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Reviewer: smartervin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2020 - 02:11 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2017 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

Story has potential, but needs some editing.

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Date: 03/28/2017 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

Poor tortured Buffy and Spike!

Reviewer: Connie_3D Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2015 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

You are an excellent writer, but you break the third wall to often to be taken seriously as when you do that, you drag the reader away from the story and put yourself in the middle. It is frustrating and annoying. Quite frankly, if it was not for that spark of something unique about your style, I would have stopped reading after the third chapter. Instead, I forced myself to re-engage after each interruption.

You characterizations where good with Xander, Rayne, Gunn, Lynsay, and Joyce. Althought Joyce was more potty mouth that she normally is. Buffy came across whiny and childish, Spike was not slick enough, Angel was too accepting, Willow to eager to bow to Gile and Xander, Giles would not have called in Rayne as he would already know that breaing the claim was impossible. Rayne might have volunteered, but I think he would have been working in the background on the down low, as that was always his mo. In general, Riley was just a piece of shit and correctly portray.

I'll be reading your more recent work, if any, for signs of growth. You have talent, you just need to mold it and learn your craft.

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Date: 09/09/2014 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

NICE

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Date: 12/17/2013 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

I like your "manly" Spike - problem is that, in contrast, Buffy comes across as rather childish.

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Date: 07/04/2010 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'Say It Again, Spike'

I have to admit honestly that this chapter (mainly towards the end) completely took me out of the zone I had been in when I started reading this. It kind of ruined it for, sorry but it did.

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Date: 04/05/2010 - 05:19 pm Title: Epilogue

this was definitely an interesting fic - i can't imagine buffy not living in denial; quite a shock for this fan. But enjoyed the bond between buffy and spike. as for the scoobies (except for oz), i'm surprised but not. after all, giles barely condoned angel and buffy together - not surprised he would do absolutely anything to ensure it didn't happen again; even if he had to sell his soul to the devil. which he did. he had to have know ethan would have his own agenda. as for xander - unfortunately, i can see him doing exactly this. willow - she's probably the saddest one. and poor oz ... i don't blame him a bit for leaving. he was truly a wonderful strengh for buffy and spike. and got such a kick out of the angel/spike dynamics - we got to see the hostility between them (as it was always there), but we also got to see the family loyalty - and that was sweet. it's a shame buffy and spike had to leave joyce behind .. enjoyed this very much!

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Date: 01/16/2009 - 12:40 am Title: Epilogue

Amazing story. I really enjoyed the ending. I love the way it was summed up in the form of a letter. I was sad to see how Oz disappeared never to be heard of again but I can totally understand why. Willow was misguided. Xander and Giles were just down right cruel. Surely Giles had to know the results before he got started in the whole idea! I enjoyed Angel in this story as well. His part was great. Allowed him to keep his character yet be sort of kind. Spike and Angel bonding was great. Anyway keep up the good writing!

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Date: 12/20/2008 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

I Love Spike when he is all manly! I can't wait to see what happens next

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Date: 06/28/2007 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Dying Without Buffy'

I can't wait to see what Spike and Angelus do!

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Date: 06/28/2007 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 5: 'Say It Again, Spike'

I love the way you ended this chapter!

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Date: 06/28/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'

I like it that you made Spike take charge, I think that it was probably the only way they would have talked under the circumstances.

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Date: 06/28/2007 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

It looks like this will be another great story, but you do know that Sunnydale had more cemetaries than three, and that Spike's crypt was in RestField, right?