Date: 02/03/2005 - 12:56 pm Title: Game Over
Oh no! Spike really bollocks it up, didn't he? Just started to read last night. Great story, very entertaining.
Date: 02/02/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: Game Over
I would have hauled off and decked him a la Slayer Buffy with that line. His ass would have been on the ground.
Date: 02/02/2005 - 07:19 pm Title: Game Over
MORE NOW PLEASE I L-O-V-E IT !!!!
Date: 02/02/2005 - 05:56 pm Title: Game Over
i love this chapter! lol. totally worth the sudden spuffy to have the angst come back :) i think the other readers might hit me though...*looks behind me* lol. yay, please write more when you get better! oh and Spike ended up thinking he messed up, but I still think Buffy is being the inconsiderate one...she did say she regretted it first! somehow her tears always make us forgive her :(
Date: 02/02/2005 - 05:35 pm Title: Game Over
I think it was a good choice to skip the details of the night of sex since you are uncomfortable writing elaborate sex scenes. A cut to the morning after always adds more anyway. You don't always need to know the gritty details. The angst should be interesting as the two of them continue their tour. It wouldn't be much of a story if they were happy ever after the minute they decided to like each other. Hmm wonder what Spike is going to do on their next tour stop. ::;grin:::
Author's Response: thank you for your review! i definitely agree that the story wouldn't have as much of a kick if they continued on their merry way together, happily ever after
Date: 02/02/2005 - 05:09 pm Title: Game Over
*pouts* Couldn't you have given them a little time before everything went wrong again? *sigh* It was a good chapter though. Please update soon.
Author's Response: don't worry- i believe in happy endings, so things will get better sooner or later:)
Date: 02/02/2005 - 05:00 pm Title: Game Over
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one :)
Date: 02/02/2005 - 04:14 pm Title: Game Over
please tell me that they will try to talk things out and work on their relationship and not throw it away
Author's Response: no need to worry, dear- things may not be looking good for them right now, but i plan on improving things fairly soon
Date: 02/02/2005 - 02:28 pm Title: Game Over
i love the story..... i cant get enough of it! -waiting for more!!
Date: 02/02/2005 - 02:27 pm Title: Game Over
More angst to come you promise, that's not really a selling point for me sorry. Sorry too to see Spike behaving like a jerk.
Author's Response: as much as i love writing angst, the rest of the story won't be filled with it. yes, some chapters will have it (be it a lot or a little), but i'm fairly certain things are really going to pick up for buffy and spike
Date: 02/01/2005 - 10:23 pm Title: Tempted By The Devil
loved this chapter cant wait for it to be continued
Date: 02/01/2005 - 07:12 pm Title: Tempted By The Devil
I truly am dreading the sex scene I have to write, so I completely understand. I think it would have been better to have another chapter before this one to transition into this sudden spuffy, but I didn't think your sex scene sucked :) Hopefully, you feel better!!
Author's Response: hey! i originally had another chapter before this one, but it really seemed like filler, so i decided to omit it. and actually, when thinking about the future chapters, the suddeness of them hooking up is crucial LOL and good luck with your scene!
Date: 02/01/2005 - 06:43 pm Title: Tempted By The Devil
OMG YOU STOP THERE NOOOO YOU HAVE TO HAVE MORE NOWWWW I L-O-V-E IT SOOOOOO SOOOOO SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02/01/2005 - 06:09 pm Title: Tempted By The Devil
I'll e-mail later- running late. Great chapter- loved the fountain show and how sweet Spike is being, setting everything up for her. Loved their interaction- talk to you soon!
Date: 02/01/2005 - 06:29 am Title: The City of Sin
Angst and romance is always nice mixing :) I loved the tender moment at the balcony and the whole chapter was great.
Date: 01/31/2005 - 08:51 pm Title: The City of Sin
definitely liked this update
Date: 01/31/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: The City of Sin
They're getting closer....!
Date: 01/31/2005 - 04:41 pm Title: The City of Sin
lol, I like to work that way too. The stories going great, and I like the little moment they had in the suite ;) Can't wait for more!!
Date: 01/31/2005 - 04:30 pm Title: The City of Sin
hope you update soon. i can't wait for the spuffyness! ;D
Date: 01/31/2005 - 04:15 pm Title: The City of Sin
more please :-)
Date: 01/31/2005 - 04:05 pm Title: The City of Sin
Awesome chapter! Keep up the good work :) Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 01/30/2005 - 05:22 pm Title: A Naked Apology
OMG IM IN SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS STORY I LOVE IT SOOOOOOO SOOOOOO SOOOOOO MUCH MORE NOW PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS GREAT!
Date: 01/30/2005 - 05:21 pm Title: A Naked Apology
i'm loving it!! though if spike wants to get some...he'll ahve to explain bree soon...how is he going to...i don't know...it's your story ;) i'm not so sure if he really slept with her or not :S anyhow wonderful work hope you update soon thanx
Date: 01/30/2005 - 03:57 pm Title: A Naked Apology
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update...
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