Date: 03/16/2005 - 11:35 pm Title: Bumpy Rides
I thought the whole phone message was entertaining, and I really like that WIll is stubborn, yet fighting for Buffy. I hope he keeps doing that :) And maybe Buffy should clear her whore-ish name, lol. Good update, but it was evil because I want more! Hope your play goes well ;)
Date: 03/16/2005 - 11:25 pm Title: Bumpy Rides
three words: GREEN EYED MONSTER! Does she even know how jealous she is....or maybe she doesn't care? anyway...EVIL BUFFY strikes again...but two can and do play at that game!
Date: 03/16/2005 - 11:21 pm Title: Bumpy Rides
OUT fu**ing standing!!! Great chapter and I have been looking for updates forever! Yeah, good for Spike, he held off fuc**** the first blond that came along! Yeah! Keep Spike fighting for Buffy, please? Luv, Spuf
Date: 02/21/2005 - 05:26 pm Title: Home Remedies
You've peaked my interest. More please, I'd really like to see how Spike gonna get Buffy to give in enought to commit to a serious relationship. Thanks for sharing your story.
Date: 02/20/2005 - 10:38 am Title: Home Remedies
This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. I love the point of view and the fact that the characters are so different compared to other stories. It's very realistic; I feel like I know people just like them. Oh and every time you use the word nesting I crack up for some reason. lol. It's really funny.
Date: 02/20/2005 - 09:01 am Title: Home Remedies
this has possbilities i'll be looking out for more chapyers... will there be flash backs?
Author's Response: I thought about flashbacks but I'm not sure how that will fit in with the flow of the story.
Date: 02/20/2005 - 12:47 am Title: Home Remedies
can't say she didn't deserve that...she needs a serious dose of reality..and I am so loving will in this fic!
Date: 02/19/2005 - 08:44 pm Title: Home Remedies
Please continue I can't wait to see where you take this. I like this committment phobic Buffy.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 05:37 pm Title: Home Remedies
please post soon! i loved it!! hopefully buffy realizes what a mistake she's making in not being with Will.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 05:32 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities
Buffy has lost it but i completely understand what she's going through. me + relationships don't mix well together eiteher. Please post soon!
Date: 02/19/2005 - 03:58 pm Title: Home Remedies
hehehehe the battle has begun for those two... loving it!!
Date: 02/19/2005 - 03:53 pm Title: Home Remedies
This is only Buffy fault - she sent Will away. Now she has to live with it - he found a substitute.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 12:20 pm Title: Home Remedies
Ben and Jerry's always the best.... Cant wait for more!!
Date: 02/19/2005 - 10:51 am Title: Home Remedies
Not normally my sort of story, at least I thought so from the summary... but when I peeked out of boredom today, I find you're writing a really cool, first person, take on semi-maturing young adult relationships. You have Buffy down to a tee, and just when I thought you were presenting me with a Love's Bitch Spike/Will you go and give him the balls to scare her into confronting her insecurity! Great start. Now I'm hoping future chapters create the right sort of tension that will enable you to explore the relationship fears Buffy has whilst retaining some of that dry humour you have cleverly incorporated.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you gave the story a try and have enjoyed it, so far. I'm hoping the future chapters do the story justice too. For some reason the Spike/Will who wanted to be in this story told me he wanted to have sex, be a bad ass and of course, brutally honest. Which snarky, honest Spike has always been one of my favorites.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 08:35 am Title: Nightmares and Realities
First, I cannot stand Harmony! But, I feel better that it's her Spike rebounding with because, hey, can't be serious, right?
Anyway, love this...you are doing great with the first person POV!
Hope Buffy comes around, soon, and I have to say this seems so realistic, all the regrets and such!
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: I can't stand Harmony either, but she is a persistent pain in the butt and wouldn't go away. I tried, really I did. Thanks for the compliment on the realism of the story.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 05:43 am Title: Home Remedies
o.k. Harmony? I ove the way you described her, but yuck! Please update soon so I can clear the image from my head.
Author's Response: Believe me I want the image out of my head too. Harmony is definitely not one of my favorite people. She sure is pissing off Buffy though, isn't she?
Date: 02/19/2005 - 04:21 am Title: Home Remedies
OH the funny..."I can’t believe he put an empty ice cream carton in my fridge"...& the pain..."Harmony and Spike walked out of The Espresso Pump". You definitely still have my attention. Seems like Will/Spike did not waste a bit of time but then Buffy let her fight with her demons drive him away. You have me primed for the next chapter. Thanks for this chapter.
Date: 02/19/2005 - 03:40 am Title: Home Remedies
You have me hooked! I was basking in the glory of the first long chapter and then you ended the second chapter right here and I let out a frustrated mental yell, lol. It's a good thing ;) I normally don't like POV's much because a lot of them aren't done well, but you did a fantastic job and I am very intrigued and wanting to kick Harmony along with Buffy. Sigh. Please update - i'd say soon but you just did and I know you must have a life - as long as you don't abandon the story I'll be happy!
Author's Response: Trust me there is no way I can abandon this story. The characters won't let me. I have the ending written, the characters are just telling me what happened before the ending. :o)
Date: 02/18/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities
I like the start! Please coninue :-D
Date: 02/15/2005 - 06:54 pm Title: Nightmares and Realities
Good start!
Date: 02/15/2005 - 11:47 am Title: Nightmares and Realities
loved the first chappy!!!! i hope she goes, apologize and then kisses, smuchies... yum yum... you know :P lol
Date: 02/15/2005 - 10:57 am Title: Nightmares and Realities
Wow... Really good. Can't wait for the update. Wake up and smell the coffee Buffy. Good orgasms. Best friend. Great relationship.
Date: 02/15/2005 - 09:22 am Title: Nightmares and Realities
Great Start - I can't wait to see where it goes!
Date: 02/15/2005 - 06:26 am Title: Nightmares and Realities
Great beginning. Well writen.
I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I'm going to try to update within the next day or so. I know it drives me nuts when there is a big gap between chapters.
Date: 02/15/2005 - 03:40 am Title: Nightmares and Realities
Wow. That is really good! It's well written, intelligent, and with a side of funny. I can't wait to read more of this! Keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I enticed the characters with chocolate so they would come back and tell me more of what happens.
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