Date: 03/26/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Last remaining light
My pulse is racing and I'm in danger of heart palpitations. What has Willow done? This is soooo not good. Update soon. Please??? Otherwise when you read the news about the mom found dead of a heart attack over fic on her computer, you'll know what happened.
Date: 03/26/2005 - 05:54 pm Title: Last remaining light
Ahhhhhhh!!! That was so freakin' awesome!! The ending was so incredible. I love the twist on the Ats cannon...so very conceivable.
Date: 03/25/2005 - 11:57 am Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
Things gonna be bumpy? *wonder* ... We'll see. Loved the chapter, loved Dawn's POV: Awe, Spike, his girl is a woman now, huh? And the lovemaking was hot. I said it before: Great chapter!
Date: 03/24/2005 - 01:13 pm Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
great chapter niamh,Love the heat between buffy and spike.And loved how much dawn wanted spike approvel so much.
Date: 03/24/2005 - 03:29 am Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
WOW!!! The Angel/Darla scene still gets to me....I cry like mad for her and the love she has for her baby (and the knowledge that it's only because of the shared soul)...it just breaks my heart. Spuffy....wow. I also liked the Dawn scene, very sweet. Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 03/23/2005 - 11:07 pm Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
Oh my god, Nia... I have come undone. This chapter is so heartbreaking and hopeful. Filled with such complex emotions. I was tearing up when Dawn came down the stairs, and in full out tears when Angel and Darla were conversing on top of the building. How fitting is it that such a momentous ocassion as Dawn's first dance would occur after Dawn has discovered who her parents are? This was so moving. That Spike and Buffy were playing the roles they actually owned. Oh gosh, I can' t stop the tears. And Darla's desperate pleas to Angel regarding the loss of life within her body. Wonderful use of some very poignant and important canon lines. I hope you write more of Darla's plight. I was floored by Julie Benz's performance on Angel. She was not used nearly enough. And you write Darla spectacularly. I get goose bumps reading this scene. The scene between Buffy and Spike in the bathroom was so precious, so sexy, so amazing. He does love taking care of her doesn't he? Lucky, lucky girl. Wonderful chapter Nia. Just beautiful. I'm going to need to stock up on kleenex this weekend. If this chapter is indicative of the bumpiness we face, I'm gonna need them. Thank you for such a beautiful chapter.
Date: 03/23/2005 - 10:53 pm Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
Love it....more please....this is a really unique take on the buffyverse...can't wait for more updates
Date: 03/23/2005 - 10:17 pm Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
I loved Spike's reaction to seeing Dawn--very fatherly and sweet. And the last line at the end was very aww worthy. :) The scenes with Darla and Angel are just as powerful here as they were on the show, and I'm impressed with how well you weave the dialogue into the story. A lot of authors try to, but it's rarely done well. (It does help that you're using the characters the dialogue was intended for...) Everything with Darla and Connor was gut-twisting, and you've managed to keep it at that level. Great chapter as always!
Date: 03/23/2005 - 09:35 pm Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
Another wonderful chapter, Nia, but why do I not feel good about Dawn's date???Suspense building?
Date: 03/23/2005 - 08:30 pm Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
so glad dawns having a good time. she deserves it. i never saw the eppy with darla and angel but that was great. buffy and spike yummy sex was...well its always awesome. you always do that justice. :) i love the way spike takes care of her. thanx so very much for posting tonight Nia.
Date: 03/23/2005 - 08:25 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
spike and buffy met casey. went better than i expected. good on spike to give buffy the extra "dosh" giles had. buffy and dawn had a nice time shopping. thats good. shows progress for buffy. willow being all stalker girl is giving me the creeps. hope she gets hers and soon. now dawn knows the truth. wonder hwat she does with it
Date: 03/23/2005 - 07:23 pm Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
Just love this story. Please continue to upcate soon and often.
Date: 03/23/2005 - 06:03 pm Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
Well now that hottness can sure melt the new fallen snow in my yard today. That said. Dawn looked so beautiful. Spike trying to be all host with most. Good for him wanting to meet the parents. As it should of been. Him helping her down the steps and telling her she was beautiful and all grown up. *tears* brings back some good memories. I can sympathize with Buffy's ickies. But hey now if the curse could be that fun then I would not complain about alittle cramping. Nia you wrote that scene like chocolate satin pie..smooth, rich, and tastey. Very nicely done. Who needs steam when you have the hottness that was going on in that bathroom. Great desciption of the events. I could just imagine Spike's eyes with mischeif in them. *grins*. Now for Darla, I am not and was never an Angel fan. Though the way you described how Darla was feeling, oh gods how heart wrenching. Since I did not watch the show I have not idea how this plays out, so I am eager to know if she is able to remember. Will she be able to love this child. Will Angel help her, will he be a man for once and help her through this? The baby needs him but so does Darla. I hope she finds some solace. Then there is the Dawn, having a great moment at the dance. Oh sweet that she looks over at the boy and just thinks he is the cutest thing on two legs. How she is so thankful for Spike not being "hard father figure". Those "gods of the first date" must of just heard her plea. *grins*. Excellent Chapter Nia, nice play of emotions. Keeping us wanting more and more and more. But what is the rest of gang up to? The shit hitting the fan soon? *rubs hands together* can't wait to find out.
