

Date: 06/25/2005 - 05:01 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
Reading this chapter was absolutely breathtaking! I could feel the love between Buffy and Spike. The raw emotion of finding your mate after such a long journey - to love in thought, word, and body. It was so moving! Making love - wow - if you could define that term somewhere this chapter would be its description. Marvelous!

Date: 06/25/2005 - 07:32 am Title: An ever fixed mark
This is by far one of the best if not THE best spuffy piece i have ever read. The storyline is amazing. especially the whole dawn being spike and buffy's daughter and darla being a potential...brilliant. oh and i LOVE the giles/anya thing....and OZ yay OZ. and oz/tara also quite brilliant. keep it going girl.

Date: 06/25/2005 - 07:23 am Title: An ever fixed mark
yes, at last they are one....they are bonded and let no man or demon try to come between them...Angel, Dru, Xander, and Willow....take that.......and go Giles go....get the girl..

Date: 06/25/2005 - 05:52 am Title: An ever fixed mark
Loved, loved, loved it....so simple and pure. Spike's reaction was beautiful.....I know I never have the time to review but wanted to let you know how much I've been enjoying the ride......All the best-Pattie(pooh or poohcorner)

Date: 06/25/2005 - 05:02 am Title: An ever fixed mark
Excellent chapter update. Very well written scenes of intimacy and love. You had 34 people review your last chapter? Very luck of you. It takes quite a few chapters before I get that many. Don't doubt yourself. You have a strong following, and there are a ton of us that faithfully read and will read the story. Look forward to the next update.

Date: 06/25/2005 - 03:12 am Title: An ever fixed mark
Wonderful chapter, Nia - I loved it... But I do every time :)) Loved the mating too. Hopefully this bond will be stronger than the Sire/Childe bond Dru helds over Spike. Loved the poem at the end of the chapter. And the poems you put in every time :) Thanks for updating.

Date: 06/25/2005 - 12:02 am Title: An ever fixed mark
loved it. great job. please post soon. this is amazing. loved it lots

Date: 06/24/2005 - 11:32 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
Powerfully Loving And So So Beautifully NIA.THERE MATING AND WORDS TO EACH OTHER WAS SO HOT AND BEAUTIFUL AT THE SAME TIME AND SPIKE POEM TO HER WAS SUCH A TEAR JERK THAT I WAS SO CLOSE TO CRYING.THEY ARE SO IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER THAT KNOW ONE WILL EVER BE ABLE TO COME THERE TIGHT BOND AGINE.What can i say nia you hit it out of the park agine with this beautiful awsome chapter.I Bow down to the queen

Date: 06/24/2005 - 11:02 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
This may sound so lame, but truly this brough tears to my eyes, it was so very beautifully written, sweet and romantic. Thank you for writting it and sharing it. Loved it!

Date: 06/24/2005 - 10:54 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
Whoaaa. That was one of the most beautiful, romantic chapters I have ever read. You have outdone yourself with this one. You have actually touched this somewhat jade and cynical heart of mine. Love it.

Date: 06/24/2005 - 10:05 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
I am still loving this story! It is one of my absolute favorites! I really enjoy how everyone seems to be getting along together and I feel sorry for Willow, I really hope that she can redeem herself but it really seems doubtful at this point in time! How will the rest of the Scoobies react to the claiming? Or will they even inform them? Please update soon!

Date: 06/24/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
This was so lovely. Sweet and sexy. A logical progression of their relationship. So - I'm assumig it's all going to go to hell in a handbasket next chapter? LOL Too many evil things out there for them to enjoy this for long.

Date: 06/24/2005 - 09:29 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
"i'll love you for the whole five minutes i have after your gone". that says it all right there...the dept of his love for her.......*sighs* it doesn't get much better that this Nia!!!! you continue to rock my world with this story

Date: 06/24/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
*wipes eyes*.........that was...the most beautiful. it was perfect. i'm going to go read it again.....*smiles*

Date: 06/24/2005 - 09:01 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
That was deeply romantic and erotic. Spike's devotion and adoration flowed off the page. This packed an emotional wallop, really lovely writing.

Date: 06/24/2005 - 07:51 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
Very sweet claiming scene. And the part later, two. A lot of love coming from both of them. Buffy finally has the assurance she needs that this time, with this man, she won't be left alone. And Giles, starting to admit his feelings, at least to himself. Now Xander just needs to move himself out of the picture, and everyone can be happy. Well, Xander might not be so happy, but who cares about that? Looking foward to seeing what the aftermath of the claim will be, if any. :)

Date: 06/24/2005 - 07:40 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
Absolutely beautiful - can't wait for more.

Date: 06/24/2005 - 07:40 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
If they could just bottle this kind of ecstacy and sell it, I would buy a case. Amazing. Beautiful. Incredible. So well done. I can't wait for more.

Date: 06/24/2005 - 07:29 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
keep going, don't stop! loving it more and more.

Date: 06/24/2005 - 07:20 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
Beautiful! The title fit perfectly.

Date: 06/24/2005 - 07:14 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
Hi Nia. I've been reading your stories for ages, but this is my first time reviewing. (I know...me bad girl! You can punish me as much as you want.) I just want to say how much I love your story and I look for an update practically every day, even though realistically I know it takes a few days. Anyway, the whole Origins series is one of my absolute favorite stories. I just wanted to let you know. And I promise to review from now on. :)

Date: 06/24/2005 - 07:14 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
you have to ask??? I truly love it :P

Date: 06/24/2005 - 07:12 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
*pants heavily* No fair.....that chap needed to come with a warning to bring a drool bucket! So so good....can't wait for more!

Date: 06/24/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
Very sweet. Made me wish my hubby would get home quick. Need to tell him how much I still love him after 18 years. You've pushed my romance buttons with this one!

Date: 06/24/2005 - 06:47 pm Title: An ever fixed mark
HOLY F'N WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just took a shower, now i need another one a cold one. That was beautiful,erotic, sensual, touching, and damn well written. "you are my star in the night" etc...I mean i am a melting blubbering mess here. The claiming was so intense. Buffy knowing it was what she wanted and yet struggled to find the words. Though she let go and mated with her forever mate. God damn that was indescribable. *bows down*... Giles on the move for Anya,but yet being a gentleman too. Good for him, not wanting to disrespect her like that asshole she is with now. Dumb him Anya go for the intelligent tweedy man. I bet he can give much better orgasms. *laughs*. Pat yourself on the back, it was well done and very well written. EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!