[Report This]Date: 09/28/2012 - 01:03 pm Title: Epilogue
Very sweet story. Love the premise, and love the names "The Grind" and "Life Behind Bars." Very creative. Needs an editing, lots of errors, missing words, etc. Some of the dialogue was a bit simplistic.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2012 - 02:37 am Title: Introductions
So far I'm enjoying this story, but it needs a beta... grammar/spelling issues, and missing some words (the sex scene in this chapter in particular is missing som verbs!).
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2010 - 04:56 pm Title: Epilogue
Great story=it was one of my favs in the spuffy verse.
Author's Response: thanx so much...I really needed some encouragement to complete my other fics.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2009 - 04:48 pm Title: Out Tonight
Hahaha I'm Cuban so I loved that bit
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2008 - 08:49 am Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed reading this - thanks.
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2008 - 10:43 am Title: Reliving the Past
OMG - Spike's the Hart!
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2007 - 10:09 am Title: Epilogue
loved it! hope you finish your other stories soon!
[Report This]Date: 12/18/2005 - 12:13 am Title: Epilogue
awesum fic... kudos
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:27 pm Title: Introductions
Why did he have to screw Anya?!
[Report This]Date: 11/12/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: Worried
i would definitely say gunn. dunno why just a gut feelin.
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2005 - 02:33 pm Title: Epilogue
I really loved this story! it´s original and written lively!
[Report This]Date: 09/20/2005 - 09:42 pm Title: Epilogue
Excellent ending. I LOVE IT ALL! Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 09/20/2005 - 08:56 pm Title: Surprise
Can't believe buffy almost ruined Spike's great proposal. Glad she accepted. Love the tale.
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2005 - 06:04 pm Title: After Hours
Liking this story loads, but one tiny criticism, there's a typo after Buffy mixs the drinks, it should be voila not viola, but that is my only little nit pick, everything else is great, :-)
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2005 - 08:28 am Title: Epilogue
Great ending! I really enjoyed this fic!
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2005 - 07:14 pm Title: Epilogue
great story!! I luved every bit of it!! Luved it!!
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2005 - 03:37 pm Title: Epilogue
thats was awesome! a little weepy it came to an end, but it ended wonderfully! xo
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2005 - 01:43 pm Title: Epilogue
Jillian, it was a wonderful story. Not all relationships begin on a good note and your story reinforces that. I hope people will give others a chance as your characters did. Hope to read more of your stories in the future.
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2005 - 01:41 pm Title: Epilogue
Awwww, what a cute ending great job with this story i loved it
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Epilogue
Lovely ending to a grerat story...I have really enjoyed reading this and following their growing romance.
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2005 - 02:02 am Title: Epilogue
i was sad to see this story end ...i have been reading it ever since you first posted it up and now i wanted to let you know that you did a fantastic job and i will be sure to recommend to my friends to read this story
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2005 - 01:51 am Title: Epilogue
The epilogue was so sweet. I love that they named their daughter Cordy.
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Epilogue
OMG THAT WAS THE SWEETEST THING EVER !!!!!!!! i LOVE this story so much and am so happy that u updated and finished it.im sad to see it ending though im so used to looking forward to read the next chapter and am sad that its over. the ending kicked ass, i loved it, it was so sweet and wonderful, im so happy that it ended so well and tha they were happy. i really hope to read more of your stories in the future and i think that u are a brilliant writer and i really enjoy reading your stories. thank u so much for writing this story, it was wonderful.