Title: ch 22

Oh my GOD! What a chapter! Yikes!! And you evil, evil woman-- what a place to end it! I hate to review and say "Hurry and update soon", but have some compassion! Please hurry and update soon! "If anyone was going to have to be spared it would be him" did you possibly mean to write "Sacrificed" instead of "spared"? Somewhat confusing sentence...

Author's Response: I think it sounds fine. *shrug* But essentially that's what I meant, sacrificed.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2005 - 02:10 am Title: ch 22

Oh my, oh my! First poor Buffy has to go to a lot to bring Dawn to this world, then they bring the wrong doctor - Ben/Glory and Glory takes the baby... I hope Spike will get it back. Dawn may be the key, but she's helpless - or isn't she? Hoping for the best

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2005 - 11:40 pm Title: ch 22

Had a feeling that terrible event was coming, but there is now a baby. Stupid tough labor... and I don't imagine Glory and her minions would make super good baby sitters. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: KT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2005 - 11:31 pm Title: ch 22

please bring Dawnie back safe!!!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2005 - 01:37 am Title: ch 21

Way to go with the protectiveness there Mama-Joyce! So it looks like it's baby-time in the next chap huh? Can't wait for Dawn to be born. It'll be fun to read what Spike and Buffy do during the labor and subsequent birth (If I were Spike, I'd stand way back so as not to lose any body parts when she get into that violent stage of labor). more please.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 08:11 pm Title: ch 20

So glad you kept the "truck" in... that was my very favorite Glory moment in the show. I love this tale (making Dawn their baby is just a stroke of genius). With the birth near I can't wait for the next few chaps. more please.

Reviewer: superstar389 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 03:03 pm Title: ch 21

Poor poor Buffy actually poor poor Spike Buffy's going to probably scream and yell at him and say it's all his fault and tell him to never touch her agian.

Reviewer: Novastar32 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 03:00 pm Title: ch 21

I bet Spike is going to faint when he hears his daughters cries for the first time.

Reviewer: Supernova48 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 02:58 pm Title: ch 21

This is a great story I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Birdman45 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 02:56 pm Title: ch 21

Things are geting interesting I wonder how Buffy will handle child birth, I bet she tells Spike to never touch her again.

Reviewer: Firebird234 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 02:55 pm Title: ch 21

I like Joyce she take on a master Vampire without blinking an eye. I can't wait for the next Chapter.

Reviewer: Birdman45 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 02:52 pm Title: ch 14

I can say I seriously dought that Xander learned his lesson.

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 09:30 am Title: ch 21

now this is gonna be really interesting..... waiting for more!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 04:23 am Title: ch 21

Oh my - poor Buffy. The fight doesn't stop, huh? But Buffy can take a lot - hopefully that's enough. And now she's about to giving birth - I wonder what will happen when Dawn is born... I keep my fingers crossed that it will end well! They deserve it.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 01:00 am Title: ch 21

i cant wait to see whats happens next!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 12:54 am Title: ch 21

Joyce kicking ass! That was just awesome! And I sure hope this baby can be born okay, there just so many unnatural birthing complications going on now. Sure hope Dawnie's a tough girl like her mommy and grandmommy. Wonderful chapter. Update soon!

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