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Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 08:10 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Very Good. Love your writing.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 08:07 pm Title: Persistence of memory

LOL...i loved kirsten's "craptastic". intense conversation between the three of them. i can't wait to see what happens with the trance. you did a great job on this chapter. i learned so much about how things have happened and more about kirsten. fantastic as always..:)

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 08:00 pm Title: Persistence of memory

I cannot for the life of me figure out why you are nervous and wonder if it's any good. Please. It's awesome, and you know it!!!! LOL!!!

And AARRGH at the cliffhangers. I hate them.

This is an awesome chapter. I love how Spike figures it out finally.

I'm also curious as to how she got there etc. I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 07:56 pm Title: Persistence of memory

i knew it!!!! Kristen is spike and bufffy's daughter. boy I'm good. nuh uh, you are.! as always the update is awesome. can't wait for willow to get caught. i will wait anxiously for an update.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 07:40 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Yes, it was.

Everybody's reactions are appropriate to character. Nothing would get Spike's temper up like one of his family putting themself at great risk.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 07:25 pm Title: Persistence of memory

SQUEE!!! That was fabulous!!! Splendid and any other adjective that is similar because you did such a great job in telling Kirsten's story. Loved Buffy and Spike's reactions to the revelation of Dawn and Kirsten being their daughters, and most especially Spike's in the end when he's so pissed at her for taking such a huge risk.

Now I can't wait to find out more on these three and what's going on with Faith and the trance.

GREAT JOB!!!!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 06:58 pm Title: Persistence of memory

I love the story line, and it is more than freaking good....will be waiting for the next chapter. thanks

Reviewer: braat44 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 06:54 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Excellent update!! I'm glad we're getting closer to the truth of everything. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 06:52 pm Title: Persistence of memory

It's really freaking good. I loved the Spike and Kristen interactions the quick jump to concerned and upset daddy was great. I'm so glad you brought in Faith, she's just fantastic.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 06:39 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Enjoying... and full of such nice surprises.

Waiting for your next update.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 06:36 pm Title: Persistence of memory

EXCELLENT way of tieing those threads up. Ah yes Faith would be the logical choice since she is not affected by the spell. Though I think she could fill in alot of blanks even without it. Either way I hope they find the blood on Willow's hands and she become's hound snackies. *laughs* the way you let Kirsten give her secret away, was fantastic. You pegged Spike's reaction to the letter and facial expressions. I mean there he was touching his own daughter that was still in Buffy's belly. Gods that was incredible. Though he did not skip a beat telling her how she was like in big trouble for doing what she did and not to mention his anger boiling for the brooding one. Great chapter. I am loving how you are taking this. Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 06:26 pm Title: Persistence of memory

oh thank-you for posting......now onto reading it

Reviewer: GoofyMama99 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 06:23 pm Title: Persistence of memory

OMG! finally. you have no idea how happy i am to at least know a little bit about Kirsten. i'm loving this so, so much. thank you for this informative chapter. i really feel sorry for willow when they find out she's the one to blame for everything, either first hand or as an after effect of her spell. talk about being selfish.

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 06:19 pm Title: Persistence of memory

OMG YOU CAN"T STOP THERE!!!

LMAO! any freakin good? TRY FREAKING AWESOME!!!

Reviewer: Shelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 06:14 pm Title: Persistence of memory

This was a fantastic chapter!!! I knew Kristin was Buffy and Spike's daughter. I just knew it. You left alot of clues. Now they know again, that Dawn is too. This is getting really good. I can't wait to have Faith go into the trance and give them the answers. What about Willow? The Huntsman.
I look forward to each and every chapter. Keep it going.

Reviewer: Rider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 06:08 pm Title: Persistence of memory

DAMN!!!!
PLEASE continue, I'm really enjoying this story!
Excellent work by the way!

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 05:57 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Yeah!!! I Knew it!! She was their daughter!!!. **Doing Snoopy dance***
Don't be nervous because as always your writing is more than good, it's wonderful!!. You know, you wrote almost 100 chapters of this story and it didn't loose it's charm. I'm more in love with this fic with every new update. You are wonderful

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 05:32 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Amazing! So not expecting that! Wow! =)

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2005 - 04:21 am Title: Our memory is our coherence

This story is fabulous. I cannot wait for the next chapter...

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2005 - 10:18 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

Fabulous, yet again. I'm glad that everyone is finally beginning to figure out about the spell. And I'm intrigued by Kirsten. I want to know what she's really up to.

please don't make us wait too long for a new chapter-

Anna

Reviewer: hmm... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2005 - 03:01 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

excellent chapter!! I can't wait for that chat with Kirsten. It will be interesting to see how Willow's spell is revealed. Good luck with your arm!

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2005 - 09:50 am Title: Our memory is our coherence

I'm thinking there is going to be some serious carnage when Willow's spell is broken. Does it make me a bad person that the thought is making me a bit -okay, A LOT- giddy? I mean, seriously? Now that you've broken my heart all over again and spurred some fairly graphic fantasies involving gratuitous displays of chaos, death, extreme torture and great floods of type-o-say-Willow...can ya really blame me?

In case you haven't noticed, I was actually born a member of the Addams Family...a cousin...my twin bro's name is IT...which makes me....

Author's Response: Clinically insane? Deranged? Demented? Completely and totally lovable?

Reviewer: s Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2005 - 09:38 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

When the security guard tried to stop her, she looked up at him as she pinched Connor beneath the blanket and the baby’s howls started right on cue, Anya said, “sorry. His mother is in the back and he needs to nurse.”...Heeheee! I love Anya so much! She's just awesome! NOT that I approve of pinching babies.... Anyhooo...Very nicely done!

And yowser! Looks like Lawson's the only smart one of the lot, sending the minions to get dusted while he studies the group of fighters. Are we sure he didn't learn the vampiric lifestyle from Spike? ohnononono...plot bunny, ten o'clock. Quick! Hide your eyes! If you pretend it isn't there and don't attempt to feed it, it'll eventually go away...

Have I mentioned lately how much I like Kirsten? Soooo wanna know her story...her real story...

More soon- if you're arm's feelin' up to the task?

Author's Response: That plot bunny needs to be corralled and quickly. . . but there will be some information on Lawson forthcoming. . . . And never fear, Kirsten's story is about to be told -- as much as it can be told.

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2005 - 09:30 am Title: Grief fades in and out

Just read this chapter again and, damn girl, I'm bawling my eyes out. Poor Dawnie. Angel needs to die. Now. It needs to be very slow and excruciating. And Willow must be forced to watch as she will be suffering more. Oh, god, it's a toss up who's heart is broken more...Dawn's, Buffy's, Spike's.....or mine?

You so gotta make it all better...pretty please?

Should I be begging more? Bribing with unseemly amounts of shiny baubles and trinkets? Money? I don't actually have money, but...?

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2005 - 09:38 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

I think it's a fine update. Wish there was more...doing great. So much is going on; all totally engrossing. Thanks and hope there is ;more soon

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