Date: 01/11/2005 - 06:13 pm Title: CHAPTER 6: Desire Sated
Looking forward for more of it!
Only one thought was understandable in his mind…mine…she is mine. Loved it. Was very hot, too.
Author's Response: Yeah, the Spuffy ship had alot of fire and I'm just trying to capture a piece of it...sometimes I think I have a tiger by the tail....ohhh...gotta idea.....wow thanks for the inspiration :)
Date: 01/11/2005 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 5: An understanding of a different sort
Loved the chapter - the stakes are set. :-D
Buffy knows what she wants - and it happened to be Spike - who wouldn't ;-)
Date: 01/11/2005 - 05:26 pm Title: CHAPTER 6: Desire Sated
This just keeps getting better! Bravo!
Date: 01/11/2005 - 04:41 pm Title: CHAPTER 6: Desire Sated
LOVED IT!!!
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:56 pm Title: CHAPTER 6: Desire Sated
The bike action was hot but it was just a teaser for me. You got the motor going but I wanted to keep reading. It ended too quick and Spike is nobody's minute man. Still the chapter was hot. I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: No Spike is not a minute man by any means, but this like you said was a teaser. Just a quick bang to take the edge off, while we build up to the main events...or events :)
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 5: An understanding of a different sort
Liked it...now I want to go to the club. The way you write Buffy's character is amazing. I just love this story.
Author's Response: Thanks, I was tired of weepy whiny Buffy. I wanted her and Spike to be equals. Both bad asses in their own right :)
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:26 pm Title: CHAPTER 6: Desire Sated
Dayumn! That was hot. Mmmm...what a pleasurable read for all involved. ;) *wg* Your description are so vivid and your characters just dance off the screen. I really liked the conversation between Spike and Buffy about her father - giving her that moment of vulnerability.
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want to give the impression that she was only one dimensional. All sarcasm and no soft, but thanks for the amazing review...I'm all blushy :)
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:13 pm Title: CHAPTER 6: Desire Sated
Woweee I almost expected the bike to melt. Hot as ever.
Author's Response: Thanks, it was just a pleaser teaser, but it's gets better soon :)
Date: 01/11/2005 - 10:10 am Title: Chapter 5: An understanding of a different sort
Wow....that chapter was hot! Great job and can't wait to read what happens at her place. Thanks. =)
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you like the next one :)
Date: 01/11/2005 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter 5: An understanding of a different sort
Just a teaser then? Well fine! Still very hot! Poor Xander... What's he gonna do now he's all wound up?? lol! I hope to see a wonderfully Spuffy chapter coming!! HA! Coming... sorry! I'll stop.
Author's Response: I never wondered about that until you said something...he has a girlfriend, but you guys havent met her yet...coming soon I guess :) *Hahaha, I made a little joke...**
Date: 01/10/2005 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing the truth
"Then make me burn until then" I love that line...very hot. I love this strong Buffy. I loved the interaction between her and Angel. I love her with Spike of course and the hot sex that I hope is coming soon. The anticipation is killing me. Update soon, please
Date: 01/10/2005 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing the truth
GREAT CHAPTER!!! I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY
Date: 01/10/2005 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing the truth
I would want to keep him around for awhile too! Who wouldn't?! Once again.. another fabulous chapter! How do you do it?! And thanks for explaining the whole ACLU thing to me... I'm all less confused now! Yay for me!
Date: 01/10/2005 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing the truth
i loved it. i love how buffy told angel off that was my favorite part. i also loved spike hitting even more :) can't wait to see what happends next. update soon please.
Author's Response: Yeah...but something tells me we haven't see the last of Det. Angelus. :)
Date: 01/10/2005 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing the truth
love the angst between buffy and angel...intersting you didn't have spike and angel related!
Date: 01/10/2005 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 2: Sinners and Saints
Ohhhhh -- sounds great! Love this plot and where it's going -- update soon!
Date: 01/10/2005 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing the truth
Okay, i have a lot of comments. Love the 'beneath me' statement, and to whom it was used on. I also love strong Buffy. Jerk Angel is great, too. Spike is as sexy as ever.
Date: 01/10/2005 - 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing the truth
Can you post your other story here too? I would have missed it, hadn't SR ot worked. Thanks!
Author's Response: Sure thing :)
Date: 01/10/2005 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 4: Seeing the truth
Reviewed before (BSC). I'll add your story to my fav. ones - if I haven't done it yet!
Date: 01/09/2005 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 3: Blood and Revelations
Very interesting and cool storyline. Keep this one going!
Date: 01/09/2005 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: Blood and Revelations
you have me hooked now i can't wait for more. i can't wait to find out what happends next. this is defintitly a hot story. update soon please.
Date: 01/08/2005 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 3: Blood and Revelations
thankx so much for the reply...now it makes more sense....lol on the chapter and can't wwait to see if oz gave a bit of forshadowing!
Date: 01/08/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 3: Blood and Revelations
Looking forward to reading how Buffy reacts to the new information about Spike.
Date: 01/08/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 3: Blood and Revelations
Question: What are fruity mocktails? Oh my – this story has me hooked! Going from thrilling to hot to angsty – and that demon attacker had to spill that Spike was hired from Buffy’s father. I just hope Buffy gives him time enough to explain that he quit the job.
Author's Response: Mocktails, non-alcholic beverages pretending to be the real thing. Very fruity, and perfect for non-drinkers who still like to go clubbing :) Bad demon, but it will be leading to some very hot angsty Spuffy encounters :)
Date: 01/08/2005 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 3: Blood and Revelations
You like alt vamp perspectives try The Hunger, seriously cool vamp movie with David Bowie at his most yummy. Thanks for the reviews on TBC.
Author's Response: Love the Hunger!!!! A little weird but if you liked that you might check out Forever Knight the series and The Kindred :)
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