How beautifuly spike and buffy are even cute was win he ask her to be his mate I as almost in tears there so beautifully togather and so in love with each other and won't dawn be happy for her parents.Look's like angel and dru plane backfire on them agine to broke up spike and buffy and poor little angel won't be a happy camper.AM so loving win a planr blow's up in angel face now that buffy and spike will be mate's it will be even harder to break them apart.Love the close moment between anya and giles just loving there chemistry hope she dumps jerk xander fast and how cute was it win dawn was listen in on there convsation and jumping up in the air all the way from the steps to floor hmm are we sure she dosen't have special powers are slayer powers like her mom Hmm something to think about.So love this chapter but i love the whole origin story Nia so don't you dear change a thing cause Origin Revelation is a great story from the beginning and am sure even great in the end.So please don't change a thing to this great story Nia cause it already is a great story.BARVO BARVO BARVO NIA.TO A GREAT WRITER OFA GREAT STORY

Well I don´t like this chapter, I love it!!! You know, I was with my books, notes, pens laid on the desk, ready to start studying when I saw your update, and I just couldn't wait to read it. You got me hooked up with this story to the point that when I see a new update I drop whatever I am doing at that moment to read it. So please continue this amazing story, don't let me (and the rest of your fans) hanging

Another great Chapter. Hopefully Dru will leave and take spike's advice. Can't wait to see how spike and buffy do the mating ritutial. Please update soon and often. Looking forward to the next chapters

{Claps and cheers} Yeah ... he's said it. I'm sure she'll say yes too. {giggles gleefully} Yeah!!! Look forward to the next update.

Another wonderful chapter. I was very pleased that you didn't have Spike waiver when he had his confrontation with Dru. I also loved the growing interactions/feelings between Giles and Anya. I never liked the way Xander put her down and made her feel lesser. Can't wait for another chapter!!

Well, of course it's good. Love the Giles/Anya moments. Giles is very right--she does deserve better than Xander. And Dawn's reaction to it was cute, too. Great job with the Dru-speak. Sounded just like what she'd say. Liked how you had her react with Spike, and then Buffy's insecurity. Very nicely handled. Looking forward to seeing how Buffy reacts to Spike asking her to be his...

I love it!! And is a good story.

They are so good that I look everyday for updates and this story and the previous one are set on my reread list. Because when they are totally done I will reread them in there entirety. But you really should have ended this chapter with the claim . Because know I have to wait and waiting is so hard to do. cindy

Wow that was a surprise...I didnt expect her to show up so soon. Sorry I havent reviewed in a long time, I dont know how I feel so behind the updates... Anyways... I have noticed in a couple of your last chapters that their has been some missplaced letters in words or missing letters from some words. Also...love the Spuffy smut and conversations because well sex is good smut and fluff is also needed, lol. A couple of questions.. Why do you switch back and forth between using Angel and Angelus? Shouldnt it just be Angelus now? Also...you're not going to kill off Willow are you? What is going to happen to her.. and since she wont do the spell to restore Angels soul are you just going to kill Angel? Cause wouldnt the Powers want their champion to stay alive? Lol, its just like I said before, I hate Angel but I would rather see him broody and acting as a loser than dead. Im just wondering whats going to happen... I guess you will just have to update really soon so I can find out, lol! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: My apologies for the mistakes. I don't use a beta and so, at times, catching the misspellings and typos can be a problem. I'll try to be more careful in the future. Hopefully my mistakes won't put anyone off and make them stop reading. Why do I switch back and forth between Angel and Angelus? Because I don't believe they are two separate entities. Souled or unsouled, they are one and the same, and just as I don't make the distinction, neither do some of the characters. What he's called will depend solely on context. Willow's fate, and the fate of Angel/Angelus will depend solely on their actions, and may or may not hinge on each other. I wll reserve comment about Angel being the champion of the PTB for another time and place.

Hot damn! New Revs chappie! Now Giles knows about Dawn and Wes is off to find a demon surgeon. Dawn is having trouble grasping the full measure of her own status-- I don't blame her. I can't imangine what she must be feeling or what it's like to realize she never had those tender bonding moments with her real parents. Not surprising that she experiences moments of jealousy that Connor, despite his being a newborn, is getting what she never had. It's a very natural, very human response. And, oh my, whatever will happen next now that the couple are aware of Dru's presence? Can't wait for the next chapter!

well this isn't good for buffy and spike if drusilla is in the pictue now like they don't have enough problems already.With spike first love back it won't be good for buffy are spike am wondering what happend to her are is it a trap on drusilla part to come between buffy and spike with angel helping her to destroy them both which am thinking yes that she in this with angel.And the plot thicken hmm,love the scene between buffy and dawn it was there first mother and daughter talk loved it.Agine great chapter NIA hope your arm is geting better HUGS

Ack! Drusilla!! OK, I knew it was coming, but that's a hell of a cliff hanger to leave us with.