

Date: 07/30/2005 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
LOVED THE STORY, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL, AND THE "ENDING" WAS PERFECT, IN FACT I COULD VISUALIZE IT AND MADE ME SMILE...THANKS

Date: 07/30/2005 - 08:56 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Excellent ending to a fantastic fic. I love your stories.

Date: 07/30/2005 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Loved how Buffy told Angel that Spike was the man for her whether or not the prophesy had been fulfilled for either person. I was reading and thinking go Buffy. Great job.

Date: 07/29/2005 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Okay, this was the perfect lines ever! "You told me once you'd always be my girl." "I did. But I'm a woman now." Really, I couldn't get over how great that was. This story also made me see Angel in a new light. It is so true too that Cordelia is the only thing that holds him together. I really love the ending, sappiness and all.

Date: 07/28/2005 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Really amazing story. I always love your stuff and can't wait to read more of this new series. Your portrayal of Angel was, in my opinion, right on. I have always seen Angel as struggling to be good and Spike as struggling to be bad. (I don't hate Angel, he's a great, multi-dimensional complex character and hot. Just not as hot as Spike.) Thanks for all your great stories.

Date: 07/28/2005 - 02:46 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
One month later – they were lucky that all could be done till then. But having a vampire with you can be very convincing. :)
And *grins* to that: Wait until she has you scrubbing the bathroom. - Can't we make some of the lil' Slayers do that? - No, we can't. Can we? Buffy discovered that she’s the boss of the Slayers *smile*
Awwwwe! Home’s with you – and second: Buffy is pregnant!
I hope you’ll tell through your Yahoo group when you’re updating the sequel – because it did sound as if it won’t be post here. Thanks for writing!

Date: 07/28/2005 - 01:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Great story and a really lovely ending.......looking forward to the sequel :)

Date: 07/28/2005 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Addie, that was DAMN amazing. OMG you wrapped that up so well. I am awe struck. I loved it. I really liked this one. The emotion that you poured into this story was fantastic. I think you took each step well and wound each thead tightly. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 07/27/2005 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
There is NOTHING wrong with sappy endings, and considering all the angst this couple went through to finally be together, it seems right. Some of their greatest moments were sappy. I am glad Willow came around in the end. Not sure how I feel about how you portrayed her, but it fit your story. I'll look forward to when you get that sequel happening.

Date: 07/27/2005 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Okay, thought just struck me...I realise what you are doing and everything, and I know Buffy thinks it is important for her to not abandon her new life in Rome, but I really really don't get how she can even be contemplating all this--making Spike do this for her--when she has no intention of giving up the Immortal. It is beyond strange and unfortunately back in that selfish Buffy realm where she always seems to dwell. My heart breaks for Spike. But then, it usually does!
Author's Response: Huh? I have to admit, I'm a little confused by your review. I never meant to give the impression that Buffy had no intention of giving up the Immortal. She's confused by having Spike suddenly back in her life, and it's turned her world on its head, but she's not clinging to her relationship with the Immortal. She's just suddenly having to look at everything in a different way than she did the day before, and it's taking her a bit of time to adjust. Keep reading the story, and I'm sure you'll see that your assumptions here are very much off. She's not thinking only about herself here. She's just not sure where Spike fits in her life--and even if he wants to anymore.
Author's Response: Also, if you read that chapter carefully, it's Spike that thinks about her going back to the Immortal. Buffy's more wrapped up in being with Spike, wants to be close to him even though she's afraid that theyr'e really over. Spike's fear is that Buffy will go back to the Immortal. Buffy on the other hand, is feeling conflicted.

Date: 07/27/2005 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
YAY!! Series! Cant wait to see what the baby will be like!

Date: 07/27/2005 - 11:57 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Yippee! A sequel or three! Can't wait. I like Spike as a Daddy! Loved the ending - not sappy at all (sniff, sigh, where's my tissue!). Very entertaining tale. You are a truly gifted story-teller. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 07/27/2005 - 07:56 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
aw! They're having a baby! That's so sweet. This story was great. Go you on finishing it

Date: 07/27/2005 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Addie! God, that's SUCH an adorable ending. Love it much. :D Yeah, I'd looooove to see the sequel, just like everyone else, I'm pretty sure. You rock, as always. Keep on writing! :D

Date: 07/27/2005 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
frakin awesome I loved this fic, can we kick Angel a few times now??

Date: 07/27/2005 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
not sappy but very cool. happy about the sequels loved the story.

Date: 07/27/2005 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Congratulations on a well completed story. I look forward to the sequel. {Smiles} I will be looking for your other fics, and future projects as well.

Date: 07/27/2005 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Lovely ending, I really enjoyed the whole story :) Nice to see there will be sequel(s) - looking forward to those when you get the time :)

Date: 07/27/2005 - 12:07 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Beautiful and perfect ending. So happy to hear there is more to come. Can't wait!!

Date: 07/27/2005 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Yeah them. And I just loved Dawn, always way more insightful then anyone gives her credit for. And a sequel! Well that is just the icing on the cake. Would love to know what they name the baby. Cheers to your muse, I hope she keeps you busy. Thank you so much for sharing!

Date: 07/27/2005 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
[Quote]"You told me once you'd always be my girl." "I did. But I'm a woman now." Buffy walked out then, into the daylight. [End Quote] OMG...I thin that is the *best* answer/repsonser I've ever heard or read. Perfect! Absolutely perfect because it is so true. She was girl then and she's a woman now. Perfect! Loved the whole chapter. So well done.

Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Great fic. I liked the sappy end.

Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
loved the ending. hope you post the sequel soon. loved it. great job.

Date: 07/26/2005 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
i'm so happy your going to write a sequel. this is a great story and i feel its only the beggining. can't wait for more!!!

Date: 07/26/2005 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
yay! i can't wait for the squel. i like the sappy by the way :)