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Date: 11/22/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

well, looks like we're finally gonna get some answers. my brain hurts from trying to figure everything out. i can't wait for more. please. as soon as you can, but don't rush if you can't.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 07:41 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

i can't wait for willow to get caught. she caused casey to be killed by angel. I'm sure the sh*t is going to hit the fan. Please update soon! Pretty please with a naked Spike on tiop.

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 06:57 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

I think it works great. I like how Wesley is figuring out what the spell effects. Interesting case of the blame game going around. I can't wait to sede if you have Willow realize her guilt ortry to exceuse herself.

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 06:32 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

Love this update. I assume that last line was from Spike. I think someone's in trouble now.

The mystery (?) of Kirstin's relationship with Spike and Buffy is is killing me. Her powers are intriguing and puzzling.

Remember to take care of yourself.

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 06:27 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

I think it all flows well.....looking forward to more.

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Date: 11/22/2005 - 06:14 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

OMG. I am waiting with baited breath for the other shoe to drop. What is going to happen when they discover Willow is the cause of all this, of Casey being killed, Dawn being injured. This is really getting good.
You did a wonderful job, as usual!!!!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 05:49 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

OKaaay... I'm sort of getting the connection, but I'm sort of confuzzled because it seems like Kirsten's there either without 'Dad's' permission or with the express instruction not to say who she is/where she's from. So... why has she come back? To help rectify the wonkyWillow spell? To fight the Hounds of Hell (damn, I so wanted them to be to do with her)? To battle Angel(us)? But Connor is comfy with her. Something else entirely?

And then there's this beautiful biological relationship that Dawn has with Spike. The emotion in their interaction is almost tangible. And, what's with the "... says I’m . . . . mother and Janet.” rambling?

And Wes has had a Eurika moment. Phew, I thought for a second Tara was about to have one too. I can see a lot of poop hitting the fan in the not too distand future...
*dons hard hat and pokes Niamh for pouting and not telling!*

Reviewer: caln76 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

I have been reading this fic from the very beginning. Fantastic idoes not even begin to describe it!

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

All works fine to me. But I'm your groupie and all...lol So Kirsten's going to have to explain, huh? Does that mean we're gonna get answers, too? Looks like they're starting to piece together bits of what the spell is, too. Looking forward to seeing how everything plays out.

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 05:35 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

very good, filling in lots of holes that i was wondering about, just waiting for when they figure out who cast the spell and why...and then uh oh! lol

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 05:23 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

is it time to kill willow yet? Because if she died, I really wouldn't feel badly about it. Really.

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Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 05:19 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

Such emotions running high and running fast. So many questions, so few answers to what is happening. Kirsten coming from afar to help out and try not to get caught...LOL yeah I think she is wicked busted. I think the rest of the gang are on to something too. Please please let one of them have an "lightbulb" to what has happened and to who did the bidding. Come hounds come let you feast upon the one who made this so, have a nice snack.

Take care of that arm and we will be waiting. Thanks for the update to keep us tided over.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 04:57 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

Figuring out the starting point for the spell was very important. Now, they really have to find out who.

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Date: 11/22/2005 - 04:50 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

I just wanted to say that this story is brillant. I eagerly anticipate each new chapter. I am so sorry that you are in pain, if there was anything I could do I would, not just to keep the story coming, but because it sucks when anyone is in pain. Hope things get better soon...and please keep writing.

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 - 04:49 pm Title: Our memory is our coherence

So glad you have had a couple of relatively painfree days. Love the results. The chappys are so long and yet so short at the same time. Great chappy!!!!!

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

I've never reviewed a story before, but I couldn't stand the idea of this story not continuing for lack of encouragement. I am truly impressed with this tale. The plot is well thought-out and consistent, the characterizations are great, and the writing itself is such a refreshing change from some of what's out there.
Thank you.

Author's Response: Believe me, its not the lack of encouragement at all. I've been so gratifyingly overwhelmed by the response to this story, you have no idea. The problem is the constant pain I've been in since I reinjured my arm. Getting the motivation to write is difficult, finding a way to ease the pain so the muse can come forth is some days, more than I can manage. But I am still writing, even if its a scene a day. . . . . don't worry, this will get finished. I had just hoped for a faster timetable. You are very welcome. And thank you for your kind words and encouragement.

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 10:06 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

I am awe struck. I have spent the last two days reading Origins and Origins - Revelation. I can't think of any fic I've ever loved more. I love how well you've developed the characters...and the plot just flows so evenly and is so engrossing. I am so sorry you have been in so much pain and hope you are doing lots better with your shoulder. I will eagerly be awaiting you next update. Thank you for a wonderful story; I can hardly wait to see Willow's comeupance. Anya and Giles are perfect. Is Cordy going to survive? Who is Kirsten. Ah, so many questions....

Reviewer: Lyns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 - 05:02 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

phew. it took me basically 48 hours with no breaks but i finally caught up on three whole months of missed updates and can i just say "wow". this story is even mroe fantastic than i could ahve hoped it would turn out to be, love the mating, the pregnancy, id forgotten all about kirsten, but now that she's back i'm all excited again and wondering how long she'll be hanging azround this time. Your plots are just fabulous, your characterisation flawless adn the story amazing beyond words. Love love love it Hope your shoulder stops acting up soon enough, and don't worry about not chucking out updates at the speed of light, work this good is worth waiting for.

Author's Response: 48 hours!! I can't imagine doing that. . . but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

wow! very good.. have a feeling things are getting ready to heat up!...lol

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 10:19 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

These sets of fiction that you have so marvolously penned have got to be the BEST thing I have ever read in the Spuffy genre. I am in total awe of your brilliance as a writer, and I thank you for writing what I only imagined in my dreams is the best written Buffy/Spike romance I have had the pleasure of reading. Thank you! I can't wait for the next chapter!

~ Amy

Reviewer: ComedyofErrors Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 10:14 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Going on strong. Thank you for continuing.

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Date: 11/16/2005 - 09:32 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

oh yes....what a great chapter....so full of goings on. Anya is soo damn funny!!! i love her. i love that Angelus doesn't listen to Dru....thats better for us!!! hehehe...........cna't wait to see hwat happens next. take care of that arm *hugs*

Reviewer: ariadnespider Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 09:02 am Title: Grief fades in and out

oh gods...dawns anguish. gods Niamh you put me right in that room with them. the hounds are waiting........*waits to see what happens* DAwn sobbing for her Daddy breaks my heart. what a scene. so heartbreaking and tender. you are an amazing writer!!!!
yeah, faith has arrived!!!!
take care of that arm and write when you can hun. we would wait lifetimes for you!!!!

Reviewer: konsuela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 - 06:20 am Title: Savage and serene in one hour

Hope your arm will be better soon. I realy hate to wait for another chapter. This is excelent story.

Reviewer: RandiGiles Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2005 - 10:54 pm Title: Savage and serene in one hour

This story just keeps getting better and better...love the dynamic between all the characters...you've devloped the relationships between everyone so well...I always look forward to more chapies...hope your arm is getting better

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