
Date: 05/07/2005 - 10:03 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
First I have always loved the song by Phil Collins. It has one of the best drum beats. Now for the story. Well you have added some more the herbs and the pot is really brewing now. HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!! Angelous being out there. Go Tara with her spells. I would of been nuts like buffy too, feeling he was out there. *shivers ewwwwwww*. Awesome spell with the sunlight. Poor Spike over doing it. But damn you can't keep a good man down. I hope that he takes the blood and gets healed. EXCELLENT chapter Nia. loved the line" do you wanna be the kettle or the pot" *laughs hysterically* i am egerly awaiting the potion to be ready.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 09:40 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
Excellent as always. Hurrah for the ball of sunshine trick. Glad someone was able to get it right. lilpuff
Date: 05/07/2005 - 07:21 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
Hmmmm, I think Spike would be more healed now then he is......other then that I think you've done a great job......
Date: 05/07/2005 - 06:28 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
Loved it. Most excellent. Can't wait for more. I was surprised that Buffy didn't insist that Spike drink from her. Guress I'll just have to wait and see what happens next.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 04:43 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
I would like to see Rileys reaction to B/S. I was really pissed off by Buffys treatment of Spike in 'As you were' and Riley left Buffy feeling ashamed and humiliated. I'd like him to come back with Sam this time he can bring the doctor.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 04:30 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
It's difficult to think of suggestions with this being so bloody good. I dd think it would be a fittng punishment if one of the 'enemies' called to kill Spike ended up killing Willow. I'm sill not sure if Willow was responsible for Angels fall from grace. Everyone assumes it was love for his son, but I don't think he's that sensitive. It always needed sex or a spell or happy pills in the show. If Angel turned Willow she could lose all her powers and be taken by the huntsman. A turned Willow would think she was invincible, it'd be fun to see her as a minnion. Whatever you do I'm it'll be great.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 02:50 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
Hi hun, I'm no expert, but I don't know why you aren't sure about this one. I love your story. How Spike stood up and defended Connor against Angel. Dear Tara throwing sun balls. . Yes, Spike has to get the chip out. It's the only solution. If they want to have children of their own, he must be able to defend his family against humans.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 02:23 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
chapter was great. I einjoyed it. Please continue to update soon and often
Date: 05/07/2005 - 12:37 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
I liked the chapter and didn't find anything wrong with it...just the right amount of info and mystery...I also liked Tara's power coming out so strongly...she's one powerful witch...she just needs to get more confident in her skill...overall great chapter with the right amount of info. Can't wait for the next one!!!
Date: 05/06/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
Can't wait till spike get's better and has the chip remove than he would be on even ground with angleus.He will be in the shock of his life win he find's out that spike can his behind.Loved buffy trying to get spike to drink from her so he can get better fast but his being to stubborn about it.That's spike for you always puting buffy first than himself and she was right about giles not being a problem at all since his the one looking for a doctor for him now xander is another story all togather.You don't have to worry nia cause the whole chapter was great just as the story is
Date: 05/06/2005 - 11:07 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
great job but then again that's no surprise. keep up the great work.
Date: 05/06/2005 - 10:57 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
I was kinda freaked out about angelus being outside the home like a creepy stalker guy...*shudder* Good chapter!
Date: 05/06/2005 - 10:25 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
another fantastic chapter. Angel tormenting them was classic. I wish Spike would just get better already - he's a stubborn brat isn't he? Sounds like the group is gelling. I really like that. :)
Date: 05/06/2005 - 10:08 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
Not to worry. This story is coming along fine. Well written and good flow.
Date: 05/06/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
oh this chapter is great, and you know it *grin* You're not capable of writing something bad. The ball 'o sun ruled! I loved Buffy and spike debating about the chip and what if it was their child. great job
Date: 05/06/2005 - 09:49 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
I thought it was amazing :)
Date: 05/06/2005 - 09:49 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
rana has always had this great way of expressing everything that going on in a chapter far better than i so........what she said....LOL
Date: 05/06/2005 - 09:45 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
GO TARA......angelus is stalking around the house. goes up to buffys window. sees spike....HAHAHAHA. called him a traitor...*giggles* love this chapter. i just loved the convo between buffy and spike. so very real and...homey. they are a great couple and i love what you ahve done with them. i'd vote for the initiative taking the chip out cuz hey....hate riley. just want you to know that i miss giles and i want him to come home. oh and how cute that spike is worried about taking buffys blood while shes having her monthly....awesome and can't wait for hte next update hun
Date: 05/06/2005 - 09:31 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
Great Chapter
Date: 05/06/2005 - 09:13 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
I loved this, Nia! The suspense you built with Angelus outside the house was just phenomenal! Even though, logically we know he can't get in, emotionally you had my heart racing a mile-a-minute. When Buffy, Tara, and Wes were talking downstairs and Spike growled, my stomach lurched. And the image of a steadfast, but weak Spike holding baby Connor while aiming a crossbow at Angelus was just awesome! That image should totally be immortalized, because it represents the theme of this story - protecting family, even if from those whom you were once close to. Loved it!!! I can't wait to see what kind of plan they develop to further strengthen their defenses and get Spike's chip out. Wonderful, exciting, angsty, moving, amazing chapter!
Date: 05/06/2005 - 08:46 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
Can't say how much I love Angelus, you hit right on the ball. Especially, love him standing outside looking in at Spike. True psycho-evil vampire himself.
Date: 05/06/2005 - 08:39 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
*lol*, nope, Giles isn't going to be a hurdle at all, is he? More like a possible solution :-) But it's in a way good to see Spike so worried about the watcher's reaction. The more he worries about that, the happier it'll make him once he finds out Giles is way ahead of them, 'cos his worrying means the man's oppinion matters to him.
Love that Tara was able to do the ball-of-sunshine spell. Shows what an ignorant amateur Willow is, after all SHE messed up in a bit way when she tried her hands on that one.
Buffy's thoughts about who she blames for Spike getting hurt were a great touch too. Can't wait to see what she's gonna do once she finds out who's really responsible for that. Somehow I doubt Willow is going to be back in their good graces anytime soon. Maybe never, would serve her right!
Fab chapter! Take care not to hurt yourself if your arm is smarting again, let us wait a few days longer for an update if it helps. You getting better is more improtant!
*hugs* dia
Author's Response: Thanks sweetie, glad you liked it. I don't think anyone's going to be happy about what Willow did.
Date: 05/06/2005 - 08:31 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
I adore this story. I'm in the middle of Archive Days over at BBF so I don't have time right now to do you justice on a review this weekend, but please know that I really do love this story and I think you're doing a fantastic job with it.
Author's Response: Any response is good. I'm just grateful you took the time out to read and review. Thanks!
Date: 05/06/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
"Where's m'blood woman?" lol I love that. It was great how you had them all working together to deal with Angelus. They've become quite a team. And good thinking on Tara's part. Buffy and Spike still arguing about whether ot not he's going to drink more from her. Can't help but wonder who's going to cave first with those two stubborn mules. Great Angelus characterization there again, too.
Author's Response: Yeah, that's one of my favorite lines of his. Argh. . . LOL
Date: 05/05/2005 - 07:30 am Title: A hard day's night
Oh great chapter...confused me at first when you already had Buffy and Tara with the baby and then introduced the siren before the wesley/spike talk......so master a-hole is back in town......