Date: 03/22/2005 - 07:44 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
OH MY GODS! I knew we were building up to this, but to see it in black and white is just amazing. I didn't realize, though, that so much would have been prearranged by the monks to enable this to occur. I mean...so many events would have to have been strategically in place. Good gods. Please don't tell me Spike was arranged to fall in love with the slayer. Oh man. I just hope that, when Dawn does disclose this info to Buffy and Spike, that Spike won't doubt his "sudden" development of feelings for Buffy the previous year. We all know how much Spike enjoyed being the Initiative's guinea pig. Not. I can only imagine how he might react to finding out he and Buffy have been playing the part of two puzzle pieces for some monks for the better part of 2 years. Ugh. I wouldn't want to be in Dawn's shoes for the upcoming convo. So glad that Dawn now knows for sure where and who she came from though. That has got to be such a burden lifted from her shoulders. To know that she belongs somewhere must make everything else seem bearable. *hugs Dawnie* Willow's ominous musings have me worried a bit, especially with Giles out of town. Well, I'll wait to see how that develops. Loving, loving, loving this story so much Nia. I can't wait to see how and when Dawn decides to tell Spike and Buffy, her parents, that it's a bouncing, bubbly, hormonal girl! Heee! That conversation is going to be sooo good! Thanks for another incredible update sweetie! *hugs you*
Date: 03/19/2005 - 08:19 am Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
Ok so I read these so fast that I foget things. I see Wesley as pulling out a book to help Darla(nice choice on the book very helpful). Spike interigating Casey was straight out of my high school days. My father would do that to me for the boys who would come to call. Willow is making my skin crawl. I have a hard time reading her. Her non moral character is horrifying. You are really capaturing her character well and bringing that out on the page. Excellent. Giles's instincts are kicking in as usual on things. I just hope Willow gets whatever she does thrown back at her. That she gets a clue about the fact that Buffy and Spike love each other and that is not going to change. Ok I think I remembered things this time.
Date: 03/19/2005 - 08:01 am Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
lol - you're lying - the story was good before that chapter *smile* - it only got better :-D ... I hope, no´, I think this are happy tears Dawn is crying now. Very good chapter.
Date: 03/19/2005 - 07:31 am Title: Clutching stardust
Glad to see that Oz is fitting in - and not taking Willow's side. Wonder what Willow is trying now ... with all the parcels she gets and stalking Buffy and Spike
Date: 03/19/2005 - 07:03 am Title: A day in the life
I'm late, but I'm glad to see you continued. Going to read the rest that's online. I misse it :-D
Date: 03/18/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
Well, I certainly hope Dawn's crying for a good reason. :) I love how Spike is so protective of her and how very "normal" Buffy seems in all of this. I can't wait to see how it all comes together. Awesome job! :)
Date: 03/18/2005 - 09:36 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
didn't take long before willow turned to her evil tricks to hurt buffy and spike by trying to make spike look bad in buffy eyes.hope buffy dosen't fall into her trap and beileve's spike would ever do that to her.knowing how much he loves her and would never do anything to hurt buffy are dawn.loved that dawn parents are buffy and spike me thinks dawn love's it to are she wouldn't be crying tears of joy.hope she tells buffy and spike the good news soon.loved Casey can't wait to find out more about him.great chapter nia
Date: 03/18/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
"she was going to end up shrieking the shop down, piercing eardrums for a five hundred yard radius. " Ha! Well, that's definitely Dawn. Nice chapter.
Date: 03/18/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
Great chapter. Spike and Buffy were not as hard on Casey as I thought. I am glad Spike had that conversation with Casey, to let him know what he expects from him. Good for Casey for not backing down, he seems to care about Dawn. He faced her parents and that's a lot for a young teen. So she is theirs!!! wow, when will they find out, how will she tell them? I am waiting for the next chapter. good job on this one.
Date: 03/18/2005 - 06:12 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
OMG! I can't believe it, finally she found out! Now what? Will she tell them? Hide it? Argh! Please don't leave me hanging for too long! Yay!
Date: 03/18/2005 - 04:25 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
Dawn knows the truth now. Is she planning on telling anyone? I'm interested to see how Spike and Buffy react. Loved the bit with Casey, especially how he reacted to the name "Spike." lol The whole interaction between Casey and Spike reminded me of my own high school dating days. I liked how Casey didn't flinch, but was just respectful. And bad Willow. Bad.
Date: 03/18/2005 - 03:34 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
OMG *laughs so hard*. Nia that was pure greatestness. I can picture Weasley looking around for a book trying to figure out what to do for Poor Darla. Then Spike and Buffy putting the crunch to poor dawn and casey. brilliant bloody brilliant. I am sure all of us ladies can relate to that in some way. *laughs again*. Good for Casey though not showing signs of being affraid of Spike and giving a good answer. Nice scene. That Willow, grrrrrrrr I knew she was not going to leave quietly. Whatever she has planned I hope it blows up in her face three fold. Glad that Dawn and Buffy had a good experience this time shopping. I can't wait to see Dawn in her dress. Nia that was a killer cliffhanger, but YES YES YES Dawn is made from Spike and Buffy. Gods that is so f'n awesome. now how does she tell them?? how do the react?? Ohhhhhh dear me oh my...I will wait and see...Thanks for posting. I know every one will be glued to the TV this weekend watching James in his movie Cool Money.Whoooooooo a great way to start the weekend. A fantastic chapter by Nia and James is on TV...doesn't get much better. Ok it does but you all know what i mean *laughs*
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