

Date: 09/28/2012 - 01:03 pm Title: Epilogue
Very sweet story. Love the premise, and love the names "The Grind" and "Life Behind Bars." Very creative. Needs an editing, lots of errors, missing words, etc. Some of the dialogue was a bit simplistic.

Date: 09/28/2012 - 02:37 am Title: Introductions
So far I'm enjoying this story, but it needs a beta... grammar/spelling issues, and missing some words (the sex scene in this chapter in particular is missing som verbs!).

Date: 07/13/2010 - 04:56 pm Title: Epilogue
Great story=it was one of my favs in the spuffy verse.
Author's Response: thanx so much...I really needed some encouragement to complete my other fics.

Date: 10/11/2009 - 04:48 pm Title: Out Tonight
Hahaha I'm Cuban so I loved that bit

Date: 01/14/2008 - 08:49 am Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed reading this - thanks.

Date: 01/11/2008 - 10:43 am Title: Reliving the Past
OMG - Spike's the Hart!

Date: 02/17/2007 - 10:09 am Title: Epilogue
loved it! hope you finish your other stories soon!

Date: 12/18/2005 - 12:13 am Title: Epilogue
awesum fic... kudos

Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:27 pm Title: Introductions
Why did he have to screw Anya?!

Date: 11/12/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: Worried
i would definitely say gunn. dunno why just a gut feelin.

Date: 09/21/2005 - 02:33 pm Title: Epilogue
I really loved this story! it´s original and written lively!

Date: 09/20/2005 - 09:42 pm Title: Epilogue
Excellent ending. I LOVE IT ALL! Thanks for sharing.

Date: 09/20/2005 - 08:56 pm Title: Surprise
Can't believe buffy almost ruined Spike's great proposal. Glad she accepted. Love the tale.

Date: 09/18/2005 - 06:04 pm Title: After Hours
Liking this story loads, but one tiny criticism, there's a typo after Buffy mixs the drinks, it should be voila not viola, but that is my only little nit pick, everything else is great, :-)

Date: 09/18/2005 - 08:28 am Title: Epilogue
Great ending! I really enjoyed this fic!

Date: 09/17/2005 - 07:14 pm Title: Epilogue
great story!! I luved every bit of it!! Luved it!!

Date: 09/17/2005 - 03:37 pm Title: Epilogue
thats was awesome! a little weepy it came to an end, but it ended wonderfully! xo

Date: 09/17/2005 - 01:43 pm Title: Epilogue
Jillian, it was a wonderful story. Not all relationships begin on a good note and your story reinforces that. I hope people will give others a chance as your characters did. Hope to read more of your stories in the future.

Date: 09/17/2005 - 01:41 pm Title: Epilogue
Awwww, what a cute ending great job with this story i loved it

Date: 09/17/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Epilogue
Lovely ending to a grerat story...I have really enjoyed reading this and following their growing romance.

Date: 09/17/2005 - 02:02 am Title: Epilogue
i was sad to see this story end ...i have been reading it ever since you first posted it up and now i wanted to let you know that you did a fantastic job and i will be sure to recommend to my friends to read this story

Date: 09/17/2005 - 01:51 am Title: Epilogue
The epilogue was so sweet. I love that they named their daughter Cordy.

Date: 09/16/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Epilogue
OMG THAT WAS THE SWEETEST THING EVER !!!!!!!! i LOVE this story so much and am so happy that u updated and finished it.im sad to see it ending though im so used to looking forward to read the next chapter and am sad that its over. the ending kicked ass, i loved it, it was so sweet and wonderful, im so happy that it ended so well and tha they were happy. i really hope to read more of your stories in the future and i think that u are a brilliant writer and i really enjoy reading your stories. thank u so much for writing this story, it was wonderful.