

Date: 11/04/2005 - 06:54 pm Title: Parental guidance recommended
Nice.. Thats all i can say 'bout this excellant chapter

Date: 11/04/2005 - 06:53 pm Title: Smooth sailing...or not
Fantasic keep it up

Date: 10/31/2005 - 01:17 am Title: Parental guidance recommended
Really cute story so far, with a great start. I can't wait for more!

Date: 10/30/2005 - 09:02 pm Title: Parental guidance recommended
Lol!! Love it!! Continue whenever you can!!
~Ashley~

Date: 10/30/2005 - 01:17 pm Title: Parental guidance recommended
omg i absolutely love it! more really SOON

Date: 10/30/2005 - 09:15 am Title: A bad first impression
I'm interested in the story, but why don't you use any punctuation at the ends of sentences, periods to be exact? It's very weird to read that way.
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the reviewing. and Sorry for the dodgey punctuation. it may be just me, but my comp is being weird lately.
I will try to do better with the punctuation and stuuf.
thanks for the advice!

Date: 10/30/2005 - 09:01 am Title: Parental guidance recommended
Now they're on the rihgt track! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you heaps for reveiwing.
it gives me so much support and motivation.
i love hearing when people like my stories.
thank you so so so much for taking the time to review!

Date: 10/30/2005 - 08:56 am Title: Smooth sailing...or not
Yikes, Spike messed up. I'm really enjoying this fic.

Date: 10/30/2005 - 08:46 am Title: A bad first impression
This is a really great plot.

Date: 10/23/2005 - 03:47 am Title: Smooth sailing...or not
cool, your first all human fic.
i loved the first two chapters and can't wait to see where you take this fic, you are very talented and i think this has the potential to be an amzing story.
loved the long chapters as well!

Date: 08/31/2005 - 03:08 am Title: Smooth sailing...or not
good so far

Date: 08/29/2005 - 11:16 am Title: Smooth sailing...or not
cant wait to see what else u have for us.... love it...

Date: 08/29/2005 - 10:06 am Title: Smooth sailing...or not
This is a great start..interested to see where it goes and what happened. Great story so far!

Date: 08/29/2005 - 09:27 am Title: Smooth sailing...or not
It's really good. I love it, one of the best things ive read, good work :)

Date: 08/29/2005 - 05:58 am Title: Smooth sailing...or not
Ooo. more soon please
Date: 01/29/2005 - 02:09 pm Title: A bad first impression
can;t bellieve he didn't follow her!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:22 pm Title: A bad first impression
good so far
Date: 01/28/2005 - 05:51 pm Title: A bad first impression
The plot sounds interesting
Date: 01/28/2005 - 09:36 am Title: A bad first impression
great start. keep up with it. good job.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 05:53 am Title: A bad first impression
The plot isn't half that bad. I should know i helped write it, lol. but seriously this story does have tons of potential mate
Author's Response: thanks mate, you're a weirdo sometimes, but, hey, i don't care coz....more reviews!