Date: 06/15/2005 - 05:00 am Title: An unhurried sense of time
Loved it.
Buffy and Spike as a young pair with a just born baby, all domestic. Dawn (the firstborn in a way) being jealous of the baby. Then, the other giving them time to do something together - they run into Angel and have to fight. I wonder what's about Drusilla. Spike was talking to her and gesturing wildly. - Wonder on which side she will be on. I don't think she'll be on Spike's and the slayer's side. I fear she'll be on Angel's. ANd for the chip coming out - it seems to be more complicated as it did seem to be first. Thanks a bunch for the update!
Date: 06/15/2005 - 04:11 am Title: An unhurried sense of time
Great update! Now Drusilla? And Lilah? trouble is definately brewing. Can't wait for more! :D
Date: 06/15/2005 - 03:40 am Title: An unhurried sense of time
Great story! I love how you are building up the tension between Giles and Anya, and how you managed to include all the characters in a realistic way. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 06/15/2005 - 03:13 am Title: An unhurried sense of time
brilliant - right from chap. one of Origins 1. Keep going!
Date: 06/15/2005 - 02:00 am Title: An unhurried sense of time
Aw, I hope there are more of those intimate Dawn, Buffy, and Spike scenes. It's so cool that you made her their daughter. And Angel was actually kinda creepy in this chapter when he called Cordelia...unlike the episode with Wesley, lol. And the lack of any Willow mention is alarming...I wonder what she's planning. =)
Date: 06/15/2005 - 12:15 am Title: An unhurried sense of time
Ohhhhh boy...Dru is back and this is going to get really complicated! This was another absolutely fantastic update!
Date: 06/14/2005 - 11:39 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Oh wow!!! That was a great update!!!! Loved it all, and the endings starting to tear at me....why's Spike talking with Dru? Crap!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!!
Date: 06/14/2005 - 10:20 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
how could you introduce dru into this. things were actualy going well for the others. oh well more angst. hehehe ;)
Date: 06/14/2005 - 10:20 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Great chapter update. Look forward to more. Nice chapter to read. The interactions continue to grow. I wonder what the whole Drusilla bit is about at the end. I soooo hope that Buffy doesn't think Spike is leaving her for Dru.
Date: 06/14/2005 - 09:59 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Great cliff hanger. Dru in the picture. Will it make Buffy jealous. I should hope so!!! Looking foward to the rest of the story.
Date: 06/14/2005 - 09:51 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Awesome chapter, as always! I love this story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06/14/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Ahhhhhhh domestic god and goddess at the grocery store. Shit if I could take spike to the store, I might actually like being there. *laughs*. Damn Dr. Thomas is into bones and not brains. well darn. Anyways, I hope wesely finds something. Ewwww Cordy having to deal with that asshole on the other end of the phone. YIKESS would of made me get the wiggins. Nice suspense there. Oh Angel such a putz, would totally be all thinking he was the shit and pulling out his minions. *rolls eyes*. WHAT is this nasty cliffhanger here, not feeling the luv on that one *laughs*. Anya being quiet, hmmmmmm did she finally decide to dump that piece of shit. Gods I hope so. Maybe this time with her, Giles and baby will be a good lil seed being planted *no pun intended* Excellent Chapter as always. I am going to go nuttier than i am already wandering what is about to happen since Dru came into the picture.....
Date: 06/14/2005 - 09:03 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Cruel cliffhanger, Nia!!! Still following this great story, girl! What happens next? Don't make us wait too long. Love, Adriana :))
Date: 06/14/2005 - 08:43 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Oh dear goddess what's going on with Dru?? I got this really bad feeling in the pit of my stomach about this. Believe me, this ficlet is amazing and right now you have me sitting on the edge of my seat. You and your amazing writing had my stomach in knots when Buffy was searching for Spike. More, please!
Date: 06/14/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
would you stop with the insecure bit. this story is amazing. you are a great author. this is how the sixth season should have went. keep up the great work. please post soon. great job!!!!!
Date: 06/14/2005 - 08:30 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Wow, great chapter. I am so glad they finally told Giles about Dawn. Please don't leave us in suspense for too long about Drusilla. Update soon.
Date: 06/14/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Drusilla. Not now. Not with Buffy looking on. Oooh you! Now I need another update - quick!!! You've got me all pins and needley.
Date: 06/14/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Enjoying the update. Angelus-playing the slow torture game.
Date: 06/14/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Man, is it going to get bad with Dru. This does not look good for our happy couple. Loved the scene in the grocery store. That was very sweet. The phone call to Cordy, I got goosebumps. Great chapter!!
Date: 06/14/2005 - 07:30 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time
Uh oh...Dru...this could be bad. Love the scene in the grocery store. Cute little bit of domesticness. Like how you're developing the Dawn plot, too, with having Giles read the journals and the little interchange with Buffy and Dawn over Connor. The scene with Cordy and the cellphone was way creepy. Gave me little chills. Yet another great chapter!
Date: 06/14/2005 - 03:39 pm Title: Wisdom lingers
I'm still reading!! I really like that Darla was a potential. That's cool. But, I do have one (or more) questions? Evidently Dawn has no superpowers, like increased strength. Her and Connor were both derived via the same means (Vampire/Slayer [sorta]). So is Connor going to be superpowerless or will Dawn develop some or...? gah!
Date: 06/13/2005 - 01:02 pm Title: Wisdom lingers
forgot about what this might mean for dawn too. love spike being the conserned father and taking care of his niblet. lol at giles expecting the worst for bring up the removal of the chip. buffy and spike had a good laugh and needed it. :) that was a really funny phone call from angelus. poor guy didn't accomplish what he wanted. can't shake em all up like he did with willow. loveed this chapter and can't wait for the next one
Date: 06/13/2005 - 12:48 pm Title: Knowledge is power
hehehhe....skirt girl......yeaaaaa...giles is back. i missed the g-man. its nice ot see some normalcy in the summers' house......dawn with hte phone attached to her head etc.....well, miss willows got a plan...we all know how well those go....oh yeaaaa dru is coming!!!!! wiked job on dru nia....haven't seen anyone who writes her as well as you. holy crap batman......what a revelation giles told. loved the names of the others....*wink,wink* TY soooo darla was a potential.....what is it about those aurelian men??? angelus got willow good. he is sooo good at that. i must say i love angelus. angel i could stake on site but angelus.......i just love him. great chapter. full of wonderful stuff!!! oh and by the way....i think buffy is pregnant already. :)
Date: 06/11/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: Wisdom lingers
*hugs back* Not reading these anymore? I'm not even going to respond to that, lol. You are such a great storyteller and will *always* have my "readership" (there has to be a better word for that). Loved this chapter and as usual can't wait for the next one! =)
Date: 06/11/2005 - 05:21 pm Title: Wisdom lingers
Well you, for one, have me still reading. Your story is entirely too entertaining to stop reading it. Sorry about your arm, hope it feels better. Don't you just hate when real life gets in the way of your fic writing? Know I do. Good update and get another on when you feel up to it.
